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Happy birthday. May god bless you with a long and happy life :-)
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Hey Lisa, so my guys actually helped you to get rid of your old computer, huh? Zune's pic is my favorite among them and yes the other two guys' pics is good enough to drool on, lol.Next chapter would have your many answers but raise few new questions too. Take care and thanks a lot for your review:)
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Hey Lisa, so my guys actually helped you to get rid of your old computer, huh? Zune's pic is my favorite among them and yes the other two guys' pics is good enough to drool on, lol.Next chapter would have your many answers but raise few new questions too. Take care and thanks a lot for your review:)
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Hey Sui, what a nice chapter, WOW. Okay, the love making scene in the beginning was very erotic. I really liked it. But with entry of Ryo's brother in the scene, you took me with surprise. I was really not expecting this. This chapter was emotional and sad. I thought that Ryo's brother would be saved but I was wrong and now Ryo had left with his parents. I hope Ryo will be back soon to Soubi, about which I'm really doubtful. I'm happy that at this time Kaito is with Soubi, who is scared and kind of insecure by Ryo's departure. My favorite scene in this chapter was when Soubi was cleaning the blood stains from floor, it was very emotional. He is so in love with Ryo. You did an amazing job with this chapter, Sui. Waiting for the next chapter
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Hey GJ, it's good to have a review from you after so long. I'm happy you liked this chapter. There's on more chapter to this never-ending night, after that will start the real drama. I hope you are as excited as I am and will enjoy the coming chapters.Thanks a lot for your review, take care
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Hey Joann, On your 'just for friendship' remark I'm with you. I don't think that he's doing all these things just for the sake of friendship but to know more about Edward's feeling, you have to wait. Kev will be back in next chapter but apart from him there's someone else waiting for you Joann. I hope you'll enjoy the next chapter as much as you enjoyed this one. Thanks a lot for your review, God bless
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You are right, Zune is not your typical teenager. He's different and quite ahead of his age and I guess that is his strength and weakness at the same time. And about, Kev...well I'll suggest you don't build your opinion so quickly...there's so much more to come.Thanks for your review Cassie, I'm glad you are still reading my story. Take care
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Chapter 7: Friends? Friends. Zune Nine of them were prowling towards us in a menacing manner. “Zune,” Edward whispered. I looked at him. “Run,” he ordered. I didn’t give it a second thought. Edward grabbed my hand and we started running in the exact opposite direction. I didn’t have any idea what was going on behind us. We were just running blindly for our dear lives on that gloomy and ominous road. Then I heard vehicles coming. I looked back. Those assholes were racing towards us in t
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Thanks Joann, you are right Kev's post of 'official boyfriend' is in danger, hehehe. Thanks again for sticking up to the story, it means a lot to me.Take care
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I'm so looking forward to see (read) meeting of Josh and Alexi's family. I'm sure they will love him as much as we love him. On the Adrian part, I really think Alexi must listen to Lily and sign those papers. Adrian should get what he actually deserves. I'm happy about Lily and Taka and glad that they are with Alexi. It was good to see Alexi teaching those students and the credit goes to Joshua (and his kisses). Great Chapter Sui, waiting for more:)
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Hey Sui, I loved the way Ryo held Soubi's shoes as hostage. I found it adorable and hilarious at the same time. You know Sui, your biggest strength for me is you use these small things and moments damn perfectly in your stories. I am glad for Ryo and soubi. They are slowly and steadily developing a deep bond and have started to understand each other just perfectly. I was surprised to know that Soubi was kind of cool about Ryo reading his story/diary/journal but I actually didn't miss the old stubborn Soubi. Kaito is cute too. Kaito asking for a hug too was so sweet. I hope Ryo's brother and his not so good company won't create any problems in their lives and Soubi wouldn't change his mind about not taking up Rin's offer. As usual I LOVED this chapter. Great work, Sui. Take Care and update soon:)
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Hey Cassie, I'm surprised and happy to get a review from you. Thanks a lot.I agree with you on Kev's 'I love you' but as you said he's just a normal teenager. I hope the next chapters won't disappoint you and I would be able to get some wise words from you. Hugs:)
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Hey Joann, first of all thanks a lot for the review. I'm glad you liked it.Yeah you are right, Zune's mom is smart but also with a crazy sense of humor but I love her. Everyone is cursing poor Kev, without knowing his side of story...so not fair. Well where is he and what happened to him? you will know about that in next to next chapter. Hugs:)
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Hey Joann, first of all thanks a lot for the review. I'm glad you liked it.Yeah you are right, Zune's mom is smart but also with a crazy sense of humor but I love her. Everyone is cursing poor Kev, without knowing his side of story...so not fair. Well where is he and what happened to him? you will know about that in next to next chapter. Hugs:)
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Hey Joann, first of all thanks a lot for the review. I'm glad you liked it.Yeah you are right, Zune's mom is smart but also with a crazy sense of humor but I love her. Everyone is cursing poor Kev, without knowing his side of story...so not fair. Well where is he and what happened to him? you will know about that in next to next chapter. Hugs:)
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Hey Lisa, thanks for your review. I guess you're not very happy with Kev at the moment, lol.It took me a day to write that kiss scene, I'm glad it came out well. Well, to know that whether Mr. Arrogant would be able to save himself and Zune or not, you have to wait for the next chapter. Hugs:)
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Hey Sui, so you are back with my Ryo, huh. How are you? I hope everything is going great with you. Okay, I didn’t like Rin at all. He actually needs to learn how to talk and behave, idiot. Somehow, I do have a feeling that circumstances will make Soubi to take up Rin’s proposal. Please tell me that modernization of market doesn’t going to affect Ryo’s shop, I really hope not. My favorite scene in the chapter where Ryo bargains the time limit Soubi must spend with Rin alone. I really liked that rubber band thing; it was kind of really cute to me. I hope no matter what happens next, Ryo and Soubi would remain together…always. I am very excited to know what happens next. So please please please Sui, please update soon and not make me wait long this time. I don’t think I need to say that I’m in love with this story but I’ll still say I’m in love with this amazing story and its amazing characters, take care of them, specially of my Ryo. Take Care Sui and once again requesting you to update soon. Hugs:) Sacredlove.
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Chapter 6: First Kiss Zune The next morning, when I woke up to the sound of my alarm clock, (yes, I set an alarm for a non-school day as I didn’t want to be late for my date), I was unaware that it would be one of those days which I would prefer to omit from my memory and my life. I promptly scrambled off my bed, thinking about Kev, our date and the much awaited kiss. When I came downstairs, mom was in kitchen. We talked for some time. I also informed…lied to her that I had to teach a b
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Hey Lisa, thanks for your review. Ed is going along with zune's promises because somewhere he wants to. Though picture would be more clear about this in next chapters. And the friendship between Becca and zune have to go a long way:-)
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Ryo's mother is a bitch. I hate her. I could understand soubi's fears. And finally rin is back. I can see there's so much drama is about to come. Waiting for the next chapter. Great work sui, loved it:-)
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Hey sui, what are you up to? Everything is going so good and normal between soubi and ryo...is it something like silence before the storm? Please tell me there isn't any storm waiting for ryo and soubi. Btw i loved the chapter and yes that lovemaking scene was really HOT:-)
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Hey Joann, it's always great to have a review from you. Yeah, you are right. Life would be more interesting, confusing and difficult for zune in coming days. Thanks for the review. Take care:-)
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Love-making scene was really gud. And I love the way you ended this chapter...so Rin is back. I hope Ryo's possessiveness wouldn't create problems in the paradise. It'll be interesting to know what happens next. Waiting for the next chapter:-)
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Chapter 5: Three Promises Zune M sending u an opportunity. It was a message from Becca. I couldn’t get it. What opportunity, Becca??? I messaged her back with my right hand, while opening the refrigerator for some water with the left one. I carried a water bottle to the dining room table, but before I could fill my glass, my phone beeped again. U’ll know soon…just be at home. Her reply confused me more. Is it a surprise or something?? I texted back anxiously. Kind of. Okay bye…john
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