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Thank you so much for this thoughtful review. You’ve captured Johnny’s crossroads perfectly. He’s spent most of his young life being defined by the ocean—by the muscles, the trophies, the image everyone else projected onto him. Now that the thrill of being on top has dulled, he’s finally noticing the quiet parts of himself he’s ignored for years. That restlessness you picked up on is exactly what’s pushing him toward something new. His interest in filming is the first thing in a long time that feels like his, not something the world chose for him. And meeting Bruce Buck… well, that’s the moment the ground shifts. Bruce opens a door Johnny didn’t even realize was there, and you’re right—those new experiences and feelings are ones he’s never given himself permission to explore before now. I’m really glad the opening chapter landed for you. The title does hint at what’s coming, and Johnny’s future is about to get a lot more complicated—and a lot more interesting.

Thank you for such a thoughtful read. Johnny’s been at the top of the surf world for a long time, and you’re right—on paper, that should mean comfort and freedom. But he’s the kind of person who burns through himself faster than he burns through money. What he’s really wrestling with isn’t finances so much as identity: the feeling that the thing that once defined him no longer fits the way it used to. That’s the part he’s never learned how to navigate. As for Bruce Buck—your instinct is sharp. He’s not an easy man to read, and he isn’t meant to be. But that pull you noticed is real. Bruce has a way of stepping into a room and bending the air around him, and Johnny feels that immediately, even if he doesn’t fully understand why yet. Their dynamic is only beginning to take shape, and the tension between clarity and mystery is part of what’s drawing Johnny forward. I’m glad the opening chapter landed for you. There’s a lot ahead for both of them.

Thanks Chris!

Hollywood and Vine Changes In the world of surfing, my name rose like a tide that never receded—Johnny Day. My reputation didn’t just drift in shoreline whispers or echo in the applause of competitions. Some days it felt etched into the tides themselves. The ocean seemed to recognize me, to shift and breathe in time with my presence. I wasn’t just another figure in California’s surf scene. I was the one the Pacific shaped itself around. Maveric

Aloha All

I finally got it Drew is AI Generated.

No its mine!

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You should know by now that he is incapable of doing that its a mental thing!

Johnny Day the top surfer in the California surf scene. He is the top surfer until finds there is more to his life then surfing.

Thank you so much for this incredibly generous review. I’m truly honored by your words. Knowing you’ve read my other work makes your praise mean even more, and I’m grateful that this story resonated with you the way it did. From the first chapter to the last, I tried to keep the tone, pacing, and emotional thread steady, so hearing that the constancy held true for you is deeply rewarding. Readers like you—waiting for each new chapter, sharing your thoughts, and investing in these characters—are what make the writing worth every hour spent. I’m thrilled you’re looking forward to the next book. The journey continues, and I can’t wait to share what comes next. Thank you again for reading, supporting, and taking the time to leave such a thoughtful message.

I can hardly wait!

Tonight I am making for dinner! Saucy Salsa Verde Steak Fajitas with bell peppers and onions

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Thank you so much for this thoughtful review. I’m glad the ending of Book One resonated with you. Louis’s return to France — and his father’s hard but necessary counsel — was meant to close his arc with a sense of humility and growth rather than simple defeat. And I’m especially happy that the recognition of our trio struck the right note. Their journey has been long, bruising, and deeply earned, so seeing the King bind them together as a true family under an Earl’s house felt like the right culmination for everything they’ve endured.

Thank you so deeply for such a generous and thoughtful review. It means a great deal to hear that the history, the language, and the small bits of old terminology added to your enjoyment rather than weighed the tale down. Watching these three grow into a true family has been one of the most rewarding parts of writing this story, and I’m glad their bond spoke to you. As for what awaits them… there are indeed surprises ahead, and their path will not be a gentle one. I’m already shaping the next tale, and I’m excited to share where their journey leads when the time is right. Thank you again for reading with such heart. Your enthusiasm is a gift that keeps the story alive.

Good one. I think he is glowing in the dark already!

How many chapters do you have Gary?😆

Tonight I am making for dinner! Fried Chicken Cordon Bleu with mashed potatoes and garlicky broccoli 😃

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Here Gary good Job.

Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts. I’m really glad the ending felt perfect to you. Louis’s defeat brings closure, while Kaylen taking Ronan and Thomas as his sons marks a powerful new beginning. And with the King naming Kaylen Earl of Lincoln, his journey comes full circle in a way that feels both earned and meaningful. I appreciate you taking the time to read and respond — it truly means a lot.