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Cadet Third Class • III
Mann Ramblings commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Third Class • III
How many books ago was that? My memory can’t go back that far... -
Cadet Third Class • III
Mann Ramblings commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Third Class • III
And no red-shirting any of those one-off characters. I want part of the main crew. -
Cadet Third Class • III
Mann Ramblings commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Third Class • III
Only if I get to write the violence. You get too attached to your cast members. -
Cadet Third Class • III
Mann Ramblings commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Third Class • III
It's not the same thing!!!!- 111 comments
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“Police say your wife—” Sawyer reached back and gripped Jimmy’s arm, interrupting Dr. Adams to stop his mate’s growling. Now was poor timing for possessive territory gestures. “Ex-wife.” Well fed, pale, and gray hair thinning, the older doctor’s gaze flickered to Sawyer’s hand on Jimmy. A new century or not, the area was conservative enough to remind Sawyer how some people reacted to men together, so he let go and regretted it at once. Dr. Adams continued, but the judgmental undertone
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We'll have to see...
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Me too. Thankfully, I have some ideas. I hope they pan out.
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Doris has her place in the plot line. I actually wish I'd introduced her sooner. I really like writing her as a supporting character.
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Fergus is too far gone to care. I imagine now that he's tapped this new source of power, he's feeling validated in his role as alpha. Some of your concerns about covering things up is actually being addressed in the next chapter. See you next Wednesday.
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A narcissist never does well when the light is shined on their failures. Rage and desperation are a bad mix for people in power.
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the train is definitely gaining speed...
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Let hope not. Fergus would be an awful leader to keep in power.
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Fergus' narcissism has led to his own downfall. Now we have to hope he's not taking the rest of our cast with him. Fingers crossed.
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Big baby he may be, but as a true-born alpha, Fergus is dangerous. The risks are still high.
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Fergus' relationship with his pack (if you can call it that) has been deteriorating badly since the rabids appears and probably wasn't that solid to begin with, but he was too arrogant to see it.
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wouldn't it be an interesting plot twist if Fergus wins? No?
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it seems the natural limits of an alpha calling out to his wolves can be pushed above and beyond if they dig deep enough or are desperate enough.
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Fergus stroked the mug's handle with an absentminded thumb. Seated in his armchair, he stared off into the distance, wondering how long it had been. Nothing beyond the incessant motor of the kitchen clock held his preoccupied mind. He closed his free hand into a fist to stop himself from continuously scratching. Much more and he’d wear a fresh hole in the thigh of his jeans. Choices had been made. A message had been sent, the likes of which he'd never written before, and he refused to feel
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Cadet Third Class • I
Mann Ramblings commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Third Class • I
you better be careful. I could slip horrible things into Carlos' text and start killing off favorite cast members... -
Not at all. Remembering smaller details is harder when waiting a week between chapters. (And 35 weeks so far! Yikes!) If you were reading in one or two sittings like a book, it might have been easier. I have to remember to repeat those details more often in serial format.
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I tried to make it clearer through the description since Jada wouldn't know, but the second wolf (huge, broad shoulders with a shaved head) would be Granger.
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Let's hope so!
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we'll get back to Jada and her role soon enough. Stay tuned.
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more of Fergus's madness will come out next week. We'll see where we go from there.
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I've always believed a happy ending has to be earned.
