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Wow josh's voice must be spectacular dolly doesn't sing with a lot of male singers.(ya ya I know I grew up with country including Dolly,Porter,George and Conway) beautiful wedding and they pulled it off with almost no press. I'm glad they kept Jonathan I'm also glad he was removed from head of josh's details. He is good but not quite experienced enough to have that screw me attitude yet. He should have stayed with his gut that night not let be talked out of it. As to the rest of the detail yeah they should have been gone a long time ago. They didn't want to guard a Gay boy with history, boo hoo they prolly won't guard anything again so they should be happy...remember that saying remember what you wish for.....I'm surprised they have let Patrick go for over a week without anyone checking on him, something is wrong.
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So the glee club isn't happy when josh got another class to showcase his talent after they voted him out. Which is funny, he was brought in as their solo talent, the class voted him out for their friend now they basically sucks. To top it off the other class that really needed the soloist now has Josh. So why aren't they happy they got what they wanted their friend in the solo position. Remember watch what you wish for.....you just might get it. And edger accusing franklin of stealing a student...how edger was the one that allowed josh to be voted out of the club. Therefore josh was a free agent and had been back in his regular music class for quite a few weeks before he was moved to franklin class. So he lost twice lol. Daniel and Barbara congrats!!. Finally Liz got what's owing to her and God I don't want to be Jonathan when he hears about the bowling alley.
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Everyone talks about how the swim team was wrong, how the coach was wrong. But what about chris and josh what they did was wrong in the first place. If they don't want to take the team and practices properly then drop the team but the disrespect that they should the team and the coach was the initial wrong. After the first 25laps they should have been kicked from the practice with detention. The coach should not have redid the laps and Definetly not the whole team unless it was a stated practice right from the start of the season. The swim specially the captain were wrong taking it out on the two boys and josh was doubly wrong with his retaliation. But worst of all until the very end nothing was said about chris getting the same thing it was all josh this and josh that. And Cesar needs to let it rest its done and oversight. And coach shouldn't have dropped the ball leaving the swim team alone for ten minutes which allowed josh and chris to be hurt. So he has no one to blame for himself for his watchers.
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Ya know Mr Anderson seems like a good guy but even in Jacobs story he dropped the ball at the end but he did it early in this story. One thing I will say for him is he did scrabble to repair once he realized what had happened. My question is will it be too little to late. Will Martha get out and continue to harassment and try to kill those kids. And what about those officers and security detail they will get nothing after being shot.
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Looks fire has a backbone and knows how to use it. Atoki won't like the assault because he has a good heart. Even though V may not fully understand what he is feeling he knows why he has to do whatever does. And given what Aris planned to do even after beating Atoki up, there will be nothing that can be too painful or too long in happening. After all everything that Aris did in his training wasn't overnight so V really should repay with the same effort..right? After all what's that saying again...oh right... Payback is a Bitch...... So enjoy the show Aris.
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They sleep in the same room does it really matter whether it's in the same bed or not. Basically what the adults was doing was putting a display of sweets and cakes in front of a diabetic and saying you can touch you can look but you can't eat. And doing this everyday lol. Daniel and Barbara I think is cool they unknown to each other love each other but on the other hand they must be prepared for the media. He is the governor she us his secretary you figure out what the backlash will be.
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What's a guy to do, no matter what he does he ends up hurt and disappointed. The Glee club and the swim team both areas josh excelled in gave them win after win and what do they do to him turn their backs on him. All the blame is put on josh when it was the swim team that kicked him to the curb and the glee team that kicked him out. The glee club was actually worse in that they chose a good friend over their best singer and put the singer to the back if it didn't work out which showed last year that it wouldn't they could fall back on josh to pull them out of the fire. Josh gave up holidays and time to learn piano and guitar to do the solos and this is how they repay him...yet because he has issues with trust they treat his like a baby who is having a temper tantrum. Grow up people you made the choice you deal with the consequences
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You really like to screw with your readers. Yeah I actually agree with Jonathan not being able tobadopt Cesar. I think it's great that they found another friend to adopt Cesar, yeah it sucks thst they won't be at the same school josh desperately needs a close friend with him and everyone knows that Cesar is josh's boyfriend which will make him a target. But get over yourself Cesar if you think that you are entitled to live with josh being his boyfriend and that you will split up unless you live their then you really don't love or trust josh.
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This chapter brought tears to my eyes, yes talking behind josh's back was the last straw but he is punishing everyone for Eric wrong. Eric outed them they were in the wrong but josh needs to at least hear them out first just like he told Jonathan when he assumed they broke the rule and had sex. It works both ways. Yes jish might be harder to protect but hiding him in the house and punishing him for being Gay isn't the way to do it. If his men can't do the job get those that can. Jonathan is the boss of security which means he is the one that is responsible for any mistakes what makes him any different than Martha resting josh as not worthy to have the same respect and life as his brothers.
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Josh's friends are teenagers spontaneous but I really didn't think they were so selfish. Jonathan is just as bad. Jumping to conclusions then going against his bosses orders. The friends pulled the stunt with their lame ass excuses Friday night they isolated josh all weekend . If they knew josh at all did they really expect him to react any different. And Jonathan sure it might be a bitch of a job but why not come up with places for the kids to go instead of just flat out no. Why should josh be punished for the security detail having to work rather than sitting around at home.
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It doesn't say much for a relationship if you have to have voyeurs or fish getting caught to have good sex, pat and frank need to reevaluate their relationship. Not one person showed up for josh I understand Cesar but what about his brothers or grandmother's and even josh realized that his friends excuses were lame. Something was up their.
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Yes what Bernice did was funny as hell but she went to far if the tables had been turned would the group be laughing. Not only that but payback is a bitch and weveblearned howvliz likes to payback. As to Cesar I knew something was up with his dad but didn't expect this. So by the looks of it Jonathan is going to be a dad with a child just over a decade younger than him, hopefully that doesn't come back to bite all of them in the ass. I can just see him explaining this to a date. Yes this is my son yeah he is only 11 or12 years younger than me, should go over well don't you think.
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Josh's history might have meant well but he wouldn't have pulled that stunt with any other student so no Jonathan didn't go to far the teacher did. I agree with Al if they had pulled the bill and posted in the corner the republic party would have seen this as a win. They didn't like what Al said and did so they pulled this childish stunt. They are the ones that got reprimanded and had to sulk in the corner. The Governor said this is what he is going to do they agreed in the meeting with, they are the ones that reneged. They paid the price. Great chapter.
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Why is the danger always in the least likely place. Keith was a total surprise for the boys, I thought there was something off with him but you were so good with the Zane distraction. But at least it gave him his answer concerning Riley so hopefully that is resolved. Hopefully Jesse isn't too badly hurt, nothing that a good cleaning and bandage won't cure. Great chapter hopefully we won't have to wait as long for the next one.
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I hope that Rich either does have or gets a significant other he is to good a guy to be alone. Daniel and Barbara I like that they would make a nice couple. All is back and we finally find out when he got his job. The attorney dude us a prick, but what can I saying guess they need some comedy relief.
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I can't believe that Cesar was surprised that he was asked to go with Josh he's his boyfriend who else would he ask. I'm surprised the coach let chris go, not sure what it is about the coach but I don't like him. He is to quick to assume josh was at fault when the detail took chris down, in the pool debacle he didn't give a damn about Josh and never backed himwith the team and rumors afterwards. But mostly it took way too long and too much yelling to get chris's father off him, and that doesn't even include the two times he allowed and thought it was a good idea for Chris to be around his dad. So yeah surprised he was allowed to go.
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I'm the glad the brother and sister were hired. Though I am worried about the necessity of having a guard inside the residence now. And I'm not 100% sure that everything is copasetic with Cesar but we will see. And Martha its looks good on ya.
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I'm sorta glad Cesar and his dad got back together as long as he does right by his son. Martha deserves everything coming to her and she better not win that insanity plea. Finally a smart judge was starting to wonder if there were any of those in this story.
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Yes obviously Martha is insane but really should she be able to use that. She shot numerous police officers, she aimed to kill her own son for gods sake. That's just pathetic. I understand why but Cesar's lie will bite him in the butt. And there is Al this must where he is brought to the attention of Daniel. I wondered how that happened.
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Wow those kids will be talking about this for months. The president (their kids remember they won't realize the um not so brilliant president Bush we know)Bon Jovi, Bruce Springsteen wow memorable or what.
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lol they should have let her come out with the gun then they could have shot her and the guys out if their misery, she just will not give up. Liz is even worse,josh went easy on her last time next time she needs the full book thrown at her and her little family too.
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Chris lost any chance of love or even friendship with Josh, he is the one who did and no one else. On the other hand sure bring him back in the group he won't get anywhere with josh and if he tries any funny stuff he will be booted out on his ass or josh will just walk away from the group. Puckett is actually funny kinda reminds me of Liz and Martha
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LOL a bigoted judge and Martha still lost. I can't believe he gave her the right of a weekend a month hopefully the boys are smart and refuse. Bet that judge doesn't get reelected. If Bernice is bi I can see her falling in love with Eric. All in all an interesting chapter...i see chris is still having problems with his father.
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Josh needs to stop going to bat for Liz she will never change and she will continue to go for him. How many times does Martha need to be told that Daniel records every conversation yet she continually speaks of the chance of josh being killed by this church group and she doesn't care actually hopes it happens. And she figures she will get custody of all four kids. I think she lives in the same make believe pcp inhabited world as Liz lmao.
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Yeah Liz and Martha are two if a kind. Gratz to Daniel and Carlos for walking away. Obviously she really doesn't know her husband. Btw I thought you said a couple of chapters ago the divorce was final??
