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Anyone else have a feeling that maybe pvt Johnson is the scorpion ? We don't know his first name, and I just keep getting this bad bad feeling when ever he's around.

I think maybe Eric needs a long talk with Keither and Jensen with (scary i know) Jon. Who else knows the other side better then those two Am I the only one other then the mercenaries touched by the Father Son reunion with the General and his son ? I know their in for a tough way to come, but still, I'm happy that the General got to see his son again.

Well, if their not boyfriends, then I'm rooting for Jansen and Eric to have a nice dance at the wedding I just have this feeling about those two.

I thought the sidebar was new. Looks good and makes it easy to access all your stuff. I also really liked this chapter. The dynamic between the guys and Eric is really nice. It's good that Eric is getting some new friends outside his brothers and Brandon. It's already clear that Jansen is comfortable with Eric as a friend, especially after he helped out at the club. I think Kieth just needs to get past this whole 'employer' thing and they'd all end up as great friends.

I love what the General did. And I was too expecting Eric to yank down those boxers. Oh well, guess we'll have to wait for the strip show to find out. As for the evil cliff at the end of the chapter I think I for see two outcomes to George finding out about their secret strip show: 1. Slezey George sees what an idot he's been with the boys and sees how hot their show really is and takes on their ideas cause he's greedy or 2. Slezey George sees the flyer, finds out what happens and gives the boys the boot. Though that could be a good thing for them, maybe a kick start with this strip show to opening their own club with hot acts.

Thank goodness for pain bringing Brandon to his senses before it became more then just some torn jeans he'd need to explain. I'm glad things ended up with a good mood, but it's the calm before the storm that I fear. I was also pretty moved by Eric's true pain and regret at what he did. We now know Eric is definitely on a tightrope on that fence and he could fall either way soon.

I love your writing and surprises , but when I realized it was the scar at the end of the chapter I just had to groan. Should I get some crackers now for that cheesy tactic :wacko:

I don't like how the bad guys keep getting away. Dimitri keeps escaping to easily. Someone, anyone, just kill his a** already! If I have to sit through one more of his assassin monologue thoughts I think I'll kill MYSELF.

Wow, so many things running through my head. Most of which would be inappropriate to post here. Lets just say that I almost yelled out the F bomb. Didn't stop me from chanting it over and over again in my head with the name CJ attached. And of course I had to take the goat bate and read the first bit of 44. I reserve all further judgment for CJ till the end of this story! Master of Evil

I voted yes, I know ya'll hate me for that, but, it seems as if CJ has absolutely no love for the boys anymore. I'm sure Dimitri will end up dead, but only at the hands of the Scar as a means to tie all lose ends up.

WHEW. I'm feeling very relieved now. Poor Eric, just gonna be milking it for all it's worth now! That was a very tender moment between Eric and Wilde. Here I was thinking the whole pool thing was cause Wilde didn't know how to swim and thats why they where all uncomfortable to leave him alone. I'm just hoping Eric's advice doesn't back fire and drive a wedge between Steve and Wilde and The Shadows and the boys. All hail CJ for making our new year not so sad

I'm a new fan to CJ's stories, but an old time reader of stories from this site. I read through both stories, well, of Let the Music Play so far. You have a great writing style. I do kinda feel bad and should go back and read cause I know its going to be a big plot down the road, but I've kinda been skiping over the scar story line. I've just fallen in love with Brandon and Chase and Eric and Jon that I wanted to keep up with them first. CJ, I don't know how you do it, but from chapter one I've gotten pulled in to their world. I feel like a roadie on tour with them getting a chance to see their world. I found myself just smiling so big and feeling so ... I cant think of the right word. When Brandon was first taken on by the guys and Helen, his wanting to pull his fair share of work; not understanding his new role in the group. I did want to kill Eric and Jon after their drunken escapade on the hotel balcony. And how sweet it was when Brandon took that risk of singing his song to Chase on stage. Man I need a man like that! Anyways, I'm rambling, but keep up the great work and I cant wait for 17 and 18 and....