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  1. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 16

    Or he provides the Lawyer that uses the video, the police search, the mistakes to get Finn off. Tarquin has his ways. He also has the means to bury Finn in the system. So it's difficult for a kid like Finn, who has ZERO reason to trust police or the system to help him, to see a path out of this. Orel, however, smarter than your average water bear.
  2. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 20

    Well it isn't impossible, controlled crashes happen Key Survival Factors (Case Examples) Vesna Vulović (1972): Survived a 33,333-foot fall without a parachute after her plane broke apart. Her survival was attributed to being trapped in a tail section of the plane, landing on a steep, snow-covered, wooded mountain slope, and having low blood pressure, which caused her to pass out instantly (preventing her heart from bursting). Juliane Koepcke (1971): Fell 10,000 feet into the Amazon jungle strapped to her seat, surviving with only a broken collarbone and severe injuries, then navigating the jungle for 11 days. Annette Herfkens (1992): Survived a crash in the Vietnamese jungle, living for eight days despite 12 broken bones, using insulation material from the plane to gather water.
  3. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 16

    Ok need to get these ages on track. Graduation in Ontario 17. At the start of the Asset and the Liability Garrett and Kyle have been out of school for 18 months. Add 3 months for this story to start. so Kyle and Garrett are late 19 early 20. It's been two years since Capt. vs Goofball, making Lydia 15 and now 17 It makes Steve and Kenny 18 Brian was almost a year older, so he is 19, Alex is a year younger than Brian at 18. Both Orel and Finn are the same age as Lydia, so in the 17/18 range. Oliver is the same age as Tabby... Tabby was born in 2002, making him 23/24. Alvin is described as a year or so older than Tabby making him 25. Tarquin is a few years older so he's in the later Twenties early thirties at a stretch. Which fits their dynamic and why he was guardian over Orel after Alistair Merrick died. Axl Fraser is described as 16-ish. Same age as Ethan and Aiden McCormick (Tabby's younger brothers the Twins) Charlie Levesque (a future story) is also 16 at this point. Phil Blanchard (Again a future story) is the same age as Garrett. making him 20-ish at this exact moment. For those interested Jacob Carter is 17 in 2025, as is Tommy though Tommy is a little younger than Jake. Ned, in 2025 is just about to turn 30 (there that covers the Carter boys) If I have forgotten anyone I am sorry... it's complex when it gets to this stage of interwoven book narratives. If I make mistakes understand it's because I am writing a story and while fix dates and established continuity is nice, sometimes it has to give way to narrative need. Sorry for the stats, this is for my head, and to clarify it all for me going forward. It's getting to a point where I need to create index cards for all these characters.
  4. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 16

    Indeed, and THIS all comes in handy later, I sort of need it to fall apart quickly. But it is a catalyst for a scared 17/18 year old who doesn't know better to do something stupid. And for Orel to prove, once again, why he isn't incapacitated. Orel knows what to do.
  5. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 16

    Jerk, putting logic into my story. Yeah it's a little weak but you know... story... I never said it has to hold up. Finn isn't a lawyer, he's a school drop out mechanic street kid. Police are terrifying, and never take his side. So even if the O.P.P. proceduraly did something wrong, it plays right into Tarquin's hands, makes it easier for him to get the case dismissed. "Look Finn, I got rid of this problem for you, now you owe me..." Just... let me have this one. Just one time... :: big writer puppy eyes ::
  6. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 16

    Indeed, useful that. I wonder who is going to remember it exists... Small town, always wise to check things out, and if the doors weren't locked up. There is probable cause, waves hands in a wishey washey writer kind of way...
  7. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 16

    A violation with that exact intent. The more I write of this SOB the more dirty I feel. I want to bad end him... I know it's a mark of a good villain when he makes the readers want to punch him... but when the writer wants to punch him as well... yep.
  8. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 16

  9. Chapter Seventeen: The Dinner and the Devil The Alibi Ottawa felt less like a city and more like a stage set built by people who believed beige was a personality trait. The drive in Garrett’s Chevelle had been a masterclass in tension management. Garrett drove with white-knuckled precision, treating the highway like a hostile negotiation. Kyle managed the playlist—an eclectic mix of 80s pop and synth-wave that he claimed was "soothing," though Garrett looked ready to defenestrate the s
  10. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 16

    Now as for fine dining, there are a few extremely expensive restaurants in Ottawa, with a dress code. But one thing in Canada is that we have disability access laws, VERY strict ones. There must be NO barriers to those with special needs to any establishment. Orel clearly falls into that category. Most establishments would accommodate, even go out of their way to make said person comfortable inside of the establishment. Considering there is literally a television News Studio across the road from this restaurant... it would 1. Open the restaurant up to a lawsuit. 2. Be on the news in no time flat. and 3. in extremely poor taste by Canadian standards to turn Orel away. It's nice to have a country where such rights are enshrined, upheld, and respected not just by the law, but by the general populace as well. There are exceptions, there always are... but in the Nation's Capital... steps away from the CBC Ottawa studios... not a good idea at all. Oh and there is one other... teeny.... tiny... little reason Orel MERRICK might get away with it.
  11. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 19

    I will play renegades now
  12. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 20

    There we go I have replaced the missing section, and Marked it with *** Apologies again that it ate it. And by Bear I mean the two legged Russian kind, who have a reason to want Enrico dead for a certain warehouse full of useless parts instead of guidance chips. Naughty Coyote, poking bears of the Russian State variety
  13. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 20

    Le sigh, and again my editing software gobbled up the middle section of this chapter... sending it... to somewhere... :: rubs temples :: A whole section from the cabin to the helicopter bit, explaining what happened to Enrico's leg... :: ugggggh :: I apologize, this chapter, it seems, came out a bit mangled. It was flavour text, nothing dramatic... Enrico vs a Bear... and not the San Francisco kind in leather and a hat... I will endeavour to find a back up... it's not needed... but... uggggh I think I will just edit what's here so that it makes sense. Apologies again, I have no idea why it does this... I need an editor... or a beta reader... or a shotgun wielding T-800 who wants to chew on wires and spit out ram.
  14. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 20

    He found Tarquin's horde
  15. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 20

    shhhhh... shhh... shh. they were in the tail... with that stewardess and a bunch of people who are hungry in the snow. And that Cooper fellow... and the cast of Lost.
  16. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 20

    It will be interesting to see which of Ned's uncles, step-dad or Dad finds out first, because any which way, Graves is going to feel pain.
  17. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 20

  18. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 20

    Tomorrow Will selects his running mate, and faces the Republican base in his most dangerous gamble to date.
  19. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 20

    I am awake, good morning, yes... hi.... Coyote fell
  20. CHAPTER TWENTY : COYOTE FALLS The jet was a vault of quiet tension, humming forty-five thousand feet above the scarred green hide of Northern Ontario. Inside, the air was cool, scrubbed, and carried the faint, expensive scent of lemon peel and regret. Enrico Alvarez watched the ice melt in his sparkling water, a crystalline clock counting down the seconds until he could be rid of his passenger. His passenger, his charge, his most persistent mistake. Ned Sanderson slouched in
  21. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 16

    Well Orel is a little more.. um... out there than most of my characters. So forgive him a little Whimsy, he's been through a lot. As for intelligent teens, most of these characters are into their early twenties. or VERY late teens. Orel is 17, Kyle is around 20 as is Garrett, Finn is 17/18 at this point. of them only Orel is written as above average intelligence. Lydia is an exception, but if you know her brother, you will see why that is the case. She is an exception. Oliver is into his twenties, same age as Tabby, and Alvin I believe is a little older. Indulgent parents, in this story only Jenny-Lynn has appeared as a parent, so not sure where that is from. Tarquin is hardly a parental figure, and not at all indulgent nor particularly bemused. So again, not sure where that one comes from. Wait I forgot Joey, he might seem bemused and indulgent, but he is "Modern, Kyle" but again Kyle isn't a kid, he is well above being considered and adult in the eyes of Canada, as is Garrett. :: shrugs :: so it's not so much indulgent as respecting that his son is an adult.
  22. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 15

    Capt. vs Goofball There is a running theory that Andrew and Clovis dealt with Jason (pastor) Jensen's abusive neo-nazi father in a way that ensured that he would never abuse little boys again. I imply but do not confirm this theory, just that Old Man Jensen never appears again after what he did to Jason. Since Tarquin is cut from the same cloth as old man Jensen, there is a feeling from fans that Andrew and Clovis (Clovis being Finn's direct Uncle) should (if they find out what Tarquin has done) deal with Tarquin. Andrew Carter (ne Highmore) is a CSIS agent in the main series, and rather well known for his unforgiving and very terminal nature when it comes to people that threaten his family. If you want to get a good grasp of him, read Carter's Breach, it is a very VERY good launching off point for those books.
  23. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 11

    Initial shock and pain will give way. It's a combination I think of two people Oliver cares about choosing each other rather than him. Stings but he will come around. Oliver is not evil, he just needs a head check
  24. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 16

    Garret has had an aversion to Steve's out of principle. That place is right in the middle of town, it'd be shining a spot light right on his relationships... I mean can you imagine the gossip "Garrett at Steve's with BOTH Finn and Kyle?" "didn't they try to kill each other with sticks in the Tim Horton's parking lot three months ago?" "Yeah, and Orel Merrick, the reclusive Merrick brother is with them in AXL FRASER's clothes!" Sunday morning service with poor Pastor Jensen is going to be JUICY
  25. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 19

    this song is now on my playlist Thank you. Yoinks
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