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jkeele777

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  1. Are we contemplating something nefarious here?
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    Chapter 30

    A little disappointed with this sidebar into depression!! I dont think it added anything to what is an already dark story, and I think it distracted me a bit from what I had gathered to be the point of this tale. Sorry! I know I am usually not negative in reviewing anything - I just wanted to let you know what I thought about this one.
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    Chapter 26

    Is it me, or does this feel like an ending? I certainly hope not, because this is getting to be one of my favorite serials - so don't end it yet!
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    Chapter 18

    As with the rest of the story, I loved this chapter! Getting to picture Alexi at home, with his entire family for a holiday weekend really gave me some insight into his personality, and I can't wait for the next chapter!
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    Chapter 19

    I loved it!! The perfect ending to a well written, dramatic, heart warming story. Thank yoyu for bringing Soubi and Ryo to us, and I hope to see more of your work soon!!
  6. I just discovered this story when it listed on the update page, but i have to say, yourhcharacters are AMAZING! I read the entire thing last nite, and I hope the wait for the nexto chapter is shorter!!
  7. You rat bastard!! Another excellent chapter, and I kind of hate you for the ending, but as always, will tune in til the last word!
  8. I also would have missed out on this essay without seeing the review. I'm glad I was paying attention today! RJ, as always, well done. I have enjoyed your work for some tiem now, and hope to see much more from you.
  9. Well, it is looking more and more like these kids are not going to survive this ordeal, at least not all of them.I hope I am wrong, but it looks to me like the Sea Witch is going to get what she wants and get away clean, which is a terrible shame, because there has been an amazing love story woven into all this intrigue and international ,mystery.....
  10. I find myself loving this story more with every chapter posted. I know we were told to expect only a few more chapters, and I can't wait to read them, but I am also completely not ready for it To End!! AARGHHH!!!
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