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    Chapter 13

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    Her and DB Cooper
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    Sam is one of the few characters in this that has no agenda. They aren't a victim of Vickies. They barely knew her. They're a quiet friend of Riley and Caleb's, who has a little crush on Isaac (probably the only person that's ever seen Isaac for who he really is)
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    I think that was Sam making a promise to Isaac that they will do what they can to get him back there.
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    Chapter 13

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    ❤️ Fwends! ❤️
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    Grey Harbor
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    SATURDAY MORNING The windshield wipers of Chloe’s immaculate, silver-trim Audi sliced back and forth across the glass in a frantic, metronomic rhythm, fighting a completely losing battle against the relentless Pacific Northwest deluge. The rain didn't just fall in Grey Harbor; it assaulted the earth. It came down in heavy, gray, suffocating sheets that turned the sky into a bruised canopy of slate and charcoal, blurring the edges of the jagged pine trees and turning the winding coastal roa
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    Chapter 13

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    Put it down to Lothar not actually giving a damn how old his son is. I see him as that cusp almost 16 so thinking shifts.
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    Chapter 13

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    The next book has them battling pirates. yaaar. *ahem* Rico would like to remind everyone that he doesn't shovel poop, his Baba Stephen says it's bad for him, and his Baba Ashot says he is Uncle Darien's favourite, and to give him big puppy eyes until he is let off with a warning.
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    Chapter 8

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    sorry, Cas is wearing Atreus's nightshirt.
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    Chapter 13

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    Rico is definitely the baby of #TeamSquire2
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    Chapter 13

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    Chapter 13

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    You know Wylan's standing in the hallway outside, shaking his head at his two Haskal idiots
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    Chapter 13

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    About sums them up. Good morning
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    The bedchamber of the Warlord’s heir was not built to accommodate a diplomatic summit, and it certainly wasn't built to accommodate the sheer, suffocating volume of teenage hormones currently trapped within its stone walls. A sudden, violent downpour had flooded the royal pavilion city, forcing the King to temporarily relocate the highest-ranking squires and young knights into the keep. Which was how Ser Tomas of Lothar found himself assigning his own squires to the armory floor, while he c
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    Chapter 10

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    I remember that immediately after the first cross-English Channel flight by Aeroplane the first Anti-aircraft gun was patented. The ebb and flow of the arms race.
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    Santa Monica is gorgeous
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    TBH it was Miguel that came first, before that Billy was just a Billy... then Miguel came along, and I liked the name... so I gave the family Hernandez as the family name. I think they're a mixed heritage family.
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    Manuel Hernandez is a character to watch, he's the one documenting everything, pulling it all together in the background. This chapter is where things shift, and momentum begins to bring Justice to Grey Harbour.
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    you guys may notice a difference in structure of my chapters in this book to the others I write. I am experimenting with punchier chapters for Caleb. Average about 2000 words. The rule for his chapters are one scene, one location, one view point per chapter. The chapters labelled with: chapter number(a) NAME of character Are written as regular chapters. I was trying to follow a formula for Murder Mysteries structure... /TBH this is probably one of the more difficult books I have ever written. The style is very contrary to how I normally write my thrillers/adventure books. It's counter intuitive to me and so difficult for me to wrap my head around. I am still trying to see how this story is received by the readers. I am glad that it is engaging.
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    yes sir, sorry sir... I will put nose back to grindstone
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    I believe Caleb's father gets back on Tuesday. Blanchard has called him by this point, and he has finally learned what has happened and is rushing back.
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    Elena is building a wall around Caleb. From what I have written about her, it's her deep love for Billy, and her hard earned pragmatism.
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    Elena Hernandez, slapping Diana right where it hurts. You wanted a beat down, Elena is going to give Diana exactly what she's earned.
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