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Kayden took for granted that he´d go as well and Damien was equally certain that Kayden stayed at home. It´ll be an interesting morning
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Kayden´s has a lot of friends who all want him and Damien to be happy together, but showing Damien how good friends Kayden and Finn are isn´t a good advice. Hopefully it won´t be too bad
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Presumptions are never good and lying is no good either and not talking to your partner, not asking questions and not telling the truth, that´s a recipe for disaster Hopefully it won´t be too bad
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They are so in love, but they both need to tell each other things and talk. Otherwise their relationship will be in trouble.
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Oh dear, jealousy is such a horrible thing and can cause all sorts of trouble
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It´s nice to see how much Damien loves his little kitten Hopefully Oliver finds someone to love, too.
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Of course Kayden wants to protect Damien, just as Damien wants Kayden to be safe. Damien probably won´t be happy about this but Kayden should tell him. And while learning to protect Damien, Kayden also learns to protect himself. So glad to read about them again
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Hello Yumi and welcome to GA!
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Some people are capable of doing horrible things to each other and to children. Hopefully James and Jon can go through the adoption and give that boy a loving and supportive home. Looking forward reading more about the house and Tony´s reaction to it.
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Seriously Now! - An Epilogue, Sort Of…
Suvitar commented on Aditus's story chapter in Seriously Now! - An Epilogue, Sort Of…
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I was reading this on my phone and it was ok until Sandro´s letter. First sentence and I was in tears, had to stop reading and wait till I was at home....crying over your phone in a crowded bus is very embarassing Oh, I loved Sox, this is Jonah your can opener. That´s exactly how my cats see me
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Bracelets made of someone´s hair, your ex´s hair, is creepy, but the way Ren had explained it to Michael was actually rather sweet, but still weird. No matter what happens next, someone will get hurt, and they all are hurting already
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Jonah might be the next super model, but he is facing a tough decision. Jonah loves Ren but wants Sandro. I feel sorry for Sandro, he probably will end up with a broken heart, that´s what always happens in stories. The sweet and lovable guy gets hurt, when the not so sweet but equally lovable guy gets the man he wants.
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So the truth is out finally Sort of understand why Ren said what he said to Chris, but if he loved Jonah he should have tried to explain, not to turn his back on him. He didn´t even try and he knew Jonah had issues, didn´t easily trust people. I´m glad Chris wasn´t the bad guy after all, Jonah needs his friends.
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That was so beautiful a perfect date.
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I just want to say that I hope Sandro´s isn´t the next broken heart and thank you for the recipe, I´ll try it one day
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I really, really expected Matteo to tell Jonah to contact Ren. I wanted him to say, Jonah, phone him, talk to him, ask him what happened. But no. Instead Jonah cut his hair At least I don´t have to wait for the new chapter to find out happens next Did I mention, I totally enjoy reading this story
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Why do I expect Ren to arrive? I find it hard to believe it´s over between them, not entirely sure I trust Chris' version of the events. And I was looking forward hearing Matteo and Rick´s opinion of the matter. But still, another great chapter
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Men trust their ears less than their eyes
Suvitar commented on Aditus's story chapter in Men trust their ears less than their eyes
Oh, dear! That was intense. The scene in the restaurant was perfectly written, and I felt so bad for Jonah. I actually thought it was just a huge mistake and there´d be an innocent explanation to it all, but after what Chris told, not so sure anymore. But why would Chris lie? Chris is a friend, right? Jonah should have talked to Ren before running off.... -
Perfect weekend and next something horrible that breaks Jonah´s heart
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This was a sweet chapter with all the makings of a happy ending.....which obviously never came since Jonah is in Sicily with Zach... and Ren is not there.
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I was just joking, but thanks and I did vote
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You forgot the vegetarian option Last time I´ve had bacon must have been 1982 in London
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Birthday Party and Jealous Conniption Fits
Suvitar commented on Aditus's story chapter in Birthday Party and Jealous Conniption Fits
Eric is weird and possessive, but hopefully not dangerous. Poor Jonah, he does have strange friends. What next? Better read on -
Looking at Ren´s picture for few weeks and there´s the knight in white...no in black...armour, ready to rescue the prince from the wicked witch....or something like that. Loved it anyway You really have created some great characters
