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Being taken roughly? Are the boys growing up? ;-) what's next? JAR
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This disturbing take on the M/M werewolf genre continues 7 months after book 2 (MetaOrigins). Kinky sex, non-traditional wolves (a semi-submissive alpha, cocky betas and illoyal enforcers), a Meta, disturbing twists and a stream of conniving vampires, human assassins and uppity wolves – only outdone by a queen. -- It is advisable to read books 1 and 2 (Meta and MetaOrigins) before book3 and MetaPrompts in parallel. - http://www.gayauthors.org/forums/topic/40241-metaseries-ranting/
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Must have missed this some days ago. Need to recover now from the overdose of sugar ;-). So will you send the gay European Santa to me. Could be inspired by s(k)inter claas ... Was sweet. JAR
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Cliffhanger!!!!! I know what to say next time you point that out to me
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Carlos, Menage a trois in a oasis in the middle of the desert Earth has become. Very romantic (for me), very sexy (we know your type of men), and very cleverly spun (jumping back and forth in time). Can we expect a sequel. For some reason I feel your characters might get bored in their little oasis and go out and explore again. what would be their adventures? Thanks! JAR
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Tim, Team Rob is indeed pleased. Rob is single; he stood up to his beliefs even if it meant to be "grounded" (good luck in grounding Rob). Looking forward to who is going to end up with ;-). JAR PS Only on comment on the whole education discussion in the forum: Parents have no clue; and everyone one's that until they become parents ;-). -
Quinto 195806.49 & Chelsea 31 December 2015
JohnAR commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Quinto 195806.49 & Chelsea 31 December 2015
Thanks giving me a happy ending. JAR -
Prompt 199 Here we go again!
JohnAR commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 199 Here we go again!
Irritable1, I have to disagree ;-). Rob is just to adorable ;-). JAR -
I love that you vary the type of loss (lovers, brother, fathers), but I am not sure yet about your explanation. Does this mean Solcar's punishment is not only to suffer but make other people suffer? JAR
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Carlos, I am in the midst of my 5th Meta book detailing all the suffering Colt had to go through to get where he is now. BUT THAT IS NOTHING compared to what you do to your main character. It is a miracle he can still fall in love again. It is even a miracle he is still sane. But it also shows the power to men can develop emotionally with each other. I am normally not a HEA guy, but please can I have one in this case? Please? Please? Thanks, JAR (and I will come back on the male pregnancy aspect)
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Prompt 332 Try it again, and I will kill you!
JohnAR commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 332 Try it again, and I will kill you!
This proves that Rob is not only the older and stronger brother but also the smarter ;-). I think you have what they call a 'break-out' character ... maybe Rob deserves a spin-off? I can create another cartoon if needed ... I missed that 'headS' - gorgeous. I am sure mum missed as well though. So Rob is not only order, stronger, smarter but also incredibly funny. Can I keep him? JAR -
Prompt 328 You expect me to believe that? (I)
JohnAR commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 328 You expect me to believe that? (I)
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Mmmmh. Why 1889? Interesting perspective on King Arthur ;-). JAR
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Prompt 344 Why didn’t you just tell me that?
JohnAR commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 344 Why didn’t you just tell me that?
I agree with Jaro. It is time for Rob and Jasper to take things into their "straight" hands ;-), a bit of testosterone should speed things up (Tim, see what you've done to me?). JAR Ceterum Censeo: More about Rob! -
How could you break my heart with this? JAR
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I read it the other way ... the cousin was Soclar. (I like my version better ;-). J.A.R.
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I love the cousin's courage to walk away from unfulfilled love. Lots of great pieces of art and important discoveries were made that way. I hope Olaf dies of a broken heart quickly - and will be forgotten equally quickly. J.A.R.
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Prompt 356 Since when do I have to tell you everything?
JohnAR commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 356 Since when do I have to tell you everything?
I love Rob even more now. You are sure he's straight? ;-) JAR -
Prompt 213 You want me to do what?
JohnAR commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 213 You want me to do what?
Tim, about your MC: How can it be that a guy who stands up to a straight jock and brags with his sexual prowess, becomes a girl when asking a boy from the drama club for a date? I was hoping for more aggressiveness ;-). Even asking the jock for a date just for the fun of it ;-) And going through with it, until the jock chickens out ... JAR -
Prompt 352 I can’t believe you asked him that!
JohnAR commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 352 I can’t believe you asked him that!
Tim, sweet. Stupid jock brothers, embarrassed mouthy main character (overstating his sexual prowess), a surprise happy ending and the ingenious use of the prompt phrase. I loved it (and Bob who I will borrow as a character from you in another story). JAR -
Quinto 195804.23 & Chelsea 2014
JohnAR commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Quinto 195804.23 & Chelsea 2014
Lowest form of intelligent life? Reminds me of Hitchhiker's Guide ;-). Wonder what you hero did to deserve that punishment ... shave? ;-) -
Nice play with my emotions. Intrigued about the 5000 years thought. And excited about tall red haired bottoms ;-). Looking forward to chapter 4. JAR
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Mysterious, mysterious ... teasing! J.A.R. ;-)
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Metajinx, I love the fact you don't go for immediate romance and mating - though it is still immediate sexual attraction ;-). Looking forward to see how your dominant wolf is going to woe the submissive ... J.A.R. PS. Interesting profile name ... Did I jinx it? (Lol)
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... I know I am a bit unique ... but your little references to the "dark side" of the boys makes me positively itchy. I do like wholesome Nordic, though ;-). Leaving before you other readers kick me out for making things "dirty" ;-). J.A.R.
