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Patrick and Tristan rounded the hallway corner just in time for Tristan to have the wind knocked out of him by a blur of pink. More people ran up as Tristan tried to catch his breath and hold on to the now wriggling pink lump in his arms. Playing a hunch, he gasped out, “Fran, I presume.” The wiggling stopped and a far too intelligent gaze captured his. He got lost in that gaze for a few moments before yelling got his attention. “Fran, what have you been told about running in the
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I'm sure Kit will try, but i think Tristan will get around him He strikes me as someone who always gets his own way. Of course, Carl may change that Thanks for reading and commenting
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Hi Gary
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Hi Albert
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Hope everything gets sorted quickly for you.
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Morning all.
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Morning Clo
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she’s a wonderful little girl. Over active...but wonderful. As far as I know she’s fine. Her mum said she’d drop her to me at the cafe I volunteer at on a Saturday and I'll watch her there while I work.
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Good luck you’re braver than me.
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Hi Xander I did at first. But as she got tired she wanted her mum, like most young kids who are from single mums do. By seven at night she was getting hard to settle. Then her mum wanted me to have her overnight. But, I have no room, no cot/suitable bed/plus she wanted to see her mum. I think she was being passed to a nieghbour for the night after getting a cuddle from her mum when I left her. I really would love to get hold of her mums doctors, she spent all day getting sent to different places and then still got sent home in tears and in no condition to look after an over active 2/3 year old. Sorry for the rant...hope you and the family are doing well
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Hi Gary That's okay. I’ve only just caught up with replys and managed to write myself out of the corner I’d written myself into. No hurry.
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Hi Page
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Evening all Good grief what a day. A young lady i know suffers from depression and she was having problems with her medication, doctors, and our local mental health centre and of course the local social services. So, i ended up babysitting her three year old. I can't believe how much I’d forgotten how exhausting a three year old could be. My head is splitting, and all i want to do now is go to bed.
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Hi Albert
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Brilliant. Please post it to the stories. People will love it
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Hi Page
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Hi Gary
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Hi Albert
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That's because he's sensible and not too close to what's going on yet. I think that gives him an outsiders view and so he can see what the others either don't see, or refuse to see. I think he won't give them much choice. Now when he comes up against ~Kitryn about Fran, that will be interesting to see. Hopefully, you will only have to wait until next week. I am doing my best to not miss weeks unless it is unavoidable. Thank you, everyone, for continuing to read and comment.
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I hope we will get some answer finally too. In the next chapter, though? Hmmm, that might be a bit ambitious. Yep, questions, questions, questions, as far as the eye can see. I'm sure we'll start getting some answers soon though. The wards will be explained soon, that much i know and can tell you. As for Fran, the adults are another story. Hopefully, Tristan will be the sensible one to pull their heads out of their backsides and to show them they need to work together-with Fran too-to get to the bottom of whats going on. I think being Elders, Tristan and Carl will put duty first. and if for any reason they don't I'm sure the others will remind them...loudly. Thank you everyone for reading and commenting, it means a lot
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I agree with you. When I started this story, it was supposed to be short and sweet. It is currently standing at over thirty thousand words and at a guess is just over halfway through. We'll have to see where it takes us I'm glad, she is a great character to write. I'm waiting for the kits to ask an adult what the noise they keep hearing at night is I'm sure the mage will add something to the discussions, if nothing else he may add more questions I'm sure they'll have a shower after breakfast, and before leaving their suite. I think most shifters understand. If they're mated they remember what it was like, and if they're single they're just wishing it was them making the noise with their own mate. Thank you all for reading and commenting, it means a lot to read all your views and comments. :
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Ah, my mum's cat used to do that. Then there was the time she managed to get my bedroom door open. I woke up to her sitting on my bedside table just staring at me <shudders> creepy.
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Yep, more questions but very few answers at the moment. I do like to add mystery, but in the case of this story, I think I will be glad when some of the characters start finding some answers. We'll just have to watch and find out together I'm hoping someone will find the one answer soon that will start unraveling all the mysteries at once. They may do, but I think the adults mind automatically went to the worst case scenario due to everything else going on at the moment. I think these adults are going to be due a huge shake up very soon. They think that because Fran is a child and untrained she needs to be sheltered. They need to change their thought patterns soon, before someone does it for them. I'll add another one for you. OR Jenny isn't dead and she is projecting to her daughter Thank you for reading nad commenting, and I'm sorry it took me so long to reply.
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Afternoon all. i'm off to try and catch up in answering chapter comments. People have been so patient with me.
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Hi B It's so annoying, 'cause you always end up rushing and then forgetting something.
