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  1. Pain passes hopefully and writing about it can only help
  2. Well I have finished my 3rd reading of this wonderful story thanks so much
  3. Enjoyable as always
  4. What better way is there to compliment an author then to say this is my 3rd time reading this story Killer story
  5. I loved these poems and the hearts warmth they hold. Very touching
  6. What a powerful poem good job
  7. You have taken us from the Darkness to Bright of forgiveness and love. Love cant heal all things no matter how much we may want it to. But hope can some times over come darkness and heal. And in this story it has I would like to believe it has. Chester's ordeal out of love for some one who is so damaged may will lead to a brighter life for him in the end. And thank god for Jordy's love for Chester. Great story and well written.
  8. That would be amazing if he did and I would be in love
  9. On my 3rd read and I find I would say the same things again like WOW
  10. Man love this poem perfect nature ❤️
  11. I love this poem sad but honest
  12. Albert1434

    Chapter 3

    I enjoyed this chapter its well written. I cant wait to see the next chapter.
  13. I just loved this powerful short piece. Once again I get a taste of Gary Magic and find my self wanting more Great dialogue
  14. Albert1434

    Chapter 2

    Good chapter and well edited Read well
  15. Albert1434

    Chapter 1

    I am enjoying this story it is well written
  16. Wow one bad dream I am betting
  17. Albert1434

    Chapter 5

    Great chapter very much enjoy it. Fun watching the charter development like how Jarrod and want to have Tony along for pool night nice. Thanks
  18. Albert1434

    Chapter 4

    A great chapter I loved the dialog it flows so naturally and believably well done. I love how Peter stood up to Eric about Julie. I feel that she is just what the team needs to win games. And we will have to wait and see what happens between Paul and Tony! I think its just what Paul needs. Great Chapter
  19. Albert1434

    Chapter 3

    Well I know nothing about Rules Football. However I am just loving the charter development. And I have learned a thing or two about ARF! I just hope that at some point that Paul finds just the right guy for him. And he wouldn't need to play so many games. Because oh what a tangled web we wave when first we practice to deceive Thanks for a great chapter
  20. Albert1434

    Chapter 2

    This was a good chapter! Sorry for taking so long to get back to reading it The writing is clear and enjoyable. The bit with Rachel Lander and her husband was surprising and I am sure that Julie was never going to hit on her husband
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    This story was every interesting and one that isn't often written about good job!
  22. Albert1434

    Now or Never

    I just loved this story! Such a good one I can see me reading this again. I do hope that maybe you would give some thought to continuing it! So well written Thanks so much for sharing this
  23. I very much enjoyed this chapter. I feel so sorry for Robbie I am sure that he is deeply confused and the sad thing is how many people will get hurt will when he figures it out.
  24. Well that was quite the chapter! I think I have said how much I don't like Alex and no good will come of this I am sure
  25. I love this ending it is perfect I think. So good to see that all is coming together for this happy couple. Bad feelings are on the mend and old firers are rekindled. Masterfully done! Great Chapter
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