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Daithi

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  1. Daithi

    Decisions

    I wonder how surprised josh will be when he finds out that his mom has already guessed his secret well both of them actually. Not sure about Frank he sorta came across as there being a chance he will be upset that Max is Gay. Hopefully it's just the secrets that will get not that there is any obligation on max's part to tell anyone his secrets about Chicago. Tom probably went up against Max because of the rumour of him being Gay have to hold his reputation of being a Gay basher for the school up you know. Cause afterall a big masculine lifter sure isn't going to be gay now is he?? Guess he was surprised huh after he picked himself up off the floor. Rofl
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    Fears

    Hmmm isn't their a rule or something against a teacher releasing information from a students personal file especially something like their sexuality that could cause issues. and making students in a public school removing earrings is wrong. How the he'll did that teacher get a get a job and they wonder why kids hate school sheesh.
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    The Beginning

    So both are crushing on each other but don't know and won't say anything cause they don't want to take the chance of blowing there friendship. It will be interesting to see the reaction when they come out to each other. Where do I get the idea that Fleet is going to be a huge pain in the ass for Max?
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    Chapter 3

    I like KC response with the projectile vomit. Thankfully Neil stepped in before the baby suffered to much. Now why can't everyone have the same reaction to the Gay comment. More reaction was made trying to get Ralph to say something in the first place. I actually think the short chapters gives more meaning to the story more so that long chapters with days of info in them, the short chapters direct and keep your attention exactly where it needs to be.
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    Chapter 2

    Three sets of parents and the only ones the baby will let hold her are the two brothers. Bet that is going over well. Why do I get the idea that the Stevens aren't really a part of this little circle. Good chapter.
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    Chapter 1

    Wow you know how to grab a readers attention right off the bat. It may have been a short chapter but you packed a lot of info and emotions into. Comraderie between brothers, despair and sorrow for a lost friend, frustration from mom then emergency mode right after. What's Neil going to do I can just see the confrontations now so sad.
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    Chapter 1

    Welcome back!! And what a way to come back I like Eric he sound like he will fit right in the group. Now Zak will gave a new project, to find a guy for him since by the looks of it Devon is working on being taken. I just hope that TJ is serious and is using Devon as an example since he is like Zak said poster boy for gay. But somehow I don't think he's that stupid but we will see. I'm glad they got Juan, I can't believe he was so stupid to brag about the money he "misappropiated" , and Nadia too. I hope Mattie never finds out that would just about kill him I think, but since she has this great new job in Peru I'm sure he will never find out. What's going on with Dylan I knew as soon as I eard about the headaches and fever it was more than just an infection. Hopefuly its not meningitis or something bad like that. Great to finally see book three and a real singer of a first chapter looking forward to more
  8. He finally got his bass and an amp to boot. I laughed so hard at the whoopy cushion that was priceless. I liked this chapter, Prez was reminiscing. But not as much, new friends were introduced and it was full of laughter, just overall great chapter.
  9. He really hasn't changed his comment about him not wanting to change a thing this year kinda settled that question. Was it intentional him being left in the parking lot..he deserves it but I guess we will have to wait and see whether this is payback or something happened.
  10. Brice's lies are coming back to haunt him. Truthfully I don't know what to think of him . At the beginning of the story I thought he was a vindictive troublemaker that he deserves everything he got. Now he's reaping what he sowed but I still feel a little sorry for him. He seems lost in a maelstrom of his own making. He's sitting on the other side and I don't think he likes it to much.
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    Chapter 20

    Steve and Robert are fine Carlos I don't trust, I think he has a hidden agenda just not sure what it is yet. I like the principal I don't think he is another Mr. Henderson but time will tell. Jackson better watch out for Henderson he is up to something he nearly gets a guard and a bunch of kids killed to protect himself and he blames the govenor when said govenor just saved his bacon. Personally if it had been up to me I would have charged him with multiple counts of attempted murder. To have the gallery to say he did nothing wrong. I truly hope Mr. Henderson gets what he deserves with interest.
  12. Mike is a good friend for all his flightless and hijinks he's always there when anyone needs him. I'm glad things are finally settling down in Prez's mind. It was so cute What Rush did to help Prez feel better. I just love this story.
  13. There have been hints almost from the beginning that the duo was meant to be a trio. I'm not sure what to think about that. If. Pasha and Uzzy together were considered to strong why would they go for a three cord strength that will be even harder to break. I'm not sure what I think of Gabriel he has a soft side and he does seem to care for Pasha. Then all of a sudden there is Uzzy, with an adolescent God wearing nothing but a top hat repeating nothing is as it seems. You got that right something is fishy with this picture just can't put my finger on it. Good chapter, I love stories that make me think and this was definitely. Does.
  14. Good start to the story. I'm glad he left when he saw the ring though his mind was working way before that. I like Lynora she's seems like she is going to be firmly in his corner for him. Can't wait for the next chapter. I also liked the sneak peak in the bar adds a bit of "hmmm who's that " to the chapter.
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    Chapter 3

    What a sad chapter. Atoki had to deal with so much, thank god he had had enough before Aris finished the plans he had for the night for Aris. I really hope Atoki didn't kill Aris with that frying pan, cause I really want V to do the job. And not by hitting him over the head either. Really good chapter but really sad too. Make sure Aris gets what's coming to him.
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    Chapter 13

    It's nice to see joey learned a lot from Jake and his grandfather. I'm glad joeys idea got off tobacco good start. One question I do have why us there no mention if joey seeing a psychiatrist at least for an initial meeting to see if there was answer mental problems after his stay there should gave been something done. and what the heck was up with that night manager.. Let me guess he doesn't like gays and since all the publicity he knows joey is day but maybe not Caleb. What I want to know is why is he still working there and screw his apology that was worse that the initial problem.
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    Chapter 12

    Anyone think it's funny he can go back to work before school. And what going on with Mexico it has to be over 72 hours so did they get into Mexico scott free or what?
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    Chapter 11

    I don't understand joey everything his mother and uncle have done for them and he still wants to have a child to please his mother wish for grandchildren...i think he had brain damage done while he was in that camp. 17 years old not even out of high school and he making deals for children. So on top of everything else he also has a shattered knee lol what else can happen.
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    Chapter 10

    So odds are beth and Dominic could get off scott free for doing this to loey there's nothing anyone can do. Too bad about the judge guess he should have listened to the warnings huh. The parents of all those kids will be jailed eh? I will believe that when I see it lol. At least with Caleb's help joey is at least able to sleep at night. Hopefully they can do something for his eyesight.
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    Chapter 9

    There's is nothing to say. The fact that that guy walked out so full of himself thinking he was righting everything he did to joey. Then to have that cop tell Harold to take joey but leave the rest because they needed to be treated like that to fix them. Why?? They make money off these kids I hope every parent that put there kid in that place is charged with assessors to abuse or whatever else that can be thrown at them. Where the he'll is beth and Dominic they did that to joey for money. It makes me sick.
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    Chapter 8

    I don't want to be that judge when he fully realizes what he's done he's going to wish he was never had woke up fir work that day. We know joey doesn't die because he meets up with Jake in college but what shape will he be in by the time he gets out of there.
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    Chapter 7

    Hmmm do you think they went to far this time...just hope Benson finds joey before it's too late. That guard is a dufus great job he has and he doesn't so well.
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    Chapter 6

    God I thought Jake had a complete life. Well I think joey's is starting to rival it lol.
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    Chapter 5

    Harold is really a good man joey sure knows how to pick his boyfriends. I'm scared for franchise both Beth and Dominic have gone over the edge of looneytoonville and if they kidnap franchise there's nothing joey can do.
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    Chapter 4

    He shouldn't gave backed down on the furniture since basically she stole it from Jacobs house and never paid a cent for it then to turn around and steal it from her own sons house. Joey needs to be very careful he should be mailing her for abandonment of her daughter as well but he just let's everything go I don't know what's up with him.
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