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Topher Lydon

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  1. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 14

    There's a new monster who has learned from his master, and his master's master.
  2. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 14

  3. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 14

    Morning, a showdown in the rain. We are nearing the end of this one. oh and:
  4. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 14

    The Kill Box The road unfurled north like a scar. Grey tarmac bleeding into grey sky, the relentless soaking drizzle that didn't fall so much as simply exist in the air, coating everything in a film of cold despair. The Audi A8 ate the miles with its usual predatory silence, but the atmosphere inside the cabin was different. Tighter. Charged with the static of approaching thunder. Riley sat in the passenger seat, his fingers tracing the edge of the dossier open on his lap.
  5. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 3

    Isaiah might be fond of toes.
  6. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 3

    there's a reason you're one of my favourite readers
  7. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 3

    Mickey's three children are Jeremy 3, Arlo 5, and Dimitri 9
  8. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 3

    What you need to ask is WHY, Dimitri is 9 years old, and Mickey is only 23, and you start to understand why Mickey might be as broken as he is.
  9. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 13

    Remember this is set in 1997, the camera's would be very obvious if they were there.
  10. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 13

  11. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 13

    tell me about it, I am working on an extensive rewrite of the next chapter right now... and trying to decide somethings. Honestly I don't know how this one ends myself.
  12. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 3

    Mickey is a sloppy drunk.... well he's a sloppy sober... um... wait... he's just sloppy period
  13. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 3

    He sticks out like a sore thumb, at least this way the other Missionaries will overlook him, they see only the outfit and the badge. Creepy buggers. Full of Bee-juice.
  14. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 3

    Chuckles some of you know I use an AI assistant for editing purposes, and sometimes it likes to get "imaginative" with my text... I like to refer to it as "My drunk intern" I've fixed the errors in the text, I think. Thanks for the patience.
  15. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 3

    Welcome Home Traveller And meet crew member four, Dimitri Ryder.
  16. The Big City (It's Not) --- The white linen shirt itched. Dimitri Ryder had been wearing it for six hours—through morning prayers, through breakfast, through the first two hours of Primary—and the collar was rubbing a raw patch on the back of his neck. He resisted the urge to scratch. Scratching was a sign of impatience, and impatience was a sign of weakness, and weakness was a sign of insufficient faith. His mother had told him that. She told him a lot o
  17. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 2

    There were numerous Jokes in the original Falcon Banner books about the illegal Comic books about the main characters that were loose in the universe. Figured Dimitri would be a Dr. Kyr fan. (Kyr is all kinds of awesome)
  18. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 2

  19. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 13

    'ello Darlin' fancy a gum-job?
  20. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 13

    hahaha, yes I was editing this chapter this morning, and felt it was time that Riley called Ben out. Because in his weird way, Ben very much does.
  21. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 13

    I like subverting characterizations. I am sure, somewhere, one of the minger's back of the bins behind the corner shop thinks Riley's evil.
  22. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 13

    Riley got a Jaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaag Good morning
  23. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 13

    The Art of the Quiet Kill The morning of the execution was bright, cold, and offensively cheerful. The sun slanted through the high windows of the Didsbury house, illuminating dust motes that didn’t exist because Ben had already vacuumed at 5:00 AM. Riley sat at the kitchen island, wearing the ‘uniform’—charcoal trousers, white shirt, the black cardigan. On his wrist, the stolen Rolex Oyster Perpetual felt like a shackle of gold and steel. It was heavy, ostentatious, and entirely
  24. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 2

    I do enjoy that they're both Gigantic cowards LOL
  25. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 2

    Mickey was having none of the Haunted House in Space
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