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Hi Mark, Thanks for the next chapter of Streak. "I got to be with Alex, who I had very strong feelings for, and I got to fuck Mary Ellen, who had an amazing pussy." Is this the insight into JJ's psyche that's going to provide the key to his sexuality? Relationship wise, JJ is probably gay, but intercourse wise he's straight? A smooth chapter all along. I like where Brad and Marc are getting, in their relationship. JP is still right, though. Marc is still liable to return to David, if the underlying, psychological issues are not properly addressed. I am hoping for lovable, cuddly Jays to cut down Mary-Ellen (yes, I do think Jays is lovable and cuddly. I think of him as a stuffed Tigger) I should have expected that Nana and the Duke would get together. More please! Lots of loving cuddles, Maarten

Hi Mark, Thanks for the next chapter of Streak. I was actually a little disappointed with seeing the new chapter before you had taken the time to reply to the reviews of the last chapter. I appreciate a chapter over a reply to reviews pretty much every time, but the last chapter whipped up a shit storm, and I really would have appreciated to see your side to our perspective. I guess, being a little disappointed with the timing may have something to do with it, but I didn't get the usual warm feeling that I usually do when reading a Streak chapter. JJ was sweet and manipulative again. I liked the idea of Matt as his go-to guy. I hope he'll consider the advice given, carefully. I have a hard time believing He-who-must-not-be-named needed the deal with Darius spelled out for him. His ability to read Brad should have given him an indication that something was in the works. I don't like where you're taking JJ. He's too sweet and cuddly to be put in the confusing scene that is finding your true preference. Keep up the amazing work. Lots of loving cuddles, Maarten

Hi Mark, Thanks for the next chapter of Streak. "Darius sometimes seemed like a heterosexual outcast in a sea of gay guys." Seriously, Best Quote Ever. I too was very much surprised to see that Elizabeth really thought she'd be the one negotiating with the Duke. Given her dynasty background, albeit the inferior American variant, it was logical for her to know that it'd be Nana who'd be in charge. I am more than a little disturbed by the idea of a threesome between Mary-Ellen, Alex and JJ. I don't think Jays is psychologically capable to put himself in that situation, without doing irreparable harm to himself. I was reminded of a certain Lady Haversham (that is, if I remember her maiden name correctly) by the way Mary-Ellen fucked her way into the Suffolk duke dom. Which brings me to my final point: how are you looking to portray the 21st century Duke of Suffolk? Will it be the politically astute, but slightly dull replica of the person that elevated the peerage to a Duke dom in the first place (pardon poetic licence, I know Caroline and George did more than their part)? Or the equally politically astute, yet slightly more playful version of the Duke of Portland? Those are the 2 options I can fathom off the top of my head, anyway. Keep up the amazing work. Lots of loving cuddles, Maarten

Hi Mark, Thanks for the next chapter of Streak. For some reason I couldn't use my phone to show my appreciation for the latest chapter. I have to be honest, though. I agree with ColumbusGuy: I can't believe you would allow Mary-Ellen to wed Alex. I am certain a wedding won't be the outcome. I'd be hugely disappointed if that'd be the case. I especially liked conversation between Wade and Alex. They seem to be in a good place . Keep up the amazing. Lots of loving cuddles, Maarten

Hi Mark, Thanks for the next chapter of Streak. We were promised fireworks, and boy did we get them! I was shocked at first by Darius. But after thinking it through, we haven't seen any healing on his part, so his irrational obsession with serving in the biggest mistake the USA ever made, does make some twisted sense. Readers that didn't see Mary-Ellen's revelation coming are really naive. I was pretty much sure about her getting pregnant, the second they had sex. My heart goes out to JJ. I really hope Will is going to be in his room in time to prevent him from doing what he appears to intend to do. It pains me to say he's the logical choice for saving JJ. Lots of loving cuddles, Maarten

Hi Mark, Thanks for the next chapter of Streak. A satisfying chapter, with a lot of clarity for all involved. I like where Brad and Marc are in their relationship. The unsuspected 180 by Wally was great to hear. I can't say I fully trust it, but let's see where it goes from here. Lots of loving cuddles, Maarten

Hi Mark, Thanks for the next chapter of Streak. A classic Will chapter. Likable, in his love for Zach one moment, a disruptive influence in an already volatile situation the next. I don't like Wally and Clara anymore than the rest of us, but the one thing they are right about, is that Will encourages Zach's disrespectful behaviour towards his parents, however well deserved in Zach's case. I too have to disagree with Timothy, in that I think the pain was needed, to start the healing process. There's a long road ahead for Zach, Wally and Clara. Let's hope there'll be little or no interference from the Disruptive Influence. Keep up the amazing work (and keep Will chapters to a minimum) Final thought: who's the "combination of rich and smart". Brad? Lots of loving cuddles, Maarten

Hi Mark, Thanks for the next chapter of Streak. It's really sweet, the way you portray JJ. I really love reading about him. He seems to be in a good place with Alex. I hope you will be nice to JJ in this book. He's obviously going to have to give up Alex at some point. I just hope it won't crush him too badly. This new counselor seems to know what he's doing, although I agree with an earlier review, in that it's likely Wally needs to be talked to before the next counseling session. I can't think of the right person to take with him for Zach. Bringing Frank could make this appear like a family fight. Bringing Will, regardless of whether or not he's coming out to Wally and Clara seems to spell disaster. I am hoping that he chooses JP. Keep up the amazing work. Lots of loving cuddles, Maarten

Hi Graeme, Thanks for the next chapter of Leopard Spots. I didn't see the stereotypical bully-turns-boyfriend coming by a long shot! I really hope that will turn out to be the case. At least Neill realises that his boyfriend is out there, and it's not Jim. Let's hope Dave gets the help he needs. It was great to see Sam and Deon interacting like this. Great thinking on Sam's part to help him with his kicking. Keep up the amazing work. Lots of loving cuddles, Maarten

Hi Mark, Thanks for the next chapter of Streak. Another chapter where the main focus is on the healing of a character. I believe JP is right (no surprise there, lol) It's probably in Zach's best interest to be honest about his love for Will (although, god knows how you can like the brat, never mind love him) Let's see where you are going to take us. Lots of loving cuddles, Maarten

Hi Mark, Thanks for the next chapter of HMS Valiant. What's the saying? Scarcity makes the heart grow fonder? I realise this saga demands loads of research. You never disappoint when we get to read a new chapter of this epic historical novel. George's political aptitude, the portrayal of British aristocracy, all of it, so masterfully done. Take all the time you need to deliver us the next gem. Lots of loving cuddles, Maarten

Hi Mark, Thanks for the next chapter of Streak. A riveting chapter, yet again! I'm not surprised to see Zach taking the "I'm an orphan" stance. He did the best he could, trying to get his parents to see the error of their ways, in a respectful manner. I too couldn't recall Hartford, but I reckon, from Never Surrender's review, he must be a book 1 character, although that wouldn't explain how he knows Stef. Keep Marc healing please! Keep up the amazing work. Lots of loving cuddles, Maarten

Hi Mark, Thanks for the next chapter of Streak. I guess I shouldn't be surprised that Will is back to his annoying ways again so soon. I may have missed it due to my partiality against the brat, but I did not see Marc "letting Will tell his story". He was, yet again, butting into other people's lives during an Escorial dinner. Shame on him! Zach's counseling session brought back horror stories of religion based counseling. I recall studies about gay conversion camps that claim results, but they tend to forget that they are using a pressure method. Usually it's only the highly religious people that say they have converted to being straight. Conversely, this counsellor forgets that Zach doesn't start with his religious values. Lovely chapter. Keep up the amazing work. Lots of loving cuddles, Maarten

Hi Mark, Thanks for the next chapter of Streak. I'm with Kevin, waiting for the other shoe to drop. This was way too sappy, lovey-dovey. I even grudgingly have to admit that I liked the brat in this chapter. He put himself out there, to make Marc feel welcome. I liked the porno description of the orgy with the gymnasts. Keep up the amazing work. Lots of loving cuddles, Maarten

Hi Mark, Thanks for the next chapter of Streak. I am left with ambivalent feelings. Marc and Brad seem to be going in the relationship direction. I'd love to see Brad with a partner again. I think Marc is going to have a rough time convincing Brad's children of his good intentions. I am shocked Wade didn't at least do something for Hammer. This is SO over the top. It's the behaviour of a rich 6 year old. I am truly disgusted with him. Nevertheless, keep up the amazing work. Lots of loving cuddles, Maarten

Hi Mark, Thanks for the next chapter of Streak. I'm glad Brad took the plunge and invited Marc to come with him to Australia. The encounter with Will forebodes a big problem I fear. It looks like Marc is indeed a gold digger, if his response to Will is any indication. I'm looking forward to the Gay Olympics. Keep up the amazing work, Lots of loving cuddles, Maarten

Hey Graeme, Thanks for another exciting chapter of Leopard Spots. I'm sorry for being such an infrequent reviewer. I truly love everything you have written. I hope his team mates can sort out Dave, he needs help. I look forward to seeing the Brat's reaction if he finds out his father is meddling with his football career again. Keep up the amazing work. Lots of loving cuddles, Maarten

Hi Mark, Thanks for the next chapter of Streak. A sweet chapter, with an emotionally balanced Brad. I don't think he's found his true long term new partner yet, but it's great to see him confidently dating again. Keep up the amazing work. Lots of loving cuddles, Maarten

Hi Mark, In trying to keep my promise about reviewing the Bridgemont saga, another review from me. I was pleasantly surprised to see another chapter this soon again. And it was exciting, what with the close call for George himself. The xebecs are fearsome vessels in a becalmed state for sails. I hope they'll get beyond civilised society soon, so Lord Elgin can reign in Lady Elgin. Looking forward to seeing the next chapter. Keep up the amazing work. Lots of loving cuddles, Maarten

Hi Mark, Thanks for the next chapter of Streak. Great chapter! I have to disagree with ColumbusGuy, though. I think Brad's showing growth, in that he arrived at the right thing to do only a day after the dinner incident. The old Brad would have taken weeks for that. I look forward to seeing Matt weed out the morally bad investments. Please give Cam a break! Keep up the amazing work. Lots of loving cuddles, Maarten

Hi Mark, Thanks for the next chapter of Streak. A tranquil chapter, after the fireworks in the last one. I don't know if I like how Claire's birthday dinner finished. I would have liked to see a bit more closure to the issue, although given Brad's proclivity for taking time to get to the right decision, I guess it was to be expected. Will's eratic behaviour is incredibly annoying, he did well with JP in his study, but he was again not very smart in dealing with Brad. He was right in calling Stef on his treatment of JP, though. I would have thought JP's feelings came before Stef's business dealings. I don't know what to make of Elizabeth's action to put Hammer on the terrorist watch list. It's more of an annoying thing, than truly getting him. I fear it's still a smoke screen for Wade too. Let's see where you will take us next. Keep up the amazing work. Lots of loving cuddles, Maarten

Hi Mark, I'm going to try and better my life, i.e. review a story I have come to love beyond measure. I think that, to review this book in grossly inadequate words, we have seen troublesome times for our beloved protagonist. Having Caroline endanger their standing in society, putting up with yet another ploy from The Guild, facing the long voyage to Egypt with a merchant's daughter. I am shocked at the stupidity Granger displayed in this chapter. Surely he should expect that the merchant captain will be sending personal correspondence from Lady Elgin (the historical knowledge of my Galaxy S5 is severely lacking, it suggests Lady Gaga, before Lady Elgin, or maybe it shares George's disdain for the merchant community) to Guild friends in London? I can't wait to see where you'll be taking us next. Keep up the amazing work. Lots of loving cuddles, Maarten

Hi Mark, Thanks for the next chapter of Streak. What a gem of a chapter! Alex going to JJ was the right thing to do, I hope they'll work out this episode. It was sweet to see Zach confirm JJ's feelings. They're truly fellow athletes. I'm going to surprise everyone: I'm absolutely disgusted with Will's dinner attitude. The end doesn't justify the means. He's a hypocrite calling JP on his behaviour. He has absolutely no standing to call JP out in his own home. Mind my words: the end was needed. JP was rightly troubled, and it was nice to be reminded of his fight against the Vietnam war. I'm anxious to see what Stef's and Brad's share in Halliburton is. I hope they'll sell their shares on principle. I think it's a sign of Brad's need for control that he won't even disclose Will's share in Halliburton. MORE PLEASE! Lots of loving cuddles, Maarten

Hi Mark, Thanks for the next chapter of Streak. Another ominous chapter. We got to see how truly dependant JJ is on being cared about. I say that because I absolutely adore the little diva. I had to giggle at Wade saying Alex would learn grovelling quickly. I hope JJ's long program won't be a meltdown. I think Alex recognised he's made a mistake, let's hope he can make amends. Keep up the amazing work (and hopefully you'll find the time to write a Bridgemont saga chapter soon again) Lots of loving cuddles, Maarten

Hi Mark, Thanks for the next chapter of Streak. Another person that pissed off the wrong family. I can't decide who's worse off: Parnell under the wrath of the Schluter family, or Hammer facing Elizabeth Danfield. JJ's tear nearly made me cry too. I hope Mary Ellen doesn't seduce Alex, but I expect her to. Keep up the amazing work. Lots of loving cuddles, Maarten