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    Chapter 1

    Lutheros commented on Enoch's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Hurricanes and flooding? West Coast boy here; all I have to deal with are earthquakes! But seriously, this is an entertaining start to book three of the series, and I am looking forward to reading more. I've got a question, though. I thought that Andy and his friends lived in a housing tract, but this story's beginning makes it sound like he is living in a mansion on top of a hill?
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    Some boy-boy oral sex arrives. As the title implies, the hazing will include some potentially disturbing tasks. I had to think about this one for a while before I decided to comment. I am not into hazing. in any way shape or form. Even though the oral sex was ... Enjoyable, It still bordered on rape, and I can not Condone this. I imagine that the next chapter will be worse, but hopefully after this, there will not be any more forced sex. This being said, the story Is entertaining and well written. I look forward to further chapters.
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    Bernie would never again act as my father. A few months later, I found out he wouldn’t ever be acting as anything. Does that mean that the major is going to off him? One can only hope! But on a serious note, I am sorry to hear of your loss. I lost my parrot a few months ago, and I still feel the absence.
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    Merry Christmas

    Lutheros commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Merry Christmas

    Another great chapter, Lee, and sooner than I expected! I am looking forward to Christmas dinner and Captain Perez's son😉.
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    Going Home

    Lutheros commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Going Home

    This story is coming along well. Kurtis and Tony seem to be getting on well together, and I look forward to reading about Christmas dinner. I am wondering if Tony might be gay or bisexual, as he seemed to accept Kurtis without question. The only problem that I have with this story is that the chapters are too short🙂but seriously, I am enjoying reading this story so far.
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    A great second chapter! This story is really fast-paced, and I hope it continues to be so.
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    Great fast-paced first chapter. I am looking forward to chapter two.
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    First Encounter

    Lutheros commented on E K Stokes's story chapter in First Encounter

    This Story has the makings of something more. The author might consider expanding this into a full story. I would like to read a longer story with this short story as a premise. Maybe build on Leo and Kenny's relationship going forward.
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    I still find this story interesting, but frustrating. Such short chapters! I almost want to pause for a year before coming back to this story and reading the chapters to catch up. Kidding! Sort of! Maybe?
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    Did not mean to imply that there is anything wrong with the flashbacks; I just wanted to note that it was a deviation from Comicality's style. There is nothing wrong with using flashbacks in a story, in my opinion. I am still looking forward to reading the next chapters.
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    Well, an interesting chapter. The nightclub fits in with Comicality's storylines, but I do not think that the flashback did. I could be wrong, but I do not remember any flashbacks in his stories. I also sense trouble from the elders. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
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    A great chapter! I thoroughly enjoy this story, and I look forward to reading more.
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    An exciting chapter! It looks like Adrian will become a vampire after all.
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    Wow, there is a lot to assimilate in this chapter! Keep up the good work. I look forward to seeing how things turn out. Will Adrian become a vampire? Only time will tell.
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    I feel sorry for Adrian. His parents are neglectful and do not seem to care about him.
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    A wonderful beginning to a new story. I've looked forward to more installments. Keep up the good work.
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    First Days

    Lutheros commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in First Days

    A Great first chapter. I look forward to reading more.
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    I love this story! I can hardly wait for the next chapter. I am thinking about starting over from chapter one again🙂
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    Prologue

    Lutheros commented on Painawakened's story chapter in Prologue

    This was an interesting prologue to a story. I will read on to see where it goes from here.
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    I was right, it was Shiloh! Now that I am caught up, I can hardly wait for chapter 8.
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    My money is on Shiloh with the blue eyes. I am loving this story so far, but I really wish the chapters were longer.
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    You are off to a good start. I'm looking forward to more.
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    Aberration

    Lutheros commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Aberration

    I have been checking daily for a new chapter. Although this chapter may have been a little shorter than average, it was still worth the wait. Thank you for providing a new chapter to this story. I am already looking forward to the next one🙂
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    hey Jeff, I love this story! I have been waiting for the next chapter for three weeks now, and I feel like I am going through withdrawals. I hope everything is fine with you. I am looking forward to the next chapters of this story.
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    Chapter 5

    Lutheros commented on LittleBuddhaTW's story chapter in Chapter 5

    Nick should make the next move and kiss Jack. Jack says he does not know how to act, so maybe Nick should show him.
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