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Just found this story today and read through all the chapter you've posted so far, great stuff!!There's so much to get hooked on and the relations between the characters piques ones curiosity. So much potential, can't wait to see what comes next
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Oddly enough i'm not going to touch on the Pete/Corbin reunion and how I fear he's fallen into old patterns or the departure of the Vmee ..way too many feels there. I'd rather wait it out and see how you'll let it all unfold. What I am dying to know, like for real's it's been bugging me. What of our very own Benedict Arnold, Amanda, the levels of disloyalty she showed during their break out turned me red she had the opportunity to be impartial and play peacemaker but instead she chose sides. The wrong side considering she was Corbin's friend first. Where do they lie now?does the truce with the Brit absolve her of her sins?lol I just wanna know chase that would have bothered me if I were Corbs.
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A long awaited return of a gripping story. So glad you have returned, this had become a quick favorite because of the cross-genre appreal There's danger,suspense and the ever increasing sexual tension between the sexy body guard and our conflicted Haje Great come back
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Disclaimer: one of my greater strengths/weakness is my empathy and this story being in first person pov...the gist of it-i'm bitter when it comes to that brit. He drew his line in the sand, fair enough, that's his prerogative but to take Corbin's friends along with him.Low. Amanda clearly picked a sidethe least she can do is have the courage of her convictions. Tbh I wouldn't have handled it any different than our boy Corbs.
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So intense!! I'm as always when it comes to this story heavily conflicted, cople that with frustration and you have my mix of emotion.Great chapter! You have a way of making me feel every emotion that Corbin does with such precision and grace. Can't wait for next chapter!
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I pride myself on my one redeemable trait. My self control under fire, with that said, can i punch Dom? No seriously...he's way over due... I have a mental image of him being smug added onto that with an obnoxious Russian accent. I would have lunged at this point. Kudos to Corbin for better restraint and character! And i'm totally a fan of Mike! Just thought i should put it out there for those feeling conflicted in the shadows. It okay, you can come out now. You're not alone.
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OMG omg omg omg...I don't trust myself to say anymore out of fear that my major excitement might mess up my keyboard. The gamut of emotions I go through from a single chapter of your work is crazy! I felt so upset in Corbin's defense at the support this freshman skank is getting. I'm glad you're back. I'm a total stan for your work!
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Ahhh lovely chapter! I'm so happy for Jed. He really deserves to find his mate. Now whats to follow? Good chapter!
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Very disappointed in Shelly. Can't wait to see what tensions and drama is going to be a result of the pack division.
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I am loving the progressive story development and the most recent plot twist!!Brilliant!!Things are about to get messy. Where you go from here is a mystery I'm gonna love following. Well executed, thanx.
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"Now get out of my office"...the best dismissal ever!!!So proud of Noah!
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Amazingly touching, I have no further words. Hope the light that is Sam shines over Brian and their son.
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I love your story!became an instant fan from the first chapter. I love that a friendship is brewing between Haje and Vincent but I can't help holding some reservations of my own. I understand why Haje held resentment towards Vincent,yeah it may not be fair but its human. There's no identifiable murderer so the easiest person to blame was the bodygaurd. I want to trust Vincent but he's still a mystery at the moment, don't know much about him. Great work and your imagination just throws fans into your universe.
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... Forever is Never that Easy (Part 2)
BlackArrow commented on Jwolf's story chapter in ... Forever is Never that Easy (Part 2)
I am a complete stan of your work!!You had me hooked from The List that prompted me to go read everything else you had posted. I agree with the previous comment that a sequel was completely warranted. I love you characterization amongst the many skills you have. I get so drawn in i feel every emotion you put Coop through even though i didn't agree with his decision. One of my all time faves! -
Okay, i know i'm very late to the party...but how awesome is this story!! Please tell me you're updating not long from now. All through the story my emotions have been conflicted about the whole Corbin-Pete dynamic. One second i think they're finally gonna get it together and get really excited, then Pete goes and pulls away. What a tease! I have a love-hate relationship with that Brit. But as much as i want to hate him...it just doesn't happen. Amazing story here!
