Innoce Ludo

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The confusion, the doubt, the being thrown around from one corner to another while i read it... i loved this chapter The only thing I didn't like was the excessive drinking. But then i don't drink at all so that's probably why it irks me. And I definitely thought that that Brandon fellow was giving off some innuendos. He's going to be trouble. Oh and go Ronnie! A little bit too much revenge for me, but at least Caleb noticed something. Someone'll need to hit him on the head with a frying pan before he ever realises he loves the girl, but progress is progress...

I was hoping for a new chapter after my weekend (locked away without acces to the net for grouptalk) and I got it I'm so happy now and it was so good. The kisses, the kisses! Now I want more, but I'm also a bit worried about how Nelson is going to handle Haily. I'm starting to think something needs to be done about that or it'll blow up in his face.

It stopped! Wah! Why?! Great chapter I really loved Nelson and Milo getting closer (sucker for romance) and I love the bluntness. I admire the bluntness, I want to tell people what's on my mind. Alas people would be too shocked, except for my sis, she knows that I'm not the shy, prude person everyone seems to think I am. And... girls asking to rewind the 'birth'-video? o.0 I'm shocked, at least when they showed it in my class (we were 14 or something ), it made me reconsider ever wanting kids... Now my sister is studying to become a midwife and I know more of the dirty details than I ever wished to know. I doubt even more and my sister keeps asking me why. Evil she is. A new chapter See the grin? My day is made! Thanks

I have always felt the beginning of DD is the best ever. Rory getting picked up from the airport all lost and in a 'oh my god he could break me in two if I tell him I'm gay' mood and then inside Eddie's house seeing the picture of Eddie with his arm around Jase thinking Jase is a drinking buddy and Eddie telling Rory Jase is his 'uncle'. I think I broke down laughing here the first time I read it because it was so obvious Btw, now that I reread the story, what happened to the fishtank?

Ok, my German isn't that good and the quality is low so i missed the first part. I did mention he wanted to play didn't I? That's what he says after having thrown all the files from his desk. Then he goes 'Start!' After the first little bit of silence he goes, 'I'll say this one more time' Then he goes 'Ach' and a few things I'm pretty sure all come down to 'What's the f*ing problem with the game?' Then the game starts up and he goes 'Yeah!' and 'Faster! Start Faster!' 'It's taking Off, Now it's taking off!' (singing) Then it apparently goes wrong and he goes 'Play! I want to play!' again, or something along those lines (Germans should not shout ) heavy breathing *plugs in her earphones so she can put it on louder* I still don't understand everything he's doing, but he wants a lot of things then he goes on a 'What's wrong, What could be wrong' trip before the music starts playing and he gets happy. mmmh, need to go to my grandparents now. If you want to know more ask I'm guessing he'll just keep getting frustrated over some game that obviously won't work.

Wow... I just read the chapter and I think I was actually so exhausted by all the thoughts i had I didn't feel much emotion. I just felt tired. So it's done... This seems so weird. When i started reading Dom's stories TLW and TOU had already been finished and I read them in about three days each (my mother especially thought I was getting antisocial spending my entire day in front of the pc). DD was the longest story I'd ever had to wait to end and also the most draining. Talk about your emotional rollercoaster I loved it though and I'm glad Rory realised he had to stay in Arizona and that Eddie was ok (once I read he was alive i thought, oh i hope he's not disabled, or injured so bad he'd need months to recover... I am so greedy ) Keep up the very good work (I'm already rooting for With Trust to make me go crazy with impatience)

Yes... I'm a big gossip and I so want to see Milo find out and totally freak out over it. I like secrets and i like it more when they get out. unless their mine, we're not going there. Biassed? Double Standard? As long as it's stories I get to savagely enjoy the fun Also thanks for the welcome. Innoce

That's one angry kid I'm LRITE at heart, though Seth has wormed his way inside of my heart as well and i'm willing to see where it leads. provided that everyone turns out happy in the end (optimistic little me ) Also, the kid wants to start playing o.0 start playing what? *snicker*

I've been lurking around gayauthors reading the stories more than the boards (I've got catching up to do) and I always intended to join, but after reading a new chapter I was usually in a hurry to get somewhere else lol. But now I could not get my conscious calm without doing this *thwacks Caleb in the head with big frying pan* how can he do that to the poor girl! Also, great developments I love this story, and most of the characters, I even liked Assface from the moment he entered. Joe has been blemished a bit in my opinion and I foresee trouble with him in the future. It's a DomLuka story, there'll be trouble anyway Innoce