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    Big Sky Chapter 10 More Trouble Is Coming To The Ranch Seth must have fell asleep cuz somebody squeezing his hand woke him up. His head was lying beside Hunter’s shoulder. He lifted his head looking at Hunter and seeing that Hunter’s eyes were open. “Hey handsome glad you made it back to us.” Seth said with the biggest smile on his face with tears running down his cheeks. “Don’t cry baby I’m fine.” Hunter whispered to Seth. “Hunter are you hurting? The doctor left some pain pil
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    “Double C” Chapter 3 Hunter showed Cal what stall Sidney was in and what saddle and tach he could use, then took him over to the bunkhouse for him to get settled in. When they walked in Cody was laying down on his bunk reading a book. Cal just stood at the door looking at him lying there. “Hey there lazy, can you show me where to put my things and what bunk is available to use.” Cal laughed at Cody’s expression that he had on his face. Hunter laughed at both of them and told them, “I th
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    Just two words for you "LOVE IT"
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    Can i have a Leinie please....lol Sorry could not help myself
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    Big Sky Chapter 9 Seth Opens His Heart “What is wrong Seth, I didn’t mean for you to cry. I’m so sorry for upsetting you.” Hunter squeezed harder when he felt Seth’s hands on his shoulders gripping him back. Seth stood there in Hunter’s arms listening to his heart beat trying to stop crying. Hunter started rubbing Seth’s back telling him “Seth I’m really sorry please stop crying.” Seth leaned back and looked at Hunter “I have so many feelings going through me right now and I don’t know
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    Ron, chapter 10 is being written as i speak and with what happened in #9 i'm adding a lot of what you said in that chapter (Well i hope it's enough) thank you for comment, opened up a few things for me to include in the next chapters.
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    Big Sky

    ShadowDancer commented on ShadowDancer's story in Fiction

    Thank you for your comment, i know i mess up on spelling, tense, past tense, and other things but you have to mess up to learn from them.
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    Really like how you made the change with the time frame. I know your story is SUPER DUPPER as i have said before, keep it special for Chuck and Dylan.
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    “Double C” Cal “Why?” I couldn’t understand why this always happens to me, when all I do is try and help people. Maybe one day I can get my life back and live it like I want to. I came out to my parents in my senior year and they seemed to be ok with it. My mother was the one always on my side whenever I needed her, my father he just ignored me as time went by. My mom passed away from cancer a week before my senior graduation. That I thought was the hardest day of my life but, it turned
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    thanks for the comment Lisa, i guess i'm afraid you will rip my chapters up...lol...i have to read them 5 times or more then the Beta gets it then she fixes my mess ups then i fixed them then send it back to her and she finds more, it takes us a lot to fix my screw ups. but hey if you think you can handle my screw ups i will let you.
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    guess i show to much detail in the story, i don't like reading a story myself that goes from week to week in each paragraph without some detail about what the person is thinking or doing. When i read novel's with people working on ranch's there is a lot of information in them about the men and what they are doing. So i guess i'm following that lead.
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    Big Sky Chapter 8 “A Tender Touch” Hunter was riding across the east pasture on one of the ATV’s, heading out to where Cody and Cal was supposed to be. He was thinking about what Sam did and said to him and was hoping that Tom could talk some sense into him pretty damn quick. Ed would not take Sam’s shit and would fire him and he did not want that to happen. He looked over at the wellhouse and saw Cody and Cal standing at the door to the building. He pulled up to them and got off the ATV s
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    Chapter 1

    ShadowDancer commented on ShadowDancer's story chapter in Chapter 1

    I didn't mention Cody's dad because i thought i could mention it further in the story. I don't know about the Cody Simpson name i was looking on the net for last names and it was in the list. Mike caused a lot of trouble for C&C before he gets fired in Big Sky Happy you enjoyed the chapter....more to come
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    “Double C” Cody 1 month prior to Hunter and Seth meeting at Big Sky Ranch for the first time: “Cody are you going to be alright?” Cody’s mother Sue asked. “Yep I will be just fine mom.” Cody said to his mom looking at her knowing she always worries about him. “You know you could stay here and still work out there at Big Sky, the commute is not that bad.” Sue told Cody with a sad look. Knowing her only son was leaving the nest for the first time. “Mom I stayed here with you while
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    Cody and Cal's story before getting to the Big Sky Ranch. This is how they fell in love and became partners, will this love continue and have a happy ending?
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    Chapter 1

    ShadowDancer commented on ShadowDancer's story chapter in Chapter 1

    two different Cal's i did see that until it was posted and to late to change it. Yes if you ever go to an old ranch and talk to them they say "ya" and "ya'll" a lot. i have a habit of saying it since i lived around cowboys all my life and i married one too sorry about my spelling if i catch it i fix it but some do slip by me.
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    well what can i say about Sam without giving the plot away...nothing sorry..lolSeth is a sweetie but Hunter could be one too...lol
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    Ron there is a side story on Seth the title is "Seth" under Big Sky story
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    Big Sky Chapter 7 Hunter meets Seth Hunter stepped off the kitchen house porch, started walking over to the main house. Ed turned around as Hunter walked up to him. “Max and Seth this is Hunter my top hand here on the ranch. Hunter this is Max, my ex-military buddy and this young man is Seth, Max’s only son.” Ed said to Hunter with a weird look on his face. Hunter shook Max’s hand saying “Glad to meet you.” “You to Hunter.” Max said Hunter turned to Seth with his hand out, Seth reached
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    SETH Seth was sitting at his desk thinking what the hell happened to his life. As of today he is going to turn in his resignation at the job he’s had for six years, he got this job at Tech Inc. right out of high school. He took night classes at the local college to get the education he needed to keep this job, now just because one night he’s giving it up. Seth set back in his chair and closed his eyes trying to figure out how this all happened. “Seth, are you here?” Tim said coming in the d
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    This story needs to be read after you have read up to Chapter 6 in the story BIG SKY for it make it any sense in the story line. Seth walks away from a 4 year relationship but finds another when he least expects it
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    LOL...glad you like the story so far...going to post a side story about Seth before he shows up at the ranch, hope you read it b/c it will give you and everybody a little insight about him. I'm thinking i will be putting in more about Cody and Cal...lol add a little more spice to the story. thanks for the comments and reading the story
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    BIG SKY Chapter 6 Hunter Looking for True Love Ed woke up with Martha wrapped in his arms, loving just being able to wake up with her here. She had been his wife for just over twenty years now. He knows that she loves him but it’s always in the back of his mind, that it was his fault that they couldn’t have children. Ed starting thinking back about how he became sterile, then shook his head real hard to get the thoughts out of his head, he doesn’t like going back to that one awful day in h
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    good work...love it
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    I hate using them to but i was told you have to use them to show who is talking. thanks for reading
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