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Kayden kissed each one of Damien's bruises and cuts every night as he smoothed his hands over his master's skin, causing his master to arch under him. Kayden loved the little noises that he elicited from his master each time his breath tickled over a sensitive spot--the curve of his spine, the v of his hip bone, the top of his thigh. Each night Kayden had begun massaging his master's sore muscles, which had tightened and stiffened in the fall from his beloved horse. John had provided a sm
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Keep in mind that reviews older than 10/11/14 when I did the update are referring to the OLD chapters. That is the only downside to updating like this instead of deleting and reposting--the reviews are still there for the original version, but now they don't match up to the chapters. I should probably go into the chapter notes and say which of the old chapters it matches up to, for those who what to read what other write about each chapter... Sorry for the confusion.
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I'm glad you are coming back after the rewrite to read it. I look forward to seeing how you like the changes.
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Thank you for your reviews of the first 7 chapters! I'm so glad you are enjoying it.
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Kayden had hovered cautiously at the edge of the bed that night, afraid to cause his master any pain. Ysmenia had given Damien some of the pain medication that Kayden had taken after the whipping, so his master was flitting in and out of consciousness. "Come here, kitten," Damien growled softly, wanting the boy closer. "Did you have fun outside with Ellis?" Kayden nodded, with a slight smile, but then frowned down at his master's bruised body, wishing he could take away the pain. Ka
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I'm glad you enjoyed the scene. I basically went back to the beginning and reworked to the story to flesh out the characters, giving more background and hopefully more depth to them. So while a majority of the story is still the same, there are more scenes (especially interactions between Kayden and Damien). Even within the original chapters, some scenes have changed somewhat especially with the addition of Geoff Brenner. So to get the full effect of the revised version, it is best to re-read it. I hope that makes sense.
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Within the next week, Kayden was back to his old routine of mostly following Damien around, lounging in his office while he worked, perching next to him at mealtimes--if it were just him and Harrison. He returned to his place on the floor at his master's side if others were present out of propriety. They shared breakfast in their room most mornings, although it was mostly too cold yet most mornings for the balcony. They would eat at the fire or even occasionally in the bed. Sometimes,
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Yes, it was complete. However, based on the many wonderful reviewers asking questions and desiring more interaction between characters, I rewrote it and decided to share the rewrite with those who may be interested in reading the revised version. It is the same basic story, but with more background and sceness of growth in the characters, hopefully explaining better the Character reactions to certain situations. So it's the same story, just better. If you've read it before, you could skim over the familiar
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Yes, it was complete. However, based on the many wonderful reviewers asking questions and desiring more interaction between characters, I rewrote it and decided to share the rewrite with those whomay be interested in reading the revised version. It is the same basic story, but with more background and sceness of growth in the characters, hopefully explaining better the Character reactions to certain situations. So it's the same story, just better. If you've read it before, you could skim over the familiar
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Damien came back in the room to hear the water running in the washroom. He stepped over to the open door and saw Kayden standing over the tub, watching the water swirling as it filled the tub. The boy stood in just his light sleeping pants; the bandages on his back were gone now. He smiled at the boy's innocent curiosity of the movement of the water. He also liked to watch the toilet flush. It was the slight tilt of the boy's head, a small frown creasing his brow, that had Damien grinni
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Thanks for reading so far. I hope you enjoy the rest!
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Wow! thank you for all your reviews, and I'm so glad it caught your attention and was able to keep it! Thank for reading and reviewing!
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Thank you so much for reading it!
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hehehe, thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I have had several requests for a sequel so I'm am definitely considering it now! Thanks for the encouragement!
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Wow, thanks for commenting as you read. It's nice to hear other peoples impressions of the chapters!
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Hehe, it is nice to be able to read it all at once! I'm so glad you liked it, enough to want a sequel... I'm starting to think about that.
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Hehe, it is nice to be able to read it all at once! I'm so glad you liked it, enough to want a sequel... I'm starting to think about that.
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Many people have definitely got me considering it now! Thanks for reading!
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Glad you are still enjoying it. I find I like to reveal some character traits through dialogue. Hope you enjoy the rest!
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Thank you for all your reviews and comments throughout the posting of this story. I'm so glad you liked it!
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That's definitely an idea! I'll have to check that out. Thank you so much.
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LOL! I'm so glad you like it! Actually, several people have asked about that, so I'm thinking about it... Thank you!
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Glad you enjoyed it. Hope you enjoy the last couple chapters and thank you for all your reviews!
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Thank you. I tend not to start posting a story until it's pretty much done and I've re-read it a couple times for content and errors (I change too much in earlier chapters as I go along!), which in this story I added 5 chapters from the original first draft... Thank you for reading, hope you enjoy the ending!
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Thank you! Hope you enjoy the epilogue.
