Topher Lydon
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I honestly don't remember... they might, or at the very least, they run a micro-loan system that's keeping half the town afloat/employed in a recession. They own the law firm, I remember that. Ms. Patel of the eternally deadly pink pleather
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Yes, and about half the town are in on the "Secret" and all of them desperate to keep it from Steve's Mom, (Finn's Aunt Jenny)
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To Clarify, Lydia and Steve Hickey own the entire intersection. The Tim Hortons. Steve's Steakhouse, the carwash, and Madam Chao's Nail Emporium. Read Capt. vs Goofball if you want to learn about Steve's inability to keep his chaos under control, and his Sister's ability to turn his money making schemes into a profitable Empire.
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Kyle's got his own story, more explored in the next chapter. and Lydia owns the Tim Hortons, well... half of it
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It was the first time Kier's given without taking. So yeah, a line's been crossed for sure.
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They're what each other needs at that moment. All fire and heat, it's like a Spanish telenovella, just with less slapping.
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Cam makes it, he's a firm little character, changes his Dad for the better.
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I learned when I was abroad, in a place where there were only five westerners in the entire city, that sometimes you can't choose your friends, you have to forge them.
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Does it move Yes> Should it? >yes >done Yes> Should it? >no > Ducttape No> Should it? >no >Done No> Should it? >yes >WD-40
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I had the gas man round last night, and I don't think either of us would have enjoyed that bill.
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I love the Kyle-Garrett dynamic in this story. Bully-Bullied to real best friends, showing how much of High School was nothing more than performative bullshit.
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Bobby's a fan favourite, that one character that doesn't do what you expect and sets off on his own path. There's a sequel that gets into him when he's a bit older, and his fondness for Timmy McCormick
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50,000 times a day? Poor Finn, he's going to need more lube
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Kyle wins
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Chapter Four: The Cleanup The Crime Scene The silence that followed was heavier than the one before. It wasn't the silence of anticipation; it was the forensic silence of a bomb site after the dust has settled, when all that's left is to catalogue the damage. Garrett lay on his back on the cold, unforgiving concrete, staring up at the greasy underbelly of a 1998 Ford F-150. A single, perfect drop of black oil hung from the transmission case, a glistening teardrop poised to
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Jack wants a word with Cobb for that.
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Vengeance is coming, I promise.
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That and Dyson now has to deal with the fact that his "men" have been stealing from him. He's got a bit of a civil war on his hands. Should make things interesting. He's also down two men, one on a palate, the other on his knees. So it's swinging Kier's way.
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To explain some of the influences in the writing of this. Watch WENTWORTH, an Australian tv show. Phenomenal demonstration (especially the first season) on the nature of power, dominion, and how people in a closed system have to survive. Show looses the plot later on, but the Bea stuff works well. Gotta love a woman with hot Press.
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Dyson has his own kingdom to master, and his foundation is shaken, the logic is that he will have to reassert his dominion, or face a challenge of his own. A brutal message is the only response left to him.
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Riley again, WINNING!
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Chapter Sixteen: The Concrete Throat The canal underpass wasn't a place; it was a condition. A gullet of weeping brick and sweating concrete, it swallowed light and sound and spat back only echoes and the cold, wet breath of the earth. The air was a solid thing, thick with the smells of stagnant water, rat piss, and the deep, mineral damp that rises from forgotten foundations. Graffiti bled down the walls in neon gangrene—tags, threats, declarations of love for girls who would never
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SEE, I knew there was a reason I adored ya!
