I loved this story from beginning to end. The only issue I really had was, as there were so many different characters, it seemed as if you may have gotten them confused. At one point there was a Conrad Diaz, and in the end there is a Jess Diaz. Did Conrad become Jess? It just confused me as there are two different characters with the same last name, that appear, on the first read-through, to be the same person. Although Jess was present on the soccer team, it just felt like a different person.
Now, to get away from the Jess/Conrad thing. It seemed as if you occasionally mixed people up in co