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  1. ShadowDancer

    Chapter 6

    What about the Hawaii house that Will bought? He never goes there anymore. If he needs or wants to just get away to think on what he should or shouldn't do about Zach, Brad or anybody else send him to the 4 million dollar house he bought. Or does Brad have his hand in that too? If I remember when Brad signed the papers the house was put in a trust but you (Mark) never mentioned what trust or who's trust. Will (in my opinion) needs to confront Zach then walk away.
  2. Chapter 17 Monday Night Heath walked out of the kitchen when he heard Rob’s truck pull into the driveway. “Hi Dad,” Rob said as he walked into Heath’s house. “Hi Rob, David. Have you had dinner yet?” “Yep, David cooked us dinner. Are we interrupting your dinner?” “No, I am waiting on Steve to get here, and then we can eat. David let me get your truck key, I will be right back.” Rob and David sat on the couch. “I feel like we are interrupting his plans.” David said looking at Rob. “We w
  3. ShadowDancer

    Prompt 250

    Thank you for your comment and thoughts. When I started this little story I was wondering if I was going to get it right or not. I don't have any family or friends using meth that I know of, so I am kinda going with what I read about and have watched on TV. Any input would be great help. Thanks again.
  4. ‘Here we go again!’ I was thinking when I walked in the house and closed the door seeing my mother standing there. “Here.” She was holding her hand out with some cash in it. “What is that for?” “You need to go and meet Robbie. He will be at Smity’s in half hour.” She crammed the money in my front pocket. “Why?” “Because I said so.” “That is not a reason.” “I don’t have to give you a reason, young man.” “If you want me to do something that could get me in trouble, then I think I deserve a
  5. Chapter 6 I walked off with Chance and Jarrod; we went in the doors of the school. “Chance, let’s go in the restroom and see if we can get you cleaned up a little before the bell rings for class.” I walked in the restroom, got some paper towels, wet them down for Chance and handed them to him. I watched him clean his gorgeous face and saw that there was a bruise starting on his cheek. “You might end up with a bruise on your cheek. Jarrod, do you have an extra shirt in your locker?” “Ya, I
  6. Chapter 5 After my last class, I walked slowly to my locker not looking forward to the conversation with Jarrod. I went out the big doors and saw Jarrod and Chance standing at the gate. I walked over there and all three of us took off heading home, I didn’t say anything to either one. If they want to talk then they would have to bring it up, not me. Jarrod looked at me and bumped my shoulder to get attention. “Yes?” I said to him. “You said you would talk to him so start talking,” Jarrod wh
  7. Chapter 4 I must have fell asleep because the next thing I knew, my mom was knocking on my door telling me that Jarrod was on the phone. “Hey what’s up?” “Nothing, just wanted to let you know that Chance called and asked me to go to the movies with him and a couple other guys from school. I know we had something planned today but I was hoping you would be ok if I passed on going to the arcade with you,” Jarrod said to me. I got pissed off but I didn’t let him know it. “Sure go have fun
  8. Chapter 3 “Do you have a problem with me? You were all smiles at the mall but now you have a sour look on your face when you look at me.” Chance looked at me with a wrinkled forehead as if he is trying to figure something out. “No I don’t have a problem with anybody.” I stepped over his foot and walked out of the classroom. I went to my locker to put my backpack in it, and then I walked over to the cafeteria and got in line. I looked around and saw Jarrod already sitting at our normal table
  9. ShadowDancer

    Chapter 33

    I must have missed something. What happened to the papers that Sean was filing on Zach's parents. Will and Zach talked to Sean on a wed (hope that is right) and the papers were being filed the next day but then Zach, Will, JP and the rest of the gang was in the plane on fri and there no mention of the papers and what happened when Wally got them. Not complaining in any way cuz your story is great and I don't miss any chapter, as matter fact I am rereading them all for the second time. I am just wondering if I missed something or if you have it maybe planned out that when they get into Claremont it will come to light. Keep putting out them chapters, totally enjoy reading and keeping up with the story line.
  10. Update Just a note for my readers of Big Sky. I am in the process of re-editing all ten chapters. I will be continuing to write the story at a later date. I am finishing up with my other open stories first. Big Sky was the first story I had ever written and it is dear to my heart. I know how I want it to go in the story line, know I just need to find the time to finish it. Please be patent with me and keep a look out for the next chapter. Thank you for reading and all the messages I hav
  11. Chapter 16 Rob walked back into the kitchen as his cell phone was ringing. “Hello…Ya it is working…What’s up?…ok hold on…” Rob put his phone on speaker so David could hear him too. David moved the skillet off the burner and sat at the table with Rob. “Ok it is on speaker and David is here next to me.” “Hello David, feeling any better?” “Ya, still a little sore but doing better, thanks.” “Ok the reason I want both of you to hear this is because I heard from Eric. First, about your da
  12. Chapter 2 “I don’t know yet. All I could find out is that he was complaining of chest pains so your grandma called an ambulance for him. Let’s just go so we can find out more. Grab your backpack and you can do your homework while we are at the hospital,” Mom told me, walking out and making sure the door was locked. When Mom and I got to the hospital, my dad was waiting for us in the waiting room. I sat down in the chair next to my dad listening to him. “Mom is back there with him, they
  13. Chapter 1 “Hey Mom, can I go to the mall with Jarrod?” I asked coming into the house, Jarrod following me in. “Only if you promise to have your homework done first,” Mom said, walking out of the kitchen. “Mom, I only have math tonight. Can I do it when I get back please?” I looked at her with pleading eyes. Mom walked up to us saying. “Be back in two hours.” Since the mall was only four blocks away, it was easy to walk to. “Ok, thanks.” “Hey man, put your backpack next to mine and you c
  14. Zane is in the closet with only his best friend knowing about his secret until someone new shows up. The only problem is that this person brings his problems with him and has Zane help him. Will they come out unscathed in the end?
  15. Chapter 15 Rob and David were relaxing on the couch watching TV. David was laying down with his head in Rob’s lap, wondering if Rob was going to tell him what his dad told him on the phone. David turned his head and looked at Rob. “Babe, who was on the phone? I thought I heard your cell phone ring when we were laying down on the bed.” Rob looked down at David putting his hand on his cheek. Rob had a frown on his face; he was thinking how he was going to tell David about his dad. “It was m
  16. Chapter 14 David woke up before the alarm went off. He laid there looking at Rob sleeping so peacefully. He ran his finger over Rob’s cheek feeling the stubble, smiling. Rob slapped his hand thinking something was crawling on his face. David did it again, which got Rob to slap his cheek since David pulled his hand back fast enough to not be hit again. Rob opened his eyes looking over at David. “You think that was funny?” “Good morning, Sunshine,” David said laughing. “Good morning smart
  17. Chapter 13 David was spooning Rob’s back when he woke up. He ran his fingers over Rob’s chest feeling the soft sexy hairs, kissing his ears, then his neck. Rob started moaning. Rob put his hand on top of David’s getting him to stop his fingers from moving. He rolled over facing David with a grin on his face. “Morning sweetheart.” Rob kissed David forehead, since he had morning breath and he knew David hated to kiss until they brushed their teeth. “Morning to you too. Did you sleep alright?
  18. ShadowDancer

    Chapter 12

    Next chapter answers a few questions, plus a little surprise. Next chapter completed and at editors now. Thanks for reading
  19. ShadowDancer

    Chapter 12

    Some in next chapter in regards to the parents plus two things coming to light. Thanks for reading
  20. ShadowDancer

    Chapter 12

    Some in next chapter in regards to the parents plus two things coming to light. Thanks for reading
  21. Chapter 12 Rob pulled into the complex and parked his truck. He looked over at David seeing that the last few days had taken a toll on him. “Babe, why don’t you take a long hot bath and relax for a bit. I will get your clothes switched around for you. The things in the spare room are fine for right now; you can do a little at a time after work each day so you don’t wear yourself out. I don’t want to see you get sick over all this crap.” Rob ran his finger down David’s cheek, and then leaned ov
  22. Chapter 11 David pulled into Heath’s driveway and saw he had moved his car out of the garage. He backed his truck up to the garage door to be the first to unload. Rob and Bill parked their trucks off to the side to be unloaded next. Rob got out and went over to David’s truck door. “Let me go get Dad to see where he wants us to put everything? After we unload everything, we can go down to the shop and get some more boxes if we need them. Does this sound good to you, hun?” David looked at Ro
  23. HAPPY BIRTHDAY, LITTLE MAN You have a great day and don't eat to much cake. 13 min early
  24. Chapter 10 David pulled into the apartment complex, looking around to see if he recognized any of the vehicles. The only one he noticed was Jack’s car, but knowing he was at the police station David was not too worried. Rob pulled up next to David’s truck, got out and went to David’s door. “Hey babe, Ryan and Bill are not here yet. Do you want to go up to the apartment and see what is going on now or do you want to wait on the guys to get here? Either way is fine with me.” Rob looked over a
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