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This bumpy road will lead to a stronger bond in Alex and JJ's relationship. I can understand how upset JJ is. As you said that JJ still wants Alex, he will forgive him in some way, however, with his family, that's a different story. He doesn't depend on his family to motivate his skating competitions. He had said, "I don't give a flying fuck about my family.". And now, Mark, my question is... does first love last forever? Pretty rare in realistic world. Please, Mark, when will you post next chapter of Bridgemont series?! Thanks,
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thank you for a great story about Alex! I hope JJ is a Princess AND a whore combined to Alex. and I noticed Alex was started to act as a pig with JJ while at the beginning he treat JJ as princess. So, is JJ Alex's match?
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Mark, I never get bored with your CAP stories. thank you for the new book of CAP! Now I can smell 'troubles' arise from Alex/JJ connection. And, I identified symptoms of Borderline Disorder in JJ: sexual abuse, physical abuse, neglected while growing up, blames the problems on others, doesn't take responsible for his own actions, and thinking negativity. Hopefully, something or someone (Alex??) early-intervenes him out of that.
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Great-Granddaddy's Gun
SupermanSavesYou commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in Great-Granddaddy's Gun
I'm all for history! I laughed out loud at what father tried to say about the gun as a "him". Ty is lucky to have open minded father. I enjoy your story -
What Happens Next In CAP?
SupermanSavesYou replied to methodwriter85's topic in Mark Arbour Fan Club's Topics
Mark, there is something bothering me.... Why Ace isn't in the story often? -
Chapter 45: Final Chapter
SupermanSavesYou commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 45: Final Chapter
I knew you have something up with Alex! Hopefully it's good! Thank you for the great last chapter of this book. I enjoy it. Looking forward to yo your next book! -
Mark, thank you for a really good chapter! after reading your responses to reviewers, I believe Matt is moving to Boston to be there for new baby and to reconnect with Riley as father as he realized he should have done that long time ago. Never too late, right? I'm looking forward to read what happened with Alex. I recalled in previous reviews, you mentioned that Alex is not an evil guy, right? Your devoted reader,
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Why can't Princess of Danfield do something about their lousy sex issue? or perhaps in the next chapter, you are planning to take us, the readers, into the bedroom and witness their conversation about why Earl of Bridgemont give him a lousy sex?
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Mark, thank you for the Flux chapter... So, if Clara and Wally aren't the reason since they are not that religious, my understanding is Zach has to protect his reputation due to his football career. Just like he made some silly decisions in the past. Maybe Zach thinks it's fine to draw religious fans, but Zach's eyes were wide open showed that he knew Will will not like it. It has to be PR thing. I like the romantic part between Wade & Matt. Beautifully written, Mark!
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UUUGGGGHHHHHHHHHH❗️ Lady Eekk is so annoying. If only Granger can throw her overboard to the sharks.... and I can't wait to see what your next chapter will reveal on this annoying Lady Eekkk! As always, Mark, I enjoy your chapter. :-)
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Thank you, Mark, for the interesting chapter. I am looking forward to what next 4 chapters bring! I can understand why the reviewers' dislike Lord Bridgemont because he seemed two faced. Americans tend to be very blunt, straightforward, honest, and get to the point while British aristocrats are social class-driven. I am pretty sure your next chapter may explain why Alex is acting like two different people. I hope the mystery of Alex turned out positive news and no one gets hurt because I like the idea of Granger storyline cross with CAP storyline. Please, Mark, make Alex's excuse for being that way to be positive! :-) Anyway, about Max's HIV status in the last chapter,.... sighing... I wish discovering the 2nd test is negative was true for me when I was 19. But, I'm grateful my health is in a great shape today still. Thank you for the twists and turns because it keeps us on the edge!
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I am looking forward to this journey to Ottoman Empire, your writings about those trips always are interesting. I feel like I'm on Granger's ship always. I don't get it why Caroline acting like this? Hopefully, they work it out in next chapter or 4. I am wondering you will make Granger and Lord Elgin sleep together? *chuckles* -Léon
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oh, I pray that you will come up with a story line about the fact Matt's HIV result turned out a mistake. No one should experience the discovering one is a HIV positive. But, if Matt is actually HIV positive, I can feel his depression and thinking the world is end. With Will and rest of family members, Matt will be fine. I'm pretty sure Matt is reevaluating the priorities and expectations from living his life. Like, losing so-called friends and changing goals. I am Forty One now and I have it since I was Nineteen years old. I am healthy, hot and good looking. Matt and Cody can be like that as long as they lead healthy lifestyle. You write very well!
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Walking around in ile de cite after Wade left in the cab was perfect because the romance in the air in Paris reminds all of us that we will experience romances of ourselves always I went back to Paris from Juvisy-sur-Orge to nurse my broken heart.. Ile de Cite was perfect place to get reminded that we all will experience romances in the future. Life goes on.
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Mark, I noticed few chapters ago, those characters were painted good / bad, then now those are painted in reversed way. That shows we all are humans. I'm glad Matt had JP to point out that jealousy isn't helping him to move forward. it' was hard when I had to let my ex go while I loved him so much. Now he is happy with his new lover in Florida. I am actually happy for him cos I want to see him happy. So, I just moved on and live my life to the fullest here in Boston. you write well! -Leon
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oh.... Matt is feeling lost and sad about Wade being into Alex Bridgemont. He has to go through this stage because it is part of breaking up process, too. He obviously KNEW he is hot and has so much to offer in a relationship. I am impressed with his maturity now. I want Matt more than ever! anyway, things will be much more different since Matt will live in Chicago and Wade in Boston. Matt! keep your chin up!
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Mark, I sincerely hope Matt moves forward with his life with lesson learned and discovers his identity without Wade. He needs a new man in his life with a fresh start. People changes. he has 70 years ahead of him in life; and, many things will come into his life. If Matt and Wade are back together in the future, I will be surprised. Well written, Mark, about tied the strings into one health relationship: Matt & Brad, Will & Matt. I am nervous about Brad & Wade together. I was imaging "Schluter-Danfield's Wedding"......although the sound of those last names together is sexy, I don't want it to be happened. :-/ -Léon.
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Oh, the string attachment between Matt and Wade is definitely FINISHED! I am pissed off right now. .... sigh.... wow, I am emotionally attached to your story! And, why would Matt want go to Boston after all of that craps?! You write very well! -Léon
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after all, Mark & dear readers, Wade and Matt are human. And what's more, what they went through showed us that they both actually love each other very much; yet, couldn't and/or wouldn't work it out well at the moments. A person becomes matured AFTER breaking up is part of the Facts of Life. Matt and Wade will be in pain while moving on soon after; but, those guys will be fine. There are so many doors of opportunities out there to open. They are humans, after all. This chapter, Mark, is really sore spots for me cos' I experienced it myself. But, hey, I survived and am happy at where I am! -Léon
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Mark..... you are so good with words to prompt the emotions out of me. Talked about Brad looking into violet blue eyes that reminded Robbie is gone. And, I must say the stunned looking scene at the breakfast table is making me restless for the next chapter to be unfold! I know Matt will find a way to be closer to Wade in Boston, but he has to give Wade a time and space. Now, the ball is in Wade's hands and it is up to him to do about it.... Well, if I were Wade, I'll keep him sweating long enough to see how much he loves me by doing funny or silly things and laugh with him about it in future. Love makes us do stupid things that are out of our characters.... But, of course, you know what will happen next. -Léon
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Mark, Gosh, the interaction between Wade and Matt on the bed is hitting me hard. It literally made me teary eyed, ( even, Superman has emotions! lol). That part made me wishing my own experience are alike this one, but alas, my blond New Yorker, turned out to be a shallow jerk... And, to add that, it gives me a hope that I will meet Mr. Right around the corner somewhere in Boston. who knows I may meet Wade at The Harvard Yard. *chuckles* -Léon
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Much to my delights to discover there is the next book of CAP! Your story plot and style suit my intelligence and of course, my imaginations. You inspire me wanting to write and post these on GA.... :-) -Léon
