Parker Owens
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Last update November 2, 2025
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A new kind of adventure is unfolding. I’m interested in the parallels between Chichi and Malik’s experiences. They provide ample food for thought and speculation. I liked the picture of characters in the story.
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They do.
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This poem will go up on my classroom door.
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The funeral scene was moving, as was Rhaelce’s grief. What does Rothik know? One can’t stop or detour to quiz the priest, who essentially signed Malik’s death warrant. But will Nyrra give chase? That seems inevitable, and then what happens when they’re caught? I’ll be watching for the next chapter.
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Let me add to the admiration for this poem, which spoke more and more deeply to my heart and experience with each line. You had me with the thousand doors standing open, and trying on futures like coats felt like it carried me away. Thank you for this.
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I may be inspired by this to write again. I have been so full of inertia lately, alone with thoughts that fail to make their way to a page. Thank you.
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Thank you very much for reading these. I’m very glad you liked them.
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Amen.
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You make me feel both desperation and anger, followed by emptiness. I think this is really interesting poem - betrayal and its subsequent choices played out.
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Oh, to re-create those golden, beautiful summers you describe! I was transported. The if only, if only, that follows is a melancholy counterpoint, as were the haiku that followed. Beautiful and evocative.
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I felt the cool grey sky pressing down on me, and the wind blowing on my face. Well done.
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Thank you so much for taking moment to respond. I really appreciate it.
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Now I’m supposed to go to sleep tonight. Not happening. I’ll stew over this chapter into the wee hours of the morning. Well done!
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Thank you, ever and again, for reading these. The seasons advance, and there’s nothing they can do but exist as they are. Why do so many human beings fuss over what another person cannot, and should not, change?
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Yes indeed. The red pencil, my smooth writing red pen. Or, for truly involved editing, a four-color pen.
