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Babygirl08

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  1. Babygirl08

    Chapter 26

    This has been everything. I loved the story and waited somewhat impatiently (lol) to see the conclusion. It was so amazingly written. If you choose to write sequel I’ll be up for it as well.
  2. Babygirl08

    Caesura

    Wishing a speedy recovery!!!
  3. Are you going to keep working on this book?
  4. Babygirl08

    Chapter 23

    Any new chapters coming?
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    Chapter 9

    There's definitely some influence going on. He can't truly believe that Noel, the young man who risked his life for him and his people, would suddenly turn evil.
  6. I did find it fishy that he went into the room after he kicked him out. But in still so upset that I can't nor want to think of reasons why this is so. They are supposed to be a team and the things he said basically ensured he broke Noel's heart. Sometimes there's no coming back from things like that. So I'll stick to he's an ass.
  7. Definitely feeling number 2 What is patreon? Modern day version of artistic patrons?
  8. Please do! As I said he is my favorite. With that being said I can't let him off the hook that easily. I want for him and victor to work it out and have a happily ever after, but with his ass on the line he has a job to do and distractions will get him killed. Dante being a conman makes it even worse! You know you are invading and trying to concur territory wouldn't you look for the links around you. You know about the police chiefs son, but don't know that the other son is Russian mafia! Seriously! Them and the Italians are who you are up against. You should always arm yourself with knowledge and his brilliance has me realizing that he has street smarts, but not common sense. Two very different things where I'm from.he can hustle and survive on his own, but he isn't very calculated if there is no inherent risk. I love the story and since I've popped the cherry on commenting I might as well keep it up. Although I will threaten to stop if it gets chapters faster
  9. Have been reading, but not commenting on anything. So if y'all don't mind I'll just jump on in. I'm becoming disappointed in Nobo's actions. We hear his history and we, well I, except him to have more of a grasp on the world. How could he not investigate others in the school?! I will be honest I root for him the most, he's my favorite thus far, but him allowing Dante to catch him off guard had me shaking my head. I think Viktor is young-minded and naïve which makes the story better because he isn't stained by all of the politicking going on around him, however it makes me worry for his heart since he's so innocent.
  10. I'm so in love this far! I check everyday for an update. I think Haru is up to something! Can't wait to find out what.
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