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LOL... Like Do Over, I accidentally read the 2nd part of the series first. (which turned out quite well in the end for my DO experience.) I haven't gotten to Waiting for the sign yet, and part of me doesn't want to drift from the happy/sweet scene that I've come into with chapter 12 of Rising Star... Guess I'll just have to be patient. lol. Rising star is deff sweet (in both ways cute and awesome) so far. Great work, Dan. I need a good love story to bump my spirits up a few notches after the past month... Brax

ROFL. Yeah, deff a married couple now guys *Grins evily* bickering just like my parents! In other news: GOD i feel old... I started reading DK when I was like 17... I'm 24 now... lol

*Sighs with relif*

RAWRZ need more Dan story foods. I re-read stuff too much and too quickly... >.> Anyway, I like where this is going... Would love to see more manipulating of the fam members... Saw a lot of that with Do Over and I love it. Makes me grin evily and laugh maniacally.

Some of us bought it twice. XD I left my first copy at the bloody airport half way through...

Can't wait to read the next installation of Rich Boy, and really think Dan should publish this series as it's VERY good. I'd buy copies just to give them to friends XD. RB is on my facebook profile and a couple others... In personal news I applied for an inter-company position/transfer/promotion from Atlanta to Sacramento. I doubt I have a decent chance of getting it, but if you hear of some crazy Georgia boy in town getting everyone riled up... Well... XD.

MMMMM Re-read the origonal, after gorgeing myself on the re-write and I have to admit. I like Dan's "Dark Side" I'm really hoping the sequel is posted soon also... i feel a need for mooooreeee ^.^ Can't wait to see where the new one goes, but I'm really hoping to get my grubby lil hands on the sequel. <3 Brax PS: One day Dan'll write something that just might get me in some tight baseball pants he seems to love so much. If he's more dominant XD.

Dan you are an evil evil man. One that is really good at writing riveting endings that make you roll over and beg for more. So moar please!!! Looking forward to the next installation of RB tho.... I've gotten enough emotional trauma over your evil DOAF story.

Twas a very good chapter indeed.

double post.

Blasted cliffhangers!

I suppose that Dan's stories have impacted my choice to buy and carry guns as much as or more than GhostRyder's stories, so I decided to post this here as well. http://www.southernvoice.com/2008/12-19/ne...alnews/9577.cfm I really enjoyed Dan's stories over my years, and saw that while guns can be used for bad, they can also be used to protect us gays, a particularly vulnerable group... Anyway... just thought I'd post it... Brax

I suppose my decision to carry a gun was partly impacted by Kombat Kids, among other things... Anyway, recently there was an article of me and a group I am associated with, the Pink Pistols. http://www.southernvoice.com/2008/12-19/ne...alnews/9577.cfm I bought my first gun when I turned 21... Now I'm 22... I suppose I'm the closest legal thing to a Kombat Kid, hand gun wise... Brax

Yeah.... I just re-read the series for like the 4th time... really hoping for more...

I must say i picked a great place to take the SS at too "I said as he wiped the juices off my back"

LAWL... Just for that I think I might write DK in... HAHA! In other news, I might also send this post to Michaelangelo Singorlie (prolly spelled his name wrong) from Sirius OutQ (hes their political news analist/talk host.) He'll love this.

This is true. You'll have to talk about the guy that is "like super old" and that "other guy" and then YOU'LL have to run for election!

Sorry Dan, but I was re-reading Do Over yet again and noticed this... just had to post it cause it was so funny... http://sectionnine.net/brax/DoOverMccain.png

BLOOD AND GUTS No story involving lots of firearms is any good without a good amount of blood and guts! To be honest Jap's one shot one kill moments were my favorite. Blowing up some heads makes for good reading... but then I'm a crazy gun nut myself so...

You guys are so hung up on the fact that this company is a private company 'like blackwater' as you guys put it... FYI, blackwater is a contracter working for the US GOVT not just oil companies and diplomats. It would not surpise me one bit if this special department of the govt that we already know exists that is interested in mages just REALLY wants to get a hold of worthington. What I just don't understand is why Worthington doesn't use some other means to communicate with the outside world... AKA: Compel a squrrel to hitch a ride on a passing tractor trailer to Clareville and alert friends (Worthingtons magic would be more than enough to let people know there is trouble). He hasn't tried signaling DOWN... we know that the dwarfs LOVE the ground... We know that there were active communications going on right before this started, after a day or so with no response, someone's going to check into things a little more. Another thought, which I kept screaming in my head while reading the story and while reading your responses on the forums that I'm finally going to explode and say it... HELLOOO Anyone here ever hear of wire tapping?? Patriot act anyone?!? Worthington has been sending emails with mage meeting schedules and stuff for months now... someones going to see that shit and while it might sound crazy to one department it might raise alarms in another. I'm surprised no one thought "oh shit, the kid gasped because the private security firm ALREADY apprehended Jamie's family!!!" No one found it odd that the govt randomly found Worthington in the middle of no where? This would be something more to gasp about than anything else... 'Everyone associated with Worthington' the 'govt' guy said... That includes the entire Phoenix group... AND... this crap about 'ooh i have lawyers, we'll trap them in the legal system' WTF is he thinking... quite obviously, these guys are operating a bit outside the regular realms of the law... This isn't something that would ever go to regular court... if even top secret court. Worthington is in for some tough lessons in the days ahead, and while you guys might forsee him escaping this escipade... well... this IS a DK story, which means he's probably going to get deeper in shit than not before escaping... Theres always another shoe out there... AND DK does tend towards trying to keep things half way realistic... so some super powerful mage Worthington saving the day is probably out of the picture for the next few chapters... If he's going to get out of this situation with the shirt on his back and the skin too, he's going to get help from an outside source most likely... Just my thoughts, maybe I'm wrong... But I've read enough of DK's stories enough times to see a few things coming before they get around... He's smarter than the average writer. or bear as my grandma always put it... Brax

i am kind of upset about this... though, i suppose, it does make it more realistic... and Jeremy really wasn't really ever going to be happy with a Dark Mage... even one walking the grey path.... I'm really interested in seeing how the military and camp things pan out... the govt really seems to be getting involved in the affairs of Magic... though, the sending of emails isn't by any means free from the govts prying eyes... could they be spying on the agenda of the Phoenix Mages group? Brax

http://www.kpho.com/news/15321511/detail.html Those damned demons are at it again!

I might show up, depending on the job situation by then... also depends on rather or not the bf is at home during that part of the summer... if hes here in GA, I'll probably stay here... If hes back home in LA for a few weeks though theres a good chance that I might show up.

I agree. This is a DK story, and as Dan puts it "You just have to wonder when the other shoe will drop." Or something along those lines Anyway, I really hope that the link comes back into play, as I really enjoyed it and what it could do, however it may have to be removed from the story at least mostly due to the fact that it indeed does just make them too powerful for even one of my stories... Eagerly looking forward for the next chapter, Braxton

great, GREAT story Dan. And I will be eagerly awaiting future chapters Brax