Lutheros

This story is coming along well. Kurtis and Tony seem to be getting on well together, and I look forward to reading about Christmas dinner. I am wondering if Tony might be gay or bisexual, as he seemed to accept Kurtis without question. The only problem that I have with this story is that the chapters are too short🙂but seriously, I am enjoying reading this story so far.

A great second chapter! This story is really fast-paced, and I hope it continues to be so.

Great fast-paced first chapter. I am looking forward to chapter two.

This Story has the makings of something more. The author might consider expanding this into a full story. I would like to read a longer story with this short story as a premise. Maybe build on Leo and Kenny's relationship going forward.

I still find this story interesting, but frustrating. Such short chapters! I almost want to pause for a year before coming back to this story and reading the chapters to catch up. Kidding! Sort of! Maybe?

Did not mean to imply that there is anything wrong with the flashbacks; I just wanted to note that it was a deviation from Comicality's style. There is nothing wrong with using flashbacks in a story, in my opinion. I am still looking forward to reading the next chapters.

Well, an interesting chapter. The nightclub fits in with Comicality's storylines, but I do not think that the flashback did. I could be wrong, but I do not remember any flashbacks in his stories. I also sense trouble from the elders. I am looking forward to the next chapter.

A great chapter! I thoroughly enjoy this story, and I look forward to reading more.

An exciting chapter! It looks like Adrian will become a vampire after all.

Wow, there is a lot to assimilate in this chapter! Keep up the good work. I look forward to seeing how things turn out. Will Adrian become a vampire? Only time will tell.

I feel sorry for Adrian. His parents are neglectful and do not seem to care about him.

A wonderful beginning to a new story. I've looked forward to more installments. Keep up the good work.

A Great first chapter. I look forward to reading more.

I love this story! I can hardly wait for the next chapter. I am thinking about starting over from chapter one again🙂

This was an interesting prologue to a story. I will read on to see where it goes from here.