Miles Long
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Robbie is painfully naïve, painfully so. Thanks a bunch.
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I love this chapter even more the second time because of many reasons, thanks.
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Any chapter with Cody is a great chapter. I think he's wrong about Max though. Thanks for the work.
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Opposites really do attract don't they. I love the edgy pace you've created, it's like listening to aggressive music while driving .
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I think Stef's advice of giving Robbie Brad's blessing is about the worst idea ever . Great chapter, thanks.
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This was the beginning of the end of Robbie for me. As much slack as I gave him for taking on loving the tsunami that is Brad, this just made me want to shake him. Aside from all that, it was a spectacular way to start the story. Thanks.
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I'm super excited about Matt's revelation. As much as I love Wade I think he was a crutch for Matt in some ways. Matt could be all kinds of slutty and use Wade as a safety net to avoid dealing with the aftermath of his actions. Now if Matt is going to slut it up he has to own all the aftermath. Thanks for the work.
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Favorite CAP story! I love revisiting it despite the fact I know it will never end happily for the heroes. Thank you!
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Thanks for this latest chapter, although that last bit was a little kick to the gut; I guess it's better than a kick to the balls though .
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Go Matt, King of the High Road. This chapter read a little like a happy ending chapter so I'm looking forward to what you have in store for us next. Thanks.
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Granger has a pretty charmed existence, even the turmoil ends up in his favor. I look forward to reading what new adventures the orders will bring. Thanks.
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It was a happy Arbor Day, thank you. Nice reconciliation chapter, I'm glad Matt is finally letting go of some of that poor me petulance even if you had to make me teary by bringing Robbie back in a spirit hallucination. Is Barry related to CS Lewis because the closet he's creating for Zach rivals Narnia any day? Loving the story, thanks again.
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Shitting bricks? And here I thought Robbie was the kinky one . Thanks Arbour and friends for another compelling chapter.
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Happy Belated Easter and thank you for the chapter. It's great to have Matt's insight although I don't necessarily agree with his take on situations. He seems more black and white than the others and it makes him come off as a bit immature. I hope he finds himself; I think that would be the greatest tribute to Robbie as I'm not really sure Robbie was ever sustainably comfortable with himself.
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Curious about Caroline and Treadway, but more moved by William's excitement about mirroring his father. Absent as he may be George seems like he's going to be a good parent. Thanks.
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It's probably best that Will sticks to his guns. Wally and Clara aren't going to like him no matter what, I have a feeling they would probably feel that way even if Will was straight. They thought Will being gay gave them a chance to manipulate Zach with fears over his future. I'm proud of Zach for showing some back bone. Good work, thanks.
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Mark Arbour you are temptation incarnate with the amount of avarice your work inspires. I come to the end of another great chapter and I immediately want more, more, more. Thanks!
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Thrilling chapter and the character interactions are delightful, thanks.
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Wow, really great chapter. Hopefully JP reaches out to Will sooner rather than later. Thank you for the work!
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Out to sea at last even for a short voyage...Yay for George. Thanks for the work.
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Compliments to you Mark Arbour. I love when a story hooks me and Flux has me. I still think Will is completely out of line although I will give him kudos for taking good advice and trying to reach out to Wally and Clara. Brad shouldn't kowtow to him though; Will is already a bit too full of himself. While it wasn't the best choice for Wade and Brad to hook up it's not a surprise given people tend to shit were they eat all the time. I get Matt's hurt but I find it really hypocritical for him to think Wade's liaison with Brad while Wade and Matt were not together is such a horrendous action. His own actions after discovering about the love connection are proof that he should put the stone down before he breaks one of those glass walls he lives in. Thanks again.
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While I get Matt's anger; I lost some of the newly regained respect I had for him with this stunt. And with that I am officially addicted to this new story, thanks .
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Thank you for this chapter, it's a lovely way to end a story that could not end happily. However, I don't share the viewpoint that Aaron decisions are the reason the Hayes family fell apart. Aaron was 17, of course he was selfish, foolish and made rash decisions; it's part of the job requirement at that age. Fred Hayes' colossal fall from grace is Fred Hayes' fault. For him to have such a complete transformation, Fred was already of questionable stability and was likely to have reacted just as dramatically to finding that Aaron was gay. The real selfishness behind the Hayes family demise is Fred's for his unhealthy regard for Aaron and Martha's for wallowing in her own guilt and letting Fred destroy her family. That's the real tragedy IMHO.
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This chapter slays me every time. I know Steven's going to die but I am always hoping it turns out different. Thanks.
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Granger again shows his generosity by taking Hornblower under his wing. Thanks for the update.
