TheFoxxehAssassin

After I spent most of the morning and early afternoon being consoled by my two best friends, it was time for me to start packing my things for my release. I hadn't yet taken any kind of shower, as the entire morning had been filled with antics and...well, sadness. I knew I wasn't in the best-looking shape at the moment; my hair was messy, my clothes needed washing, and I probably smelled a bit funny. Not that anyone actually cared; most of them were talking to walls anyway. “How abo

Haunting is right; I certainly hope I never cause anyone to feel this way. I empathize with the main character; I couldn't live with myself if I caused someone this much pain. Great writing.

This is such a sweet story with a nice ending. It sure would be nice if everyone reacted this way to their kids' telling them that they're gay (without the attempted suicide of course).

You have an excellent control over your verse and rhyme scheme; you're able to retain the structure and format while making it flow naturally. The story itself was just heartbreaking. Definitely brought a tear to my eye.

Just one more time, I wish I could say it... It was a sweet and sunny day outside. Clouds lazed along the bright blue horizon. Somewhere, a couple was having wedding pictures taken against a perfectly picturesque landscape. A family was enjoying a picnic in the park. Friends were playing a game of ultimate frisbee. All of this was happening, somewhere, while I remained in my little stasis cell. My confinement. My home. “Early bird catches the worm, Nick,” my roommate

After a series of tragedies occurs in his life, a young boy named Nick ends up institutionalized. He rediscovers a purpose in life, through friendship and romance, but must face the harsh realities of his past coming back to haunt him.