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  1. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 14

    Darien's favourite by the next book. Unabashedly so, Rico gets teased by the others for it.
  2. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 14

    Thanks, I am glad it worked. Took several tries to get it there. It needed to feel earned, and Stephen's earned that rage of his. He's had to hold Ashot through his panic attacks, so he knows that terror very well.
  3. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 16

    I am really glad you enjoyed. You might like Buckshot, another Western of mine
  4. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 14

    I think I just finished editing... you guys are getting a peek behind the curtain. I prewrite a chapter, then the night before I release it I go through it and edit it. Most of this chapter needed significant rewriting, and a shift from later in the book to here (It flowed better here) So yes... um... normally I edit in Word then paste in, but I have had to rewrite parts of this chapter over and over... it was a tough one to get right.
  5. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 14

    Ack that was supposed to be the "Edit" button, not the "publish" button... um... so... um... I need to pay more attention. I am still editing this chapter... so... um... surprise? As Red would say, I am a dumbass
  6. While the tournament roared outside the walls of The Boar's Rest, the kitchens of La Douairière were a hive of frantic activity. Servants rushed between the great hearths and the storerooms, hauling platters of roasted meats, baskets of fresh bread, and flagons of wine. The tournament had driven everyone to exhaustion, and the kitchens were running on pure adrenaline and the desperate hope of surviving until sundown. Stephen moved through the chaos with a basket of herbs slung over his arm,
  7. It just seemed like something Poitr and Flynn would do together were Flynn better. We all know how much Poitr likes being looked at, and having all the attention on him. He's vain, he's selfish, he's possessive, but he is 100% into Flynn. Bloody Russian Judges
  8. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 13

    This was one of the earlier chapters written for this story. It helped me find the tone of the book, and of the freindship dynamic of the boys. Also setting the relationship between Darien and Atreus. Two stubborn men who are far too much alike for their own good. We know I have a fondness for Richard, he's crude, mud stained, and ginger (mmm)
  9. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 13

  10. Sam is one of the few characters in this that has no agenda. They aren't a victim of Vickies. They barely knew her. They're a quiet friend of Riley and Caleb's, who has a little crush on Isaac (probably the only person that's ever seen Isaac for who he really is)
  11. I think that was Sam making a promise to Isaac that they will do what they can to get him back there.
  12. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 13

    ❤️ Fwends! ❤️
  13. SATURDAY MORNING The windshield wipers of Chloe’s immaculate, silver-trim Audi sliced back and forth across the glass in a frantic, metronomic rhythm, fighting a completely losing battle against the relentless Pacific Northwest deluge. The rain didn't just fall in Grey Harbor; it assaulted the earth. It came down in heavy, gray, suffocating sheets that turned the sky into a bruised canopy of slate and charcoal, blurring the edges of the jagged pine trees and turning the winding coastal roa
  14. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 13

    Put it down to Lothar not actually giving a damn how old his son is. I see him as that cusp almost 16 so thinking shifts.
  15. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 13

    The next book has them battling pirates. yaaar. *ahem* Rico would like to remind everyone that he doesn't shovel poop, his Baba Stephen says it's bad for him, and his Baba Ashot says he is Uncle Darien's favourite, and to give him big puppy eyes until he is let off with a warning.
  16. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 8

    sorry, Cas is wearing Atreus's nightshirt.
  17. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 13

    Rico is definitely the baby of #TeamSquire2
  18. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 13

  19. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 13

    You know Wylan's standing in the hallway outside, shaking his head at his two Haskal idiots
  20. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 13

    About sums them up. Good morning
  21. The bedchamber of the Warlord’s heir was not built to accommodate a diplomatic summit, and it certainly wasn't built to accommodate the sheer, suffocating volume of teenage hormones currently trapped within its stone walls. A sudden, violent downpour had flooded the royal pavilion city, forcing the King to temporarily relocate the highest-ranking squires and young knights into the keep. Which was how Ser Tomas of Lothar found himself assigning his own squires to the armory floor, while he c
  22. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 10

    I remember that immediately after the first cross-English Channel flight by Aeroplane the first Anti-aircraft gun was patented. The ebb and flow of the arms race.
  23. Santa Monica is gorgeous
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