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URGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH Just when I thought finally!! Now I have to wait another week. I know deep down Cray still loves his dad, and will want to meet him, and with Bob and Drew and Spike behind him, things will work out.

It's great to hear some of the old names popping up. I think we might be in for a quick cross over meeting. I think that chapter could be Splashing in the Desert Sands. I'm very glad that Spike and Cray seem to be on the same wave length as far as their budding relationship is concerned. I wonder if his friends will pick up the change in Spike and Cray.

I don't think we'll see Cray and Spence getting together. He doesn't like that line of work. We've seen in the past that Cray had a crush on Spike, but he wanted him out of the business. I don't know if I can wait till chapter 13 for paths to cross Jack!

Hey Jack, It's good to be back in Vegas baby! I do have to agree with everyone else. Michael sure turned out to be a royal prick. If I was Cray, I would have gotten up and walked out and left Michael to fend for himself to get back to school. Glad to see Bob and Drew are there to support him, and their family bond is still growing and getting stronger. I know they'll need it for the upcoming things you have planned. Keep up the good work.

Nice plug for your other stories mate The winter thaw has come, warm weather, green on the trees. The ending was very interesting one Jack. Like the others I almost thought they would all get away on the jet. Even after all the hell that went on and Rory setting up Thad, you did kinda feel bad for him missing out on his happy ending. It was very upright of him for protecting the two brothers. I can't wait for Vegas though. Ever since the ending with Cray's dad. It's just a build up for a wonderful moment. If you need a beta reader!!!! Sign me up

Another great chapter Jack. I could almost need sunblock I do love the choice of background staff uniforms. How do I get an invite to one of these parties ? It's been raining all day here, and I could use some swim time in the sun.

Anyone else have a feeling that maybe pvt Johnson is the scorpion ? We don't know his first name, and I just keep getting this bad bad feeling when ever he's around.

Wow Jack, Another great chapter! I thought Andy was toast, but I know better from you I knew that switch was something. Lets hope it was on..

I think maybe Eric needs a long talk with Keither and Jensen with (scary i know) Jon. Who else knows the other side better then those two Am I the only one other then the mercenaries touched by the Father Son reunion with the General and his son ? I know their in for a tough way to come, but still, I'm happy that the General got to see his son again.

Wow Jack, glad to be pulled into their world again I just got that Andy was a nod to Drew I like this thrilling turn to the danger. Reminds me of the wild times of Las Vegas. Glad to hear that one will be comming soon, I've been waiting forever to get back to my favorite Vegas guys. Oh and this Chicago boy would be glad to have you back to the windy city!

Well, if their not boyfriends, then I'm rooting for Jansen and Eric to have a nice dance at the wedding I just have this feeling about those two.

Yeah, but to much has gone bad for Pete. It's time for some FAIRY magic!

It just makes me angry for Pete, I know he's not in control of his emotions. I know he's afraid and gonna let it happen, but deep deep deep down I know something will happen. He'll grab Rob and rip his balls off, or Cameron will come knocking on the door. Come on Pete!

I thought the sidebar was new. Looks good and makes it easy to access all your stuff. I also really liked this chapter. The dynamic between the guys and Eric is really nice. It's good that Eric is getting some new friends outside his brothers and Brandon. It's already clear that Jansen is comfortable with Eric as a friend, especially after he helped out at the club. I think Kieth just needs to get past this whole 'employer' thing and they'd all end up as great friends.

I love what the General did. And I was too expecting Eric to yank down those boxers. Oh well, guess we'll have to wait for the strip show to find out. As for the evil cliff at the end of the chapter I think I for see two outcomes to George finding out about their secret strip show: 1. Slezey George sees what an idot he's been with the boys and sees how hot their show really is and takes on their ideas cause he's greedy or 2. Slezey George sees the flyer, finds out what happens and gives the boys the boot. Though that could be a good thing for them, maybe a kick start with this strip show to opening their own club with hot acts.