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Standing at the ramparts of the ancient castle, Victor and Igor looked at the boiling, black clouds, coming in fast. "Looks like a doozy blowing in boss." Igor lamented. Victor was silent lost in thought, but snapped out of it when he heard his faithful assistant. "What's that Igor?" "The storm Doctor, it looks just like what you need. I think we will get lots of lightening tonight." Victor smiled affectionately at Igor. "Yes my friend, I think tonight will be the night
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“All rise! The Honourable Justice Harvey Billingsworth presiding.” “Please be seated,” the judge announced to the packed courtroom, and the shuffling of benches and chairs reverberated throughout the wooden hall as people settled themselves. Victor glanced around nervously hoping for some way to get himself out of this mess. Thinking furiously he hoped that others in the courtroom would be called first so he would have more time to figure this out. "Dorothy, whose first on the
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"Master? Master!" Igor yelled enthusiastically, his voice reverberating off the cold stone walls of Victor's castle. He slammed the heavy door behind him and pulled the giant lever beside the door tripping the mechanism that held a large bag of sand nearly 20 feet high in the air. As it dropped, the rope it was attached to went through a series of pulleys, and turned the gears that moved the giant steel beam into place, settling it into its iron brackets ensuring no one could storm the door
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"Boss, I'm not sure of this to be honest." "Stop complaining, and hold him still. I just want the arm," Victor responded as he held the cloth over his victims mouth. Soon the struggling man was sedated and Victor pulled out his tool kit to get to work. Besides I told you that you could come along tonight because you've been hounding me for weeks for an outing, so here you are. Now then, start the fire please Igor." "Oh that is not happening! I draw the line at cannibalism Doc!" Ig
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Figured I would write something for the season lol. Glad you are enjoying the read Cafe. Pink.
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“I’m telling you guys it’s that one,” said one of the three men, as he pointed toward the heavens. Balthasar had enough, “There are millions of stars up there Gaspar! How do we know your not leading us to the edge the earth?” “If you just look to where I’m pointing you can see that it’s the one right next to the two that are sort of close together.” “I’ll tell you this,” Melchoir added his voice to the others, “if I don’t get my ass of this camel soon, I wont be able to walk st
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glad you are appreciating the read. More awkwardness to come yet in this series. Pink.
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Gathering the Israelites around him, Moses led the mass of men, women, children, and livestock to the edge of the Sea of Reeds. "What have you done to us?" the people asked angrily. "The Egyptians hunt us, and you bring us to ruin by leading us to the shore with no place to run, but back to our deaths?" Moses turned from the angry horde. “God?” he whispered, “Little help here. I could use one of those miracles right about now.” I know, I'm tellin you I'm getting sick and tired of
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Moses? Mooossssseeessss? God whispered lightly into the mind of his most devoted. Moses roused himself from a dream and looked around in the dark. “Is anyone there?” he asked. It’s me Moses. Time to get up, we have work to do, you and I. “Yes my Lord. I am honoured Sire, what shall we do?” Come to the mountaintop this morning and we shall speak there, and bring your papyrus. The people know that I am here, be quick. “The mountaintop, Wise One, you mean the mou
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The air was chilled this night. The moon sat high in the sky creating an eerie glow in the fog as it settled slowly above the moist earth. Perfect for his task tonight as most would avoid these dark nights in favour of a fire in the hearth and mug of mulled wine in their goblet. Sweating profusely he gave thanks for the cold seeping slowly into the hole he continued to dig. “Remind me why I am doing this and not you?” he asked his companion, who was nervously watching the distanc
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Frankenstein's creator runs in to some unexpected awkwardness on his way to creating his ultimate masterpiece.
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Matt's Rant -- What Does That Make Me?
pDaisy commented on Rip Skor's story chapter in Matt's Rant -- What Does That Make Me?
I have be honest here and say that I love the story, but the lessons in vocabulary, sexuality, etc. are getting on my nerves, and I really think it detracts from the narration. The story is progressing and then the narrator is trying to teach me something. I can't decide if I am reading a story or a text book. The other issue of course is that it is stated as fact, but in fact it is not fact, it is one person's perspective, so it ends up being a text book that is biased. I'm losing interest here, because the story is being lost. Pink. -
Chapter 37 A Pair of Kings
pDaisy commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 37 A Pair of Kings
Hello Gary, thanks for another stellar chapter. What I really appreciated about this, was that it took a big sigh and let us regroup from all of the drama of the last chapters, and let us experience the connection these two guys feel. Yes Jeremy seems destined to be a Kendell project... Pink -
Chapter 36 Claiming the Pot
pDaisy commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 36 Claiming the Pot
Oh man I am totally not buying Candy's transformation! Great chapter Gary, anticipating where we are going next. Pink. -
Gary if you like that, you should really check out Date Night. It's a more... intense experience! Pink
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Erik watched from the window as Justin settled himself in the driver’s seat of his truck and shut the door. Erik could see him arranging his possessions in the seat beside him and taking one last sip of his coffee before he started the engine and let it run for a few minutes. It was the same routine every Sunday morning, and rather than it being a routine that Erik hated or grew bored of, it reminded him of why he and Justin were together. Justin was the stable one in the relationship. The one
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Erik is at home when he discovers something under the bed that reminds him of the one he loves.
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I loathe to think that any time I spend on this earth will somehow be wasted, and yet I can't escape from the reality that this has been part of my existence, and that indeed, when I contemplate my fortunes, I come to the inevitable conclusion that a portion of my life has truly been for nothing. Sitting here looking out at the blank screen, staring at the pinhole camera of my laptop, interacting with faceless voices and emotionless text, I can only conclude that part of my life is utterly empty
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After pissing away nearly 600 years on every excess known to man, Uriel remembers lost love and awakens to his purpose once more.
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Moses grew weary of looking after Jethro’s sheep, but continued his assent up the mountain to allow them to graze. He stopped one last time to drink the remains of water he carried in the goat bladder slung over his shoulder. I really should get another bladder, he thought to himself, the hair on this one is starting to shed. He rolled it up when he was finished and stored it in the secret pocket within his robe. Nearing the summit of Mount Horeb, Moses stopped and looked across the vast valley
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As God's fire and brimstone wrath swept across the kingdom of Gomorrah, pillars fell and the bodies of the dead lay strewn over the fields. Their heathen souls ripped from their lives and cast into the pit of hell by their vengeful Lord. Jesus approached God as he was watching the destruction unfold beneath his eyes. "Hey what's goin' on?" Jesus asked as he looked down at the rubble. "Another war?" "No nothing like that, I just took out Sodom and Gomorrah. And..." God put on a smug face, "wit
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Sitting back, Noah wiped the sweat from his brow and contemplated the task he had just completed. Looking to the sky he thanked the Lord for giving him the strength to finish his work. "Ah... dad?" Noah heard from behind. "Yes Shem?" he asked. "You may want to take a look at this!" Shem exclaimed. Noah turned from his contemplation and looked over the bow of the newly constructed ark. "Holy Shit!" Noah remarked as his gaze swept the horizon and took in the millions of pairs of animals. "I'm
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Thanks RR, I already have a couple of more written but I am not quite happy with them, so follow and you will know when they are posted.
