jaack65
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Dont stop here. Your readers are clamoring for Kieran.
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The story has so many twists and turns sometimes I was a little confused. But as the story progressed things coalesced to the point where we are left at a cliffhanger. I don't know where to find the next part of this epic story. Very well written, proof-reading way excellent and I could see the purple & green eyes of the clones & humans. The year is 2018 and I have not found part 2 which does not have Dreams of Humanity in the title. I subscribed to gayauthors.org and nifty.org because I enjoyed the stories so much. Authors should not be ripped off because many stories aren't individually priced as does Amazon or Audible. Thanks to dkstories for the adventure with all the characters!
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Wow, thhis is really heavy even for an adukt of many DECADES. This truly moved me. I have too much of the hurt in me that I haven't faced ,but this single line has done a lot to help me. I needed this more than anything that someone has ever said to me. I changed it slightly "Isn't there enough hurt in MY world already?". I put out the barbs after suffering the slings and arrows of those who say they love me. Thanks for the story so far. Empathy blurring the line between self and another's emotional state. Keep writing, Thanks
