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I want to spank Cavendish for being a bad boy! 🧐
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Zach knew the assistant coach was there... period. why else he said,”it’s okay, Will.”
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Individual with Borderline personality disorder tends to act like what JJ is doing. Thank you, Mark. Great story!
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Mark; Thank you for sharing your art. You inspire me to love those 18th century His Britainnic Majesty’ Royal Navy ships. Merci beaucoup! -Léon
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Jeez, Mark! You got me so upset with thinking Brad was killed in plane crash! And, I had actually thought JP was on that plane until I read your responses to the reviews. Whew! Now, I'm starting to suspect that Brad secretly took off to meet Mike Carmichael and didn't know about the crash. And, that Will is so angry for not hearing from his father for days thereafter while doesn't know he is in Hawai'i at the whole time.. I'm sorry to hear Buzz was killed; but, I'm wondering if his son will be ending up in Will's bed eventually? What a cliffhanger, Mark❗️ -Léon
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That's explained Brad's dislike any surprises.
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Jeff Hayes...... What a contrast: from young robust handsome high school football star to empty-shell, substance abused depressed man... I feel JP's turmoil inside.
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“Just know,” I said, looking into his eyes, “that you have the ability to make me very happy, but you also have the ability to hurt me, and hurt me very badly.” poor JP, he wouldn't know what will happen in the future with Jeff Hayes!
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It was good to have fond memories with André to look back to.
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Ahh, Jeff Hayes, 17 years old, is full of life. I wish a real Jeff Hayes was at my high school. I would be the happiest dude in whole San Diego County!
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this is when the word "snaugh" born. It's amazing to meet teenage Jeff Hayes in this chapter while knowing what happened in the future.
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Sicilian prince is George's next lover, hmm?
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this chapter makes me missing my youth: exploration of self and discovering new things. I love to re-read your chapters.
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Mark, JP said to 16 years old Stefan, “Well Stefan, you're safe and sound here. You'll find that people, your family, will do things for you just because they love and care about you, without expecting you to do things in return. It's a new life for you.” That was in 1962! the very beginning of Stefan's American Life. You wrote this really good! Now I figured out JP's age, he is 26 in this chapter.
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Grandfather is coming for a visit?! THAT's will be interesting. I'll bet he will look down on everything, just because the Earl disappointed him by not marrying to a British heiress. *drama unfolds*
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Ahhh. blissful days for JP with beautiful Andre.
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Oh, Mark, you sure write a good chapter! (understatement.. I know).. but the therapy session part made me all teared up. And, now, after all of this Lovey-Dovey... all Rainbow Brite & The Color Kids... all My-Little-Ponies.., there has to be Cruella DeVille knocking the door and waiting impatiently. And, I am so glad there is no deaths in the rest of the story! Keep writing more!
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Mr. Hartford? who is he? I couldn't recalled who he is. I would have said to those stupid parents if I'm Zach. The parents should trust him to make his own judgements since he will be 18 soon, but no, they want to control him like he is 12!
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As for Marc, it's common for a victim to become a different person - after they become more confident- after the treatment process either to be a horrible or a better person. I sincerely hope Marc will become a better person two times more. During the period of being victimized, they oppress their personalities and adopt abuser's decisions and expectation. If Marc blossoms into one of the CAD family, he will be at right place. In that Family and OUR HEARTS. Otherwise, I will send the Ravens to pluck his eyes out and let vultures eat his insides out! It's tragic that nowadays people actually believe that old fashioned Bibical consequences. Stone women to death for being in same room with husbands while having her periods. Jeez! Seriously?! *rolls my eyes* -Léon
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Mark, I am glad that Brad thinks of his sons before a lover. I know how hard it is if someone loves other so much but finds other doesnt get along with kids. I still don't trust Marc Carmaine. I think Will and I are alike regarding having the suspicions about Marc. Perhaps you will, in next chapter, make Marc a hero and a perfect lover who loves sons! let's see❗️ Thank you for the great chapter!
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Mark, I am having an uneasiness in the situation with Marc. I just don't trust him. and what's more, giving him a credit card at this early? that's a bad idea. and great chapter.
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Mark, I can see why you chose Claremont, Cos the place where exiled French royals lived was called Claremont in England. Good choice. JP seems uptight guy; to hit the police officer is out of his comfort zone. Was it due to his youth?
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Prologue and Chapter 1
SupermanSavesYou commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Prologue and Chapter 1
Mark, the life back in 1960s as a gay man was so different, but finding a quickie hasn't been changed.. and, I am reading the whole thing again: starting Book 1 now. I forgot how alive Andre is. -Léon -
Hello Mark, Is that how Billionaires handle their human relationships as if they are house pets? lol. anyway, I agree with Maarten, because Brad does show maturity... compared to 20 years before. And, I have this feeling Cam and Devon have done something. Maybe I'm imagining things. -Leon
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Mark, I do remember the thought I had back in 2003, "wow! The United States of America throppled Iraqi's Dictator within 21 days! That showed the world how powerful we are!" And, now, I looked back to those conflicts... would this so-called Islamic State never happened if we didn't do the Imperialism? Some people said that Iraq is better off having Saddam Hussein because he was the lesser evil than otherwise. Anyway, I can understand why JP is upset about this war after lived through Vietnam War. Now, as Jason (StoriReder) mentioned guys among Matt and Wade's teammates may have gone to Iraq, and even those young main characters may have been deployed! I am nervous now about who will be survived/ killed in action or what will happen next? Storyline changes after the death of loved one? I am looking forward to read your next chapter! -
