ChrisTheBlizzard

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The elevator dinged softly as it reached the 22nd floor. The only thoughts in my mind were of what I was about to do… who I was about to do. Who I was, in fact, doing before being called to an emergency meeting which had basically nothing to do with me and I would have skipped if my colleague had not insisted my input was valuable, the old suck-up. I opened the door to the apartment quietly, before I remembered the precautions I had taken and threw the keys into the bowl on the shoe-rack and to

After work comes play, and oh what fun that can be...

Baby steps for Jason, baby steps!

Thank you very much! Authenticity and believable character progression is something I value very much in stories I read, so I hope I'm doing OK at it, too! Thanks for reading!

Thank you very much! Authenticity and believable character progression is something I value very much in stories I read, so I hope I'm doing OK at it, too! Thanks for reading!

The rest of the day was just as tense as its start. Matt didn't acknowledge my existence, much less talk to me. When we had spaghetti for dinner, the mood was decidedly cooler than usual, though all three of the Benets were doing their best to raise the chilling temperature. Matt, however, was having none of it and after eating as quickly as possible, excused himself to go back to our room. Henry shot me a questioning glance which starkly reminded me of how similar he and Mike were, both in look

"Well, at least I don't need to worry about getting a partner." I thought as I looked over the material Brandon and I were assigned to present to the class at a later date. Apparently I had been slightly wrong when I thought the main focus of the presentation would be cell division; apparently the entire life-cycle of a cell was to be examined, by different groups. My blunder might as well have been prophetic, for our part would be mitosis, aka cell division in scientific terms. I looked through

Friday at school passed by fairly quickly and soon it was time to go to the mall to meet Mike’s friends. The only thing worth mentioning was our biology teacher assigning some group-presentations on the subject of cell division. I didn't have a partner yet, but I figured whoever I worked with would just let me do the work and earn an easy A. Biology always came easily to me, as did all sciences. Since class was almost over, we hadn't gotten the chance to form groups yet, but the possible subject

The rest of my first day at school was, thankfully, uneventful. I met up with Matt for lunch and the mystery meat sandwich we had was edible, though not quite what anyone would call tasty. I was startled to find I had 3 more classes with “Brandon”. I mean, wow, 5 out of 7. Overlapping schedules like ours were so unlikely, considering how huge this school was, it bordered on planned. He made no other attempt at approaching me, for which I was grateful. It’s not like I enjoy being an ass toward p

First of all, thank you very much for reading!I wanted to show a specific discrepancy in his behavior; He can be kind if he is in a situation in which he is the aggressor, the one calling the shots. When he is being approached by others, though, he throws up all defenses imaginable in an effort to ward people off and detach himself. As to why and how he turned out the way he has... Read and find out!

“Mike, Jason, Matt, do you have your bags?“ Janie asked us, in a rush. Apparently she was late to work this morning, or so I assumed. I was packed and ready to go. Ms. Fitzgerald, bless her heart, had registered Matt and me at the new school on Friday, before we met Janie or moved here. That meant instead of getting a couple lazy days, as I had hoped, after only a day of getting to know the Benets, we were going to go to school. I would be a junior and Matt would be a freshman. At least we were

I just want to let you know that I TREMENDOUSLY enjoyed the story (so far). You really have a way of weaving a plot together and I believe you are really talented. Please continue the story soon, I am extremely curious how this whole thing is going to play out. Thank you very much for writing this story!

Thank you very much! I plan to keep on writing it I hope I get better at it with time.

Thank you very much for reading it! I will look into it. Dialogue is the thing I struggled with the most, so that will hopefully help me.