dutch joe

After a long wait, a very promising start. I expect there will be a lot of emotion and I'll need a lot of hanky's :wacko:

So at the end Owen & Aiden will be together again, just as in TLW And Travis and Dennis will be together :wacko: and Valentine as an interested third party But what will happen to the young Reilly? Will he be the only one that stays alone? The story is getting more interesting with each chapter.

I expect that Travis had a very rough live and will end up with one of the main characters :ranger: And what will be the first chapter in wich Dennis laughs????? :wacko:

A good ending of a very nice story . Maybe sometime you can tell more about the life of Ian and his little brother? I am looking forward to your next story

I also think this is a very nice story about the development of an abused youngster. It develops slowly but it is nice reading about all the details Ian didn't see in his former life. Go on Vlista

I do like Dom. I do like Dom's stories. I don't like his cliffhangers How will it all end????

It's more like a detective story than an (homo-)erotic one. But it is good and especially the cliff hangers that Dom has on nearly every chapter. I don't know if I can sleep this night after this chapter

Marvelous chapter Dom. All discussions before if there are yes or no two kids and now simply telling the lie that David and Oliver are one and the same person But I don't believe you. I expect Frank's dad to solve the riddle, I would prefer in the next chapter

Great story, beautiful ending

No excuse needed, just say you have a writers block. Or that you don't know how to end this story and we get some more very nice chapters.

And what a cliff hanger, this is really hanging on a cliff. What will mom do with David and what dark secrets are there in this house :nuke:

And it is a d... good story, even with a preacher and a preacher's son in it. Not to much bible quoting, just some bare facts. I expect they wake up the next morning with some boners and unmeditated cuddlling

I thought this story totally different from the other DOM stories but a lot of other readers seem to recognize nearly all the characters from other stories in just Frank and his sister. Dom, just go on and also finish please With Trust.

A very nice story that needs a sequel: how will mommy react???? And a slight mistake: KLM does not fly to Brussels but to Amsterdam