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It touched my heart, it really did. I was not expecting this kind of end. They were so much in love and made through the toughest time of their life together and then...Adam was gone. His last note made me very emotional. Very nice story.

I love desert too...hehehe. Very cute story, end was really good. I had a smile on my face after reading it. loved it:-)

Oh God! Tell me, are Soubi and Ryo are going to be separated? What would be Soubi's decision? I forgot to thank you for posting next chapter so fast, it was a very nice surprise. My inner feelings tell me that Soubi will help Sei. And does Sei is doing all this for power or her intentions are far dangerous for Ryo and Soubi's relatioship? My both favorite guys are going through so much. You better update soon sui. I will wait for the next chapter. I loved this chapter and will wait know where this party would lead Ryo and Soubi's life. Great work sui:-)

In the beginning of the story Soubi was a mess but now the way he dealt with such critical situations, I'm proud of him. The beginning was a relief and then Soubi did the right thing to return that last thing related with Rin. But I was miffed with Ryo for overreacting on those photographs. I thought this would lead to a big argument but Soubi handled the situation with great patience. The lines where Soubi was thinking how to hold things together between him and Ryo was showing his dilemma and helplessness. When it seemed that now everything is back to normal, Ryo overreacted once again. When Soubi entered their bedroom and found Ryo sleeping I also cursed Ryo along with him. In the morning when Ryo was talking with sakura about his being gay and Soubi, I knew that Soubi would have been listening to all this and i was right. Soubi is definitely hurt. Soubi is doing his best to make things work between them under the changed circumstances but he's just a human being and if Ryo behavior continues like this then it won't be long when soubi would lose his patience and they will lose each other. I don't know how would Ryo make this good or would even do something or not. I hope and pray they would make through this rough time and be together. And about those photographs who did that? Was it Ryo's mom? As usual loved this chapter and will eagerly waiting for the next one.

Hey Lisa, Let me clarify that Zune's mom had no idea that Matthew lives in the same city they were going to shift, she was as shocked as Zune seeing him in front of them. I guess you are royally pissed at poor Kev but don't worry he'll apologize to Zune in next chapter. As usual thanks a lot for your review:)

Hey GJ, I know there's a lot of questions but don't worry next chapter would have every answer so just wait and watch...read I mean. Thanks a lot for your review:)

You will get your every answer in the next chapter which would be quite long in comparison of my previous chapters but I'll try to update soon. I got your PM. I was literally on cloud nine. Thanks for your praising words and thanks a lot for your review:)

Yeah you are right, Zune is a mess right now but conditions would be better for him in the next few chapters. He will tackle the situations as best as he could. But if Zune thinks he's been to a tornado then it's not over yet, there's a lot to come. Thanks, Stephen, thank a lot for your review:)

You know Sui it's so rude and cruel to leave such a cliffhanger at the end of an amazing chapter, huh? Bad, very bad. I loved the whole chapter. That newspaper thing was very good. I have told you earlier and I'm telling you again, these small things takes your chapter to another level. I really really love them. The scene Ryo opens the door and Soubi hugs him and cries is done brilliantly. You showed Soubi's love, pain, insecurity very well throughout the chapter. I like Sasha who listened to unstoppable tirade of drunk Soubi who's now irrevocably in love with Ryo. As much as i hate it's end (LOL), this was the perfect place to end it. Whatever Soubi asked and said to Ryo in last scene, I was feeling connected to him like it was me who was asking those questions to Ryo. I'm not taking sides who is wrong and who's right but for a unknown reason I'm sure if I would have been at Soubi's place I would have done the exact same thing. I don't know what would be Ryo's answer but I'm literally praying that it's a NO. They both can maintain a long distance relationship too as Ryo is not going to shift very far but I have a feeling that it's not going to happen. Here is a VERY GOOD offer for you Sui, I'll give you lots of lots of chocolates if you'll PM me what would be Ryo's answer. I swear I won't tell a word to any of your readers, God Promise. Think about it:P I don't think I need to say that I'm loving it. Again amazing work Sui, Keep it up:) Take care.

Happy Birthday:)

Chapter 8: Last surprise of the night Zune “Stuff the hottie in the BMW and let’s go,” Vicious Smile commanded the two guys who had clenched my arms as tightly as they could. All my efforts, my every scream, was doing nothing to help me get out of their clutches. I was worried about Edward, who was lying unconscious a few steps away from me. I wanted to reach out to him but those assholes were dragging me in the opposite direction, towards the BMW. And then I heard the unmistakable soun

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As usual amazing work. The ending lines 'I'm a little red rose so delicate and weak. Now I've become a red thorn rose that can never be reached' contained the essence of this poem. Weak Red rose was not weak anymore. Loved it. Take care, I'll wait for the next poem in this series.

I guess it was different from your previous poems of 'Menace collections'. I found this poem romantic. It was a short story me to and i loved each and every word of it. It was hard for me to pick up my favorite lines but I found few, 'I wasn't strong enough to see you again, so I walk away I walk past your home, past the light, and into the dark Aimlessly walking away from the only warmth in my heart' and 'Your temperature melted my snow Melting my solid heart to liquid And finally I was warm again' These were my favorite lines. End was just perfect. My favorite poem of your collection so far. Thanks for sharing it with us:)

How nicely you have described the meaning of melancholy in just few but powerful words. There wasn't a better way to show her loneliness and sadness via this amazing song (and my personal favorite), 'My heart will go on' from Titanic. Great Job Menace:) I loved it.

It was really nice, sad but nice. I felt a strange kind of pain while reading it. I don't know why. The lines 'I’ve searched the desert far and wide I’m so lonely I want to die I’m so cold and I’m so dry. The only sounds I hear are my little cries' are my favorite in this poem. Nice job:)

Hey Menace, Honestly, I'm not much into poems but as I read this first poem of your collection, I'm in love with it. It has such a deep meaning, so thoughtful of you. The lines, 'I smile with happiness, while something on my eyes appears in a form of tears', 'Since a boy like me can never catch your eyes, When I wake up from this dream, then your only saying is a goodbye' and 'I’m lost in this endless dream, only thinking of you When the dreams end, our fate becomes undo' are my favorite lines in it. You are amazing. And can't stop myself from asking, are you seriously just sixteen???? Great work!

Well, whether Edward loves Zune or not? To know the answer you'll have to wait for very long. There's happened in Zune's life in just one night but there's one surprise is still waiting for him.My next chapter is with my proof-reader and will be up soon. Thanks and take care Rajat and yes I got your PM.

I'm glad that Kiss scene turned out so well. I actually worked really hard to write it. I'm happy to know that you liked it so much.Thank you:)

Thank you Rajat for your praising words:)

Ooops I talked about Becca a bit earlier or say a review earlier, lol. Okay so let me repeat myself, there's more to come about Becca. You are right her husband is a complete prick and he'll get what he deserves but it would take some time.

Thanks. I'm glad this chapter turned out well but more than half credit goes to my amazing proof-reader Lisa, she's really amazing.There's more to come about Becca so wait and watch:)

Yeah, Zune's mom do have a crazy kind of sense humor but she's adorable. To know about Edward's feeling you have to wait for few chapters:)

Hey Rajat, thanks for the review. I'm glad that you are back at GA.About Zune you are right, he's not your normal teenager, he's much more than that.

What's Ryo's mom problem? Can't she see how much his son is in love with Soubi. I could understand what Soubi would be going through. He's missing Ryo. He's insecure. Poor Ryo, couldn't do anything because of the circumstances. I hope they would be together soon. I don't know why but with the entry of Tohaku's fiancee, I feel testing period of Ryo and soubi's relationship in not over yet. There's a lot to come. Great chapter sui. Amazing work. Keep it up:)