Alex Sweeney
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No, your spelling is fine! Yeah, I'm looking forward to the threesome as well. I always look forward - uh, am I allowed to say that here? Yes, next chapter should be a little bit, um, warmer? Thanks for the review, much appreciated X
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“I need some pajamas.” “What?” Miao Shou looked down at Nico, eyebrows raised. “What do you think I am, the YMCA? I can lend you a pair of crotchless panties if you want. Something tasteful in leatherwear?” “That's not gonna help my situation at all.” Nico looked around to make sure Ryan hadn't followed him out of the room they'd been given. “I can't sleep in the nude with him. He'll just take it as an invitation.” “So sleep in your skivvies.” “Eeew.” “You shouldn't be so prissy,” Miao Shou
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I feel sorry for Soubi. He needs to get rid of Rin - I'm tempted to say he needs to get rid of both those guys and find himself somebody else! Rin seems uncaring and just walked out on him and Ryo doesn't seem to know what to do about his own feelings. Well, onto the next chapter I'm really enjoying this!
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“You can stay.” Miao Shou stood up and pointed a finger at Ryan. “But you – no cop stuff.” “What cop stuff?” Ryan asked. “I know what cops are like. No matter where you are, you like to poke around, finding things out, getting into everything. Just – don’t.” “What do you think, Shou?” Ryan asked. “You think I might find out your Japanese bathhouse is really a brothel? Everyone in the city knows that already.” “Don’t abuse my hospitality is all I’m saying,” Miao Shou said. “I’ll have one of m
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Thanks very much. Some of this is even a mystery to me...Yes, we've talked about the two stories with same name problem and we're now going to update on different days so hopefully nobody will be seeing chapters from both stories at the same time.
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I've got one cop who has a Harley but I think the Crown Vics are just the battered old ones out of the motor pool. Yeah, Rims, why *else* would he have that name?
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Thanks! His name is Mikio but, yeah, Miki for short. That certainly was a bit unprofessional - he sometimes gets a good idea and runs with it
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Thank you! Glad you're still here!
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Yeah, I don't remember exactly when I had the idea. I've been writing about these guys for 8 or 9 years... but it seemed to make sense. I mean, everyone likes to be with people like themselves, right?
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1. Google 2. Wikipedia 3. Facebook 4. Ebay 5. Amazon This is not my own personal list. It's just derived from what people around me and on the net seem to like/use most and I'm betting some of these are the sites that have most changed the way people do things as diverse as chatting, shopping and research.
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Nom. Om. Nom.
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“Did you just say – killed Nico?” Nico demanded. Sounded like some other Nico was having an even worse day than him. He started to wonder if it was War-On-Nico day and nobody had told him. “Uh – yeah.” Matsumoto looked – he looked a little – what? Puzzled? Nico had never seen him look that way before. “What’s going on?” Nico asked the bemused detective. “We have to leave,” Matsumoto said. “Something very, very strange is going on, but if we stay here, it’s likely that Ryan’s going to get arre
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I'd settle for jelly beans, Morticia stalks with no flowers on top and a breakfast date with cornflakes and no milk! Uhm, I have no bf, can you tell?
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Tell me about it. I lost all my bloody tomatoes last year. No red ones, no green ones for pickle. Just rain, rain, rain and all the sun came too early in the year to be any use. (UK)
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Father Figure by George Michael. I'm doing a picture for Valentine's Day called Heaven is a kiss and a smile - which is one of the lines from the song.
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Uhm, just flying. AAAAAAARRRRGGGGHHHH!!! Yes, those are the three exclamation marks that signify this subject completely unhinges me. I spent days out of my life a few years back travelling across UK and taking a ferry back and forth to Ireland, rather than fly. It is not nice.
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No. I wouldn't. And I'm more grateful than I can say, to be able to say that. There've been many, many moments in my life when I'd rather have been anyone, anything other than what I am. I'm glad I've got to the point where I can appreciate myself to some extent.
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Lol, I haven't put any horse meat in there yet! But there's time... Thanks very much for the review, the feedback is much appreciated. Yes, that's my picture. I did it a while back when I first started writing this story. I have a longstanding addiction to the likes of Ed McBain and Hill Street Blues. This isn't the only milieu I write, but it's one I love dearly
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Thanks very much. I just posted chapter 2 earlier today - it's waiting for approval - and I left out a lot of the dropped letters. I don't think it's harmed the story at all to lose them, so there's probably no need for them to be there in the first place. I guess I didn't realise it had such a high irritation factor!
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The door swung open, but not for long. Ryan grabbed it and banged it shut, causing a cry of pain and the sound of something breaking. He then wrenched it open again. The man who’d been opening the door stumbled forward and fell to his knees, blood pouring down his face. But there were two of them and the second had an MP5 machine pistol, was raising it to fire. Nico dived for the man’s legs as if he were sacking a Hail Mary quarterback. They went down together and the gun flew to one side. “Fu
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I just started reading this and I'm really enjoying it. I like your main character. I think you've got him just right. Gay kids aren't necessarily smarter than other kids but I think they use their minds a lot more. They learn to think and plan and dissemble and they can't afford to be mentally lazy, because they've always got to consider how they appear to others and who's watching. I'm looking forward to the rest of it, gonna relax with it after work. Thank you
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I would multi-play. I haven't played it for years though. The new one is just so pretty!
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No, no, no, I hope it's backwards compatible! I still have to make space for a PS2 for FFXII and GTA San Andreas.
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Thanks very much - no s on forward, yeah, that's one of my blind spots as is spelling broccoli. I only drop letters when my characters sound as though they're dropping letters... I'm sorry you don't like it.
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Thank you! It won't all be funny, though. I'm having a bit of trouble with the words you can put on to say what it's like; I hope I can change them chapter by chapter as some of it'll be a bit grim.
