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    Being in love is always good, only when love is not returned, it becomes a problem. I was quite happy with where I stood with Everett, and that was literally under an umbrella in the street, waiting for Ian who had forgotten his cellphone at Marco’s apartment. It was just after 9 and the rain had started falling. Marco offered to call us a cab but I thought it would be a waste of money just for a five-minute drive. “I think tonight was probably the best fun I had in a long time," Everett said
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    Thanks for sticking with this story, yeah im trying to direct it into a more lighter mood because i always tend to go dramaesque lol. We'll see what developes with Marco
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    Time

    BarricadeBoy commented on BarricadeBoy's story chapter in Time

    im okay, thanks AC
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    Time stood still and we both felt the thrill Of a love so pure as our lonely hearts found a cure Time went on and the façade was no more Lies piled up and then came threats of walking out the door Still we went on, we threw them under the rug Yet we neglected to notice the mess on the floor Time passed and came around again This love was endearing but sure enough it was going to end And when it does, hope were both on the same boat Whichever way it ends, I fear I might not be able
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    We had one more night before it was back to the books. Marco was no longer studying but living in an apartment a few blocks from campus, and Everett and I had gone to the market because Marco invited us for a Sunday night dinner. “I’m going to stuff myself,” Everett said as I was pushing him down the aisle. “Remember, we have a $50 budget, so we have to spend wisely otherwise not all of us will be eating.” Everett grabbed some pita bread. “Do you really think Marco is this nice guy now? Are y
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    I was up all night tossing and turning. Ian had been sleeping restfully, and I wondered if maybe he wanted his brother’s accident put behind him. I seriously considered telling him what I know, or at least telling Everett; or I could go with my gut feeling, and say nothing, because I wasn’t obliged to. After a while of battling with myself I decided it would be best if I get up and start my day. There wasn’t much to do. The college would only re-open after this weekend and that meant that there
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    Glad u are reading again, and yes I will try my best to keep up the good work!
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    Thanks for the touching review AC!
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    I was taking a nap on the couch when I woke up rather abruptly. I was alone and I remembered that Everett and I came downstairs where we watched TV until I drifted off; he must be in the kitchen, I thought to myself, mindlessly getting up and walking to him. “Dad, where is Everett?” I asked, surprised that he wasn’t there. “Outside,” my dad answered, not even looking at me. I quickly ran outside, and there he was at the end of the driveway, talking to Hunter. I decided not to step any closer
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    water
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    Confessions

    BarricadeBoy commented on BarricadeBoy's story chapter in Confessions

    Your wish has been granted, lol. thanks for the review!
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    Hey Jaro! Thanks for reading. I actually got an editor after a few chapters. They'll get better lol. Enjoy , and thanks for the offer!
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    Prologue

    BarricadeBoy commented on albertnothlit's story chapter in Prologue

    I want to say that you started the chapter "great" but it seems weird saying that given the tone. i will rather say that it starts off interestingly and the way you capture Josh's thoughts is amazing. i was not planning on reading anything but "Josh.mp4" just caught my attention and i am glad i did!
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    Confessions

    BarricadeBoy posted new chapter in Hot Wheels

    I was woken up by one of my favorite sounds – Everett’s light snores. For a moment I felt that this must be a dream, but I soon came to realize that last night did happen; Everett was here with me and he was sleeping on my dad’s couch. I stiffly made myself get out of the bed that I made on the floor. “Good morning, Mr. Wood,” I said as I rubbed at my erection through my boxers and tiredly made my way to the bathroom. I started to shower, reluctantly undressing myself, and slowly stepping into
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    Yes I'll go to prom with you
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    A man in love wakes up smiling He dreams of your face It’s so sneaky yet so benign A man in love sips his morning coffee slowly He is thinking of his other half As he caresses his chest unknowingly Because he longs for your touch He longs for your kiss He needs you to take him It’s his only wish
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    Dreams are a blessing, but most of the time, they are a curse. They show you your deepest desires, but when they reach the best part, they're snatched away from you by a cold blowing wind in the middle of the night, or the first ray of sunshine at dawn. I had a dream last night: Everett was running on the beach towards me, I was sitting on a rock. He looked so happy and when he finally reached me, he held out his hand, suggesting a dance there on the white sand beach against a backdrop of blue,
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    yes hot wheels might never end lol, thanx for reading!
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    yes hot wheels might never end lol, thanx for reading!
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    Whoop- that was quick! LOL. hmm yes its hard making a friend that resembles your far away sweetheart, but Andrew needs to loosen up and thats all Hunter really wants, Everett too!
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    I was still waiting outside, it'd been almost an hour longer than my dad had promised to pick me up but I couldn’t help think that he lied, but he couldn’t tell it to my face. I spent the lonely afternoon replaying the short conversation I had with my new roommate; it was so surreal, I don’t know what to think about it all, but I am going to remain positive and believe that the two accidents had nothing to do with each other. My thinking paid off because somehow time moved faster and I could s
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    its 2:47AM and im in bed laughing at ur commentary, u gave this story a second life lol thanks, and yes, the scene was fun to write.
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    well u have a few chapters ahead of u, enjoy hehe
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    wow- thanks for saying that. this is my first piece of writing and u might find it silly and clumsy at times, thank u for reading, you're not so "Scary"after all lol
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    Hello, Goodbye

    BarricadeBoy commented on BarricadeBoy's story chapter in Hello, Goodbye

    hey Cannd, thanks for the review. I will try and take some worries away for u until the new chapter is posted. Firstly, on the subject of Everett, he has seen what happens to Daniel and he wanted to protect his brother by getting him out of there ASAP. he knew that was the best he can do( i will try to explain this in another chapter) Secondly, Marco left for a bigger reason actually although i haven't quite figured him out yet. Finally, LOL, Ev and Andy is having a rough patch with all that has happened, the introduction of Ian was essentially just as a roommate and i might keep it that way, that story could develop further or not. keep reading though hehe
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