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I guess I could see that. Interesting point. I'm still two chapters behind too. I left off at a good part! Hehehe! Must read more!

"A Life Forever Changed" By Bensonrob http://irc.shackoutb...d=56&Itemid=248 One of the very first things that I noticed about "A Life Forever Changed" was the idea that it's not just surrounding a love story, as most stories in this genre are. I think I found that really refreshing. There IS a love interest that takes place in the story a bit later on, but that shares equal time with the frightening and often frustrating struggle of a yung boy coming out to his friends and family. And that does give it a touch of added realism that I'm sure people will appreciate as they dive deeper into the main character's life little by little with each chapter. "A Life Forever Changed" is the story of Joshua, a 12 year old 7th grader in Junior High who is just now coming to terms with his budding sexuality, and is trying to find a way to be himself without judgement or rejection. Not an easy feat, as his mother is religious and was brought up to believe that being gay is wrong. Period. However, without giving anything away, this story gains depth by including a single parent with negative views on homosexuality...also going through a series of personal conflicts of her own. Again, it's a refreshing and appreciated approach. I am impressed that the story really feels as though it's 'coming from somewhere'. he author, BensonRob, writes Joshua's thoughts with real heart. It truly does present the kind of confusion, and fear, and determination, that we've all felt at one time or another. What should I say? How should I say it? When should I tell her? What will they think of me? The range of emotion is covered from every possible angle. And some of the reactions were unexpected once the confessions start dropping. It feels like a personal experience, and it's easy to relate to, so it draws you into the story even more. Excellent way to go about doing that and bring that familiar feel to every chapter. Now...while I'm usually telling authors to give more detail during certain scenes and expanding on the moment, I'm going to go in the 'opposite' direction with this one. ::Hears people gasping:: Hehehe! In this story, there were a few places where I thought the added detail was a bit too much. It wan't BAD, not by any means. But there were times when the description of Joshua happened more than once in a chapter, or descriptions of parts of the house, the color of the blinds, or the walls...which done every now and then really works to paint a picture, but I feel that it can sometimes distract from the mood. Like, I could see him walking down that hallway, all tense and ready to see if he's actually going to tell his mom that he's gay...and then the story will stop momentarily to describe the wooden floor. So I get anxious and eager to skip it to see what hesays...but I don't want to miss anything. Hehehe, so yes, in those cases, I think less is more. The feel and emotion of a scene is much more potent than the visuals. Once you get your readers wrapped up, KEEP 'em wrapped up. The relationship between oshua and his mom kinda threw me at first. Because I wasn't quite sure which way the mother was going to be portrayed. This is something that seemed to get much smoother and more stable as the chapters progressed, so I guess that's a problem solved. (Practice really does make perfect) But in the beginning, I wasn't sure if the mother was going to be an angry, Bible thumping type of mom, or if she was going out and away from home a lot...becoming a neglectful mother...or if she was going to be one of those really loving and understanding mothers who would do anything for her baby boy. The first twoor three chapters sort of give the impression of one relationship one minute, and then another the next. But like I said, the later chapters have gotten much better at defining what's going on there. Also, I'm having fun learning about Lucas and Dylan (Joshua's 'friends'), which I won't give any spoilers there, but they both play a very important role in what's going on there! And as with the rest of the story, there are some neat and some nasty surprises there.) So yes, definitely check this series out. It has reecently posted it's 9th chapter. It really captures those uneasy feelings of coming to terms with who you are and attempting to feel alright in a world that's constantly trying to tell you that you're 'all wrong'. Keep going, dude! You're doing great!

"Derailed" By LemonFresh http://www.irc.shack...id=22&Itemid=97 Now, originally, I was going to review the third chapter of LemonFresh's other story, "Birthright", but seeing as I did a short review on the first two chapters last year, I didn't think I could do another one without being redundant. Luckily, LemonFresh has more than one story going right now! Hehehe! Now, I will start of by saying that I am a fan of LemonFresh and his work. He's still in high school, and his mind is already able to create complex characters and set a mood and tone for the fantastic worlds that he sets his stories in. His very first offering to the rest of the world came in the form of "Derailed". The story follows the life of main character, Cameron, who is growing up in what is basically a post apocalyptic world...where a deadly virus has ravaged a great deal of the population. But once the virus was cured and everything was thought to be returning to normal, the world's governments realize that thevirus has mutated, and passed down incredible powers to the next generation of kids born from the parents who survived the original outbreak. It's a part of their genetic code, and they are now being hunted, terminated, or forced to live a life on the run, hiding in small colonies and looking for safe havens fortheir kind wherever they can find them. I will say that, while the first chapter is in need of a little more editing for small errors and spelling mistakes, both the story and the writer mature by leaps and bounds with each additional chapter. It's something that you can literally feel from beginning to end (Or end so FAR), and that's amazing to see. Cameron is forced to deal with his current situation, where he is practically a prisoner underground, with only his closest friends and 'teachers' for company. Also, he is dealing with strong feelings for his best friend, Seth, which unfolds nicely throughout the series. It leaves one guessing whether or not it's even possible in the beginning. And that is hard to pull off in a genre of fiction where the boy almost 'always' gets the boy. Other characters, Adrian, Bruiser, Corbin, Tim, Mark, Andrea, and the wise Magashi, play slightly smaller roles, but important ones in the story. None of them feel as though they are just there for filler. It leaves the readers waiting to see what else we can learn about them and how they all fit into the storyline. Only time will tell as the plot develops. I do like the way that the 'abilities' of this new generation is being handled. It's being tested and monitored and moderated by others, but you get a very realistic feel of the previous generation not really knowing what to make of these new kids. And that's an interesting angle. How can one generation provide guidance to another when it is so very advanced in so many ways? The colonies are all searching for more refugees that need help, but (also very realistic) these new refugees don't always play nice. There are ocassional clashes and flare ups that have to be handled. You have teens that want to do more with their powers than they're being allowed to do. You have conflicts within the ranking 'overseers' as to what paths should be taken, etc. So that's a plus, and helps to make for an intriguing read. The only real complaint that I have here (As I have with a lot of great stories that I've read in the past) is that I thirst for more. Not just more as in a continuation, but in the earlier chapters as well. I want to be totally sucked into this world, mind, body, and soul. I want to hear more. I want to know more about how the public reacted initially to the deadly Holmen virus and what happened when it returned in their children. I want to know more about the government's reaction and how they carried out their actions to somehow make them runaways and targets for their VCU squads. (The VCU squads seem like a 'distant' threat in the first few chapters, but later on, you get to see why they're feared and what they're capable of!) There's mention of the beginning of the hunts and all, where a boy getting bullied in school gets out of control and turns his entire home town into a giant crater with his abilities. THAT...is amazing! That could be a prologue or maybe even a whole prequel in itself. The 'beginning of the war' type of thing. So I would definitely expand on what happened there. And I'd also love to seemore with Cameron and Seth, as to how they connect and interact, and learn a bit more about their history as best friends. They seem like a really cute couple. A few fun moments between them, a little tension, I think could make readers root for them even more. Other than that, awesome story! Check it out! I was careful not to give any spoilers, so you'll have to read for yourselves! Cool? There's a link up above to LemonFresh's section on the Chat Shack, with "Derailed" and his other stories. Give it a look, and let him know what you think! K?

Enjoy! https://www.gayauthors.org/story/Comicality/savagemoon06-thenewbreed/26 New Chapter Will Be Up In A Few Weeks! ::Wicked Grin::

I kept my head down the entire time I was walking back to the truck,. Was it shame that I felt? Perhaps. More than a touch of embarrassment for losing so much of my self control. And yet, being so in tune with the other members of my pack seemed to constantly sweep me up with constant and unwavering support. Silent reminders that I could do no wrong in the eyes of my brethren. It went beyond madness to realize that I may never find this kind of non-judgmental, unconditional, love from any other

Done! New Teen Pop Nostradamus Link Is Up! ------------ What is the material needed for teen pop stardom? You would definitely have to have a voice. But it can't be all voice. Being cute is always a major bonus. But it can't be all looks. Writing and playing your own instruments is awesome. But it can't be all passion. Dancing and being able to work the crowd is necessary. But it can't be all charisma. Somehow, teen pop stardom goes to the ones who can somehow take all of these elements and create what the industry and the fans would consider 'The Total Package'. Someone who can hit all of the above at some level and blend them into something that will ultimately create an incredible artist! (Say what you want about Bieber...but he's the posterboy example of touching on a little bit of EVERY category!) Last year we made predictions on who would come out on top, and you guys were pretty much right! With Greyson, Cody, Justin, and One Direction, making a lot of noise in the industry and gaining a boatload of fans! Let's see who will be the stars of 2012! We'll come back in the summer time and see how our boys are doing! And of course...if you're one of the anti-pop listeners who would rather chill with some Led Zepplin, Eric Clapton, Beatles, or whatever it is you like...hey...it's a bunch of cute boys! Hehehe, look and smile! There are some serious hotties in this bunch! Enjoy! (NEW Voting Poll Now Set Up!!!) http://www.voy.com/15900/39602.html

A Tribute for our contestants in the 2011 Teen Pop Nostradamus vote!!! Enjoy!

As some of you may remember, last year we made predictions on which young teen pop star hopefuls would make it big in 2011! And the votes were pretty much accurate! Well the next batch of teen cuties are making their play for stardom in 2012! So be sure to stop by and cast your votes! (NOTE: I'll be setting up a new voting system this week! So just stop by and check out the competition! A new polling system will be up soon!) http://www.voy.com/15900/39551.html

Ariel and Tyler return with a brand new episode! Enjoy! https://www.gayauthors.org/story/Comicality/kissofanangel/9

"Kiss Of An Angel 9" It was so warm outside. Not too warm, but warm, you know? It was like...the perfect day. Hehehe! I enjoyed it for a few minutes, then heard my Gramms come to the screen door and tell me to put some shoes on. Hehehe, it's funny, but I was so happy that I had totally forgotten. Tyler does that to me. When I think about him, every breath I take is like this big inhalation of helium. God...I *LOVE* this feeling! Hehehe, it tickles! I got the morning paper and brought it ba

Ryan and Randy are making a long overdue return to the site! I hope you like the newest chapter! And look for more soon! https://www.gayauthors.org/story/Comicality/newkidinschool/47

"New Kid In School 46" It was like having all the muscles in my stomach tighten up at once. It almost became difficult to breathe. There are certain frustrations that are extremely hard to diffuse once they begin to boil past a certain point. As if I hadn't used nearly Christ-like patience with this situation as it was...but there was my boyfriend...again...with Sean right there by his side. His 'friend'. Or so he says. Sean was giving him that flirty grin and shaking his stupid, floppy, b

The madness continues! https://www.gayauthors.org/story/Comicality/thesecretlifeofbillychase6/27

Monday - Sighhhh....so...Sam was being weird again today. Or...I don't know....maybe I'm the one who's being weird. Maybe we're just weird together. You know...if I had known it was gonna be like this, I wouldn't have gotten frisky with Sam in the first place. Never. I'd rather drool over him from a distance for the rest of my life than actually get the honor and glory of getting a 'taste' here and there, and having him push me away over and over again. He's like two completely different fuc

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Nah, that's only considered 'ok' by the public if I'm a <i>woman</i>...and having his baby! Otherwise, I'd be a perv. :: Shrugs ::

Sunday - I got some news today. It's probably best if I just don't think about it much. It doesn't really feel real anyway. Probably isn't. It's stupid. I feel like I'm going to wake up any second, and it will all have been some dumb dream. Or a delusion. Whatever. The less I actually dwell on it, the better. It'll probably just blow over. Just like...everything else. Anyway, despite that weirdness, it was still a pretty cool day. Actually, it was kinda fun. Although it did start out with a

Hehehe, but I dance so well! Just wait until I get my Bieber steps in there somewhere! ::Giggles::

Saturday - Trace called to check up on me this morning. Hehehe...I don't know why, but I think that's so cute! He's not, like...worried about me or anything. At least, not that he let on, anyway. But he just...kinda...cares, you know? I guess it's just cool to know that he wakes up on a Saturday morning and 'thinks' about me. Makes me feel all gooey inside. Hehehe! Anyway, I let him know that everything was fine and that it wasn't that bad, me getting home. It's not like I had THAT much to d

::Giggles:: Really? Because Book II is sure to be creepy enough to keep people awake at night!

Self-made Story Trailer 'here' from the ComicalityShack YouTube account!

As a Christmas gift to all of you readers who have supported me through thick and thin this year, 'Book One' of the new Sci-Fi/Thriller trilogy, "The Boys Of Widow Lake" has been released to the public!!! And ONLY on Amazon Kindle! So check it out, and let me know what you think! Look for 'Book Two' ("The Legend Of Lady Margaret") some time in March! "The Boys Of Widow Lake" and other Comicality eBooks are all available HERE, at Imagine Magazine!!! Enjoy! (Reviews have been GREAT so far!) http://www.imagine-magazine.org/index.php?module=store&show=comicality

A bit overdue, I know, but I'm catching up as fast as I can! Promise!

"My Only Escape 15" The wind seemed to get even colder as I stood huddled underneath the lip of the convenience store roof. My teeth were chattering every time an icy pulse of air blew the rain in a diagonal direction to wet me up even further. My feet were so cold that I could barely feel my toes at all anymore. And what was left of my body heat was evaporating fast through a matted down mess of sopping wet fabric. It had only been a few minutes since Brody had left his house, and I could

I hope you guys had yourselves a happy holiday season! I am anxiously awaiting my release from the holiday madness! But I'm feeling good about it all! And the new year in general! So..enjoy! "Billy Chase" is up to date! And there is a LOT to come in January!!! I've been working on it!