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  1. Daithi

    Chapter 3

    I guess she really liked the furniture huh? She even took the kids clothes which is kinda stupid and where did she get the money?
  2. Daithi

    Chapter 2

    Looks like joey is vetting a backbone but he better be careful cause I don't trust his mother or his uncle. To up and leave her daughter with no excuse isn't that against the law..abandonment or something. I hope Joey has a way to protect his money too.
  3. Daithi

    Chapter 1

    Hmmm guess Joey doesn't have Jake and Alex to lean on anymore so I guess he better get a backbone soon before he's out of money or dead.
  4. Prez is too preoccupied with money and spending it on everyone else figuring he has to pay everyone back. Payback to mike and Derrick is going to be a bitch cause I don't think the opera is all of it. It will be fun to watch.
  5. Daithi

    Part 26.

    What a beautiful ceremony and such a fitting icon picture of Sonic and a fierce warrior nose to beak. W irrin is so modest to turn down the Freedom offer but it works out in the end for the three boys and Sonic. Great chapter looking forward to the next one.
  6. Daithi

    Chapter 19

    You know why Henderson did what he did.. He got the promotion so he had to tie up loose ends which was the guard and the kids that got him that promotion. Too bad Jake and all found out about eh? Betcha he doesn't stay in that promotion long. personally considering what they did for that warden they shouldn't have to wear those bracelets for a year...probation til there 21 I agree but those bracelets I don't think so especially since they continued help by getting Flores as well. And they wonder why criminals don't try to turn over a new leaf..who are they supposed to trust.
  7. Daithi

    Chapter 18

    Mud wrestling anyone. I figured Fran already knew about Alex but I loved the way she reassured him. Alex is very lucky to have Fran as his mother.
  8. Daithi

    Chapter 17

    Hmm how will Fran take the news her son is Gay. Prior to working for Jake and all probably not well more fear than anything but now that she works in a house of gay couples probably not hard at all if she doesn't already know. We will see. Still don't trust Mr Henderson not to screw Alex over.
  9. Daithi

    Chapter 16

    o let me see if I get this straight. Mr Henderson uses Alex to control the gangs in the details Centre in order to get a promotion now that's it's almost in the bag he throws Alex to the wind and turns on him faster than a two dollar shore on cracks. So what happens if he gets the promotion he leaves, what happens to Jackson , Alex, Carlos and matt all the ones that got his promotion in the first place. Yeah I'm so glad Alex is able to trust him so much. Thank god for Jake one way or the other he will keep Alex and matt safe.
  10. Daithi

    Chapter 15

    I like Mr. Baird he seems like nice guy he sure loves talking to the kids every weekend. Three times in one hour huh? Can tell they are teenagers.
  11. Daithi

    Chapter 14

    I understand why they are doing what they are doing but Henderson and Jackson are really stretching Alex one slip and he is dead. The job thing looks like it will be a good thing bjt only if it gets off the ground.
  12. Daithi

    Chapter 13

    Twist and turns all over the place. According to bobby he wants to be safe but Alex and Carlos thinks he is going go be brought in as a snitch which means there lives are in jeopardy. Matt and Alex's love life seems to be spreading far and wide which endangers them even more if this keeps up they won't make seventeen let alone twenty one.
  13. Daithi

    Chapter 12

    I'm not surprised at the top to bottom ratio with the boys granted if Alex actually had the personality he portrays in the gangster model he would never bottom but his real personality is a far cry from that add to the fact that he loves matt so they do balance out. Wonder what Ashton is up to trying to protect himself or get rid of Alex guess we will have to wait and see. By the way what part of a uniform can be hidden in a shampoo or shave creamed bottle that they needed to be dumped out.
  14. Daithi

    Chapter 11

    Hmmm as much as Flores says so I don't think Alex is safe. But at least he got to go to his father's funeral.
  15. Daithi

    Chapter 10

    I'm surprised at Carlos I thought for sure he would out Alex. Alex is walking a really fine line between being and playing a gangster.
  16. Daithi

    Chapter 9

    LOL talk about getting caught with your pants down...now let's hope Alex can get everything under control.
  17. Daithi

    Chapter 8

    Ewwww somebody got a Bobbit procedure..nasty.Hmm wonder if size does matter. This will be the brealing point for Alex is he going to break free or stay a gangster.
  18. Daithi

    Chapter 7

    I was wrong it wasn't Diego I wasn't expecting bobby though. Thank god for Dr. Whitmore and Jake. Hopefully they got to Alex in time. I hope matt is handling this alright.
  19. Daithi

    Chapter 6

    Hello Diego. Now was it a good thing or not for Alex to go to the med wing.
  20. Daithi

    Chapter 5

    Why the heck they sending Diego back there and concurrent years what was the point of even charging him he just committed a free murder.
  21. Daithi

    Chapter 4

    Okay a new guard pulling Alex out is not a good thing.
  22. Daithi

    Chapter 3

    Alex needs to be careful you can only juggle so many masks before one slips.
  23. Daithi

    Chapter 2

    I don't envy Alex or Carlos having to walk the line of looking bad while trying to stay good. Thankfully between Jackson and Mr. Henderson he hopefully will stay safe. I can't believe Matt taking all this in and backing up Alex who he only met a few days ago.
  24. Daithi

    Chapter 1

    I read some of this when you first writing it so now I'm catching up. This Alex doesn't seem like the same Alex that did the shootings and everything. I can see where the title comes from. I'm glad Jake gave Alex this second chance. Matt is a cutie Alex is going to have some hard times in his future lol.
  25. Daithi

    Chapter 57

    I hope Alex is alright. And truthfully do you really think that Jake won't find out who donated the kidney. It's not like Alex will pop up after the surgery and act like nothing has happened and now that there is complications it will be even more apparently. Jake will find out one way or the other. Gloria is an ass she started in on the wrong foot when she got there and continued on. Hello she is tired of having to wait in a hospital for Jake how do you think Jake feels or Al or Dewayne give me a break. Moore is worse than Gloria look at everything Jake has done for that program and Moore still wants him gone. Jake isn't the one that needs to leave its Moore and Henley, if Moore us the type of leaders that the military want holy he'll watch out for the country. And don't even get me going on his gay comment. College. May needs to get off his ass and retire the Major just like his doctor wants now before the program is completely ruined. Now hopefully next chapter has both Jake and Alex back on their feet.
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