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  1. SupermanSavesYou

    Chapter 32

    “Just know,” I said, looking into his eyes, “that you have the ability to make me very happy, but you also have the ability to hurt me, and hurt me very badly.” poor JP, he wouldn't know what will happen in the future with Jeff Hayes!
  2. SupermanSavesYou

    Chapter 26

    It was good to have fond memories with André to look back to.
  3. SupermanSavesYou

    Chapter 16

    Ahh, Jeff Hayes, 17 years old, is full of life. I wish a real Jeff Hayes was at my high school. I would be the happiest dude in whole San Diego County!
  4. SupermanSavesYou

    Chapter 14

    this is when the word "snaugh" born. It's amazing to meet teenage Jeff Hayes in this chapter while knowing what happened in the future.
  5. SupermanSavesYou

    Chapter 27

    Sicilian prince is George's next lover, hmm?
  6. SupermanSavesYou

    Chapter 10

    this chapter makes me missing my youth: exploration of self and discovering new things. I love to re-read your chapters.
  7. SupermanSavesYou

    Chapter 9

    Mark, JP said to 16 years old Stefan, “Well Stefan, you're safe and sound here. You'll find that people, your family, will do things for you just because they love and care about you, without expecting you to do things in return. It's a new life for you.” That was in 1962! the very beginning of Stefan's American Life. You wrote this really good! Now I figured out JP's age, he is 26 in this chapter.
  8. SupermanSavesYou

    Chapter 39

    Grandfather is coming for a visit?! THAT's will be interesting. I'll bet he will look down on everything, just because the Earl disappointed him by not marrying to a British heiress. *drama unfolds*
  9. SupermanSavesYou

    Chapter 7

    Ahhh. blissful days for JP with beautiful Andre.
  10. SupermanSavesYou

    Chapter 36

    Oh, Mark, you sure write a good chapter! (understatement.. I know).. but the therapy session part made me all teared up. And, now, after all of this Lovey-Dovey... all Rainbow Brite & The Color Kids... all My-Little-Ponies.., there has to be Cruella DeVille knocking the door and waiting impatiently. And, I am so glad there is no deaths in the rest of the story! Keep writing more!
  11. SupermanSavesYou

    Chapter 32

    Mr. Hartford? who is he? I couldn't recalled who he is. I would have said to those stupid parents if I'm Zach. The parents should trust him to make his own judgements since he will be 18 soon, but no, they want to control him like he is 12!
  12. SupermanSavesYou

    Chapter 31

    As for Marc, it's common for a victim to become a different person - after they become more confident- after the treatment process either to be a horrible or a better person. I sincerely hope Marc will become a better person two times more. During the period of being victimized, they oppress their personalities and adopt abuser's decisions and expectation. If Marc blossoms into one of the CAD family, he will be at right place. In that Family and OUR HEARTS. Otherwise, I will send the Ravens to pluck his eyes out and let vultures eat his insides out! It's tragic that nowadays people actually believe that old fashioned Bibical consequences. Stone women to death for being in same room with husbands while having her periods. Jeez! Seriously?! *rolls my eyes* -Léon
  13. SupermanSavesYou

    Chapter 29

    Mark, I am glad that Brad thinks of his sons before a lover. I know how hard it is if someone loves other so much but finds other doesnt get along with kids. I still don't trust Marc Carmaine. I think Will and I are alike regarding having the suspicions about Marc. Perhaps you will, in next chapter, make Marc a hero and a perfect lover who loves sons! let's see❗️ Thank you for the great chapter!
  14. SupermanSavesYou

    Chapter 28

    Mark, I am having an uneasiness in the situation with Marc. I just don't trust him. and what's more, giving him a credit card at this early? that's a bad idea. and great chapter.
  15. SupermanSavesYou

    Chapter 2

    Mark, I can see why you chose Claremont, Cos the place where exiled French royals lived was called Claremont in England. Good choice. JP seems uptight guy; to hit the police officer is out of his comfort zone. Was it due to his youth?
  16. Mark, the life back in 1960s as a gay man was so different, but finding a quickie hasn't been changed.. and, I am reading the whole thing again: starting Book 1 now. I forgot how alive Andre is. -Léon
  17. SupermanSavesYou

    Chapter 26

    Hello Mark, Is that how Billionaires handle their human relationships as if they are house pets? lol. anyway, I agree with Maarten, because Brad does show maturity... compared to 20 years before. And, I have this feeling Cam and Devon have done something. Maybe I'm imagining things. -Leon
  18. SupermanSavesYou

    Chapter 24

    Mark, I do remember the thought I had back in 2003, "wow! The United States of America throppled Iraqi's Dictator within 21 days! That showed the world how powerful we are!" And, now, I looked back to those conflicts... would this so-called Islamic State never happened if we didn't do the Imperialism? Some people said that Iraq is better off having Saddam Hussein because he was the lesser evil than otherwise. Anyway, I can understand why JP is upset about this war after lived through Vietnam War. Now, as Jason (StoriReder) mentioned guys among Matt and Wade's teammates may have gone to Iraq, and even those young main characters may have been deployed! I am nervous now about who will be survived/ killed in action or what will happen next? Storyline changes after the death of loved one? I am looking forward to read your next chapter! -
  19. SupermanSavesYou

    Chapter 23

    This bumpy road will lead to a stronger bond in Alex and JJ's relationship. I can understand how upset JJ is. As you said that JJ still wants Alex, he will forgive him in some way, however, with his family, that's a different story. He doesn't depend on his family to motivate his skating competitions. He had said, "I don't give a flying fuck about my family.". And now, Mark, my question is... does first love last forever? Pretty rare in realistic world. Please, Mark, when will you post next chapter of Bridgemont series?! Thanks,
  20. SupermanSavesYou

    Chapter 17

    thank you for a great story about Alex! I hope JJ is a Princess AND a whore combined to Alex. and I noticed Alex was started to act as a pig with JJ while at the beginning he treat JJ as princess. So, is JJ Alex's match?
  21. SupermanSavesYou

    Chapter 1

    Mark, I never get bored with your CAP stories. thank you for the new book of CAP! Now I can smell 'troubles' arise from Alex/JJ connection. And, I identified symptoms of Borderline Disorder in JJ: sexual abuse, physical abuse, neglected while growing up, blames the problems on others, doesn't take responsible for his own actions, and thinking negativity. Hopefully, something or someone (Alex??) early-intervenes him out of that.
  22. I'm all for history! I laughed out loud at what father tried to say about the gun as a "him". Ty is lucky to have open minded father. I enjoy your story
  23. Mark, there is something bothering me.... Why Ace isn't in the story often?
  24. I knew you have something up with Alex! Hopefully it's good! Thank you for the great last chapter of this book. I enjoy it. Looking forward to yo your next book!
  25. SupermanSavesYou

    Chapter 44

    Mark, thank you for a really good chapter! after reading your responses to reviewers, I believe Matt is moving to Boston to be there for new baby and to reconnect with Riley as father as he realized he should have done that long time ago. Never too late, right? I'm looking forward to read what happened with Alex. I recalled in previous reviews, you mentioned that Alex is not an evil guy, right? Your devoted reader,
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