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    Love?

    joecarlson commented on joecarlson's story chapter in Love?

    new chapter is OUT, finally... sorryyy for the wait.... i hope you would check it out, I will update it again before the end of January. sorry:(
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    (I know it has been quite long since I last updated the story, sorry about that. You are encouraged to read from Chapter 1 first, I promise the next chapter will be uploaded by the end of January, reviews are highly appreciated.) In the first English lesson, I taught him the basic vocabulary that were essential for his survival in this English-speaking country; from ‘apple’ to ‘zebra’, from ‘zero’ to ‘thousand’. It was actually quite frustrating that he failed to pronounce most of the wor
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    Good things: 1) Riveting Plot 2) Characters are well-developed 3) Smooth story-telling Thanks for ur fabulous work =)
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    I can't agree more
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    Love?

    joecarlson commented on joecarlson's story chapter in Love?

    thanks a lot =)))))))))) i promise that the next chapter will be out by Friday =)
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    Arrival

    joecarlson commented on joecarlson's story chapter in Arrival

    thanks you so much=) check out the new chapter=)
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    In the next 10 hours upon his arrival, my mum, Jake and I tried our very best to show that we were harmless, totally harmless. We kept on telling Axel the reason why he was here was to help us farm, not to be a slave for us. Even though the wall between us was still visible, both the tension and anxiety have eased. For instance, the scared facial expression on his face was gradually replaced by a smiling one. We were delighted that the progress was tremendous. Truth be told, deep down, I wa
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    The story sets in World War II. A German prisoner of war named Axel was sent to work in Xavier's farm in Northern Canada. Xavier, the farm boy, fell helplessly in love with the Nazi soldier. What would happen to the two of them?
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    A truck stopped in front of my house. And here they came - the prisoners of war from the satanic Nazi Germany. To my surprise, all of the PoWs were teenage boys no more than 18 years old. There were a dozen of them and their gazes locked strongly on me, so strong that it made my quiver. Behind all these blue eyes, there hid the same message – please don't pick me. All of them looked as if they were all going to the guillotine. You could literally see the colors of despair and trepidation on thei
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    the story is good， i love it=)
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    justin in GFD
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    lost in shadow, certainly
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    i am listening to RUN by katharine mcphee. it's a cover of snow patrol's
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