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A fitting Halloween story, spooky with all the elements of the holiday. While we aren't meant to like Erik, I did find, at the end, that I hoped everything would turn out well for him.

Unusual story. I don't know if this is where you were headed, but I believe neither Dennis nor Wade will ever be seen again,

I just found this story and loved it. I also suspected he was a ghost toward the end of the dining car scene. So sad. I cried for the last few paragraphs and still wish he and Nix could have found a way to be together.

I am so sorry to see this story end. I absolutely love it and look forward to Benny's story. Thank you for bringing us this world and these people. They hold a definite place in my reading favorites memory.

Loved it. Wonderful, as always. Dav and Ellis are my favorite couple. I really liked that Ellis wasn't just a victim this time; that was getting really old. Now I find I'm really curious about what the doctor has to tell them. I also hope they don't punish Brad too severely for what was essentially a stupid - although almost fatal - - mistake. I mean, he's not a mean or small-minded person and I think deserves a second chance.

Great and frustrating as heck. Just when I thought it was going to wind down! While Ellis more at risk, it sounds like Dav might also be in danger...from Ellis.

That was incredibly hot. I think it's about time Ellis got to take charge. I have been trying to work out what is going on with Ellis and what's with all the changes. It's fun to speculate but I can't wait to read the real (?) story.