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Thanks for including me on this. It meant a lot to dabble in Carlos' world one more time.
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I edited for Carlos when he first arrived and made him start over on the first five chapters of CJ because they needed so much work. Carlos took criticism far better than I do and before long we were cracking rude jokes in the comments alongside the edits. I looked forward to bouncing chapters off him, knowing he would find things I needed. His extroverted spirit was a blessing. I had hoped to work with him more in the future, but I guess we never know what kind of time we have. I never met him in person, but I still called him my friend. I'm going to miss him terribly.
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if only Carlos were actually younger...
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I like to make a point that no character is safe.
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it's honestly louder than a whisper. Methinks Carlos is ignoring my more muderous impulses.
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That's because it bugged me so much... 😂
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OMG, you're such an ass. LMAO
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I refused to shovel snow. That's what husbands are for...
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Prompt 244 - Zombie Apocalypse
Mann Ramblings commented on Mann Ramblings's story chapter in Prompt 244 - Zombie Apocalypse
This is one of my responses to a prompt in the forums—a standalone short. I did a series of the prompts over the years and we're required to collect them under an anthology title (Prompt Ramblings) due to their size. I didn't expand this one into a full novel. This is the whole thing. -
Chapter 25: Eerie Employment
Mann Ramblings commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 25: Eerie Employment
Why not? It could be full of fun scenes! "Oh god, he's pretending he's John Wick again. He stuffed me in his belt and I'm way too close to his groin. Somebody tell this man to shower." It could be greatness! -
Chapter 25: Eerie Employment
Mann Ramblings commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 25: Eerie Employment
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Their names were changed off screen between chapters. Reminders of Fergus would be a sore spot for the pack and how could you deal with raising a pair twins with those names?
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Sawyer didn't remember which local craft fair Maddie had acquired the handmade calendar. Engraved designs of forest and wolves topped the hardwood plaque filled with rows of changeable tiles marking the months and days. Frivolous and purely decorative, he'd all but ignored it during his teen years. Now with his new knowledge, it took on so much more meaning. The twenty-fifth had been replaced. Between the twenty-four and twenty-six sat a stylized pine tree topped with a star. Sawyer al
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me too!
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Better than Jada going through what Sawyer did under the full moon.
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well, I couldn't answer earlier and spoil it, now could I?
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Next Wednesday will be here before any of us know it!
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Nothing is as satisfying as Jimmy's jambalaya...
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I've enjoyed writing this story so much and have to really thank the readers for all the feedback and comments. It's helped keep me on track on a regular weekly schedule I never imagined I could pull off.
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This story is primarily about Jimmy and Sawyer. We may get to learn more about Maddie and Doris, but that would be for a later tale if I come up with one. (Never say never. I try to leave openings to jump off from in case I have an idea I can't walk away from.)
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Sorry. Sawyer and Jimmy's story is coming to a close. We've been running weekly since last May and it's time to bring our boys to a good place.
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thank you! I work really hard to answer the important questions in my stories, while leaving just enough open for a future story if a new idea comes to mind.
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I think our new pack is on the right track.
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Thanks! Cleaning up the threads is always a task. I need to make sure I tidy things up before we finish Sawyer and Jimmy's story.
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I love writing strong, female characters that run the gamut of dangerous to clever.
