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This story is coming along well. Kurtis and Tony seem to be getting on well together, and I look forward to reading about Christmas dinner. I am wondering if Tony might be gay or bisexual, as he seemed to accept Kurtis without question. The only problem that I have with this story is that the chapters are too short🙂but seriously, I am enjoying reading this story so far.
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A great second chapter! This story is really fast-paced, and I hope it continues to be so.
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Discovery And Banishment
Lutheros commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Discovery And Banishment
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This Story has the makings of something more. The author might consider expanding this into a full story. I would like to read a longer story with this short story as a premise. Maybe build on Leo and Kenny's relationship going forward.
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I still find this story interesting, but frustrating. Such short chapters! I almost want to pause for a year before coming back to this story and reading the chapters to catch up. Kidding! Sort of! Maybe?
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Did not mean to imply that there is anything wrong with the flashbacks; I just wanted to note that it was a deviation from Comicality's style. There is nothing wrong with using flashbacks in a story, in my opinion. I am still looking forward to reading the next chapters.
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Well, an interesting chapter. The nightclub fits in with Comicality's storylines, but I do not think that the flashback did. I could be wrong, but I do not remember any flashbacks in his stories. I also sense trouble from the elders. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
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Chapter 7: Passionate Night
Lutheros commented on Hikaru29's story chapter in Chapter 7: Passionate Night
A great chapter! I thoroughly enjoy this story, and I look forward to reading more. -
Chapter 5: The Boy From Argos
Lutheros commented on Hikaru29's story chapter in Chapter 5: The Boy From Argos
An exciting chapter! It looks like Adrian will become a vampire after all. -
Chapter 4: Forgotten Memories of Argos
Lutheros commented on Hikaru29's story chapter in Chapter 4: Forgotten Memories of Argos
Wow, there is a lot to assimilate in this chapter! Keep up the good work. I look forward to seeing how things turn out. Will Adrian become a vampire? Only time will tell. -
Chapter 2: A Growing Obsession
Lutheros commented on Hikaru29's story chapter in Chapter 2: A Growing Obsession
I feel sorry for Adrian. His parents are neglectful and do not seem to care about him. -
Chapter 1: A Chance Encounter
Lutheros commented on Hikaru29's story chapter in Chapter 1: A Chance Encounter
A wonderful beginning to a new story. I've looked forward to more installments. Keep up the good work. -
A Great first chapter. I look forward to reading more.
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Chapter 173 A Hard Act to Follow
Lutheros commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 173 A Hard Act to Follow
I love this story! I can hardly wait for the next chapter. I am thinking about starting over from chapter one again🙂 -
This was an interesting prologue to a story. I will read on to see where it goes from here.
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I was right, it was Shiloh! Now that I am caught up, I can hardly wait for chapter 8.
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My money is on Shiloh with the blue eyes. I am loving this story so far, but I really wish the chapters were longer.
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Chapter 1 Graduation Morning
Lutheros commented on AquariusGuy's story chapter in Chapter 1 Graduation Morning
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I have been checking daily for a new chapter. Although this chapter may have been a little shorter than average, it was still worth the wait. Thank you for providing a new chapter to this story. I am already looking forward to the next one🙂
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hey Jeff, I love this story! I have been waiting for the next chapter for three weeks now, and I feel like I am going through withdrawals. I hope everything is fine with you. I am looking forward to the next chapters of this story.
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Nick should make the next move and kiss Jack. Jack says he does not know how to act, so maybe Nick should show him.
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It has been long months since the last Lone Wolf Ranch chapter, and I have been suffering some hefty withdrawals.
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I read this story when it was first posted, and now I am reading it a second time. Although it is on hold, I still have hopes that the author will finish this story.
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So, Connor is not really interested in Hannah, but seems to be attracted to the boy. He has got to be gay but is in denial. Been there, felt that. it took me years to admit to myself that I was gay. I know how he is feeling. This is an interesting start to a story that I have not read before. As I understand it, this story has been posted here before. I look forward to reading the additional chapters.
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I love this story, so far, and I hope that you continue it in book 4! I can hardly wait to see how you plan the baby's growth. Will we get to experience the child's growing up into a toddler, pre-teen, and teen?
