AquariusGuy
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Yes we will learn who was banging on the door. I will give this spoiler he had hand surgery. Jonah is going to get a surprise… it won’t be Brody though. Someone else shows up.
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Jonas was mentioned in a previous chapter as the person responsible for killing Noah. He was in rehab and we will flush out how Noah died. Mattie is a little in the dark and doesn’t seem to realize Brody loves him. He will see that very soon and maybe a surprise or two how. We know he has scars on his hands and Hastings got a beating. Makes you wonder. yeah I wanted to do something different from my last few stories. I was inspired by a friend whose also a writer and may have borrowed his viral video idea.
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all will be revealed.
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“Brody?” I croaked. I really needed to figured out why my brothers best friend was here and why did it look like he’d been crying. “Mattie?” he seemed a bit shocked. “I thought you were sleeping.” “Water.” My throat was dryer than the Sahara. Brody jumped up, ran out and brought someone back with him. “Sleeping Beauty,” the Doctor said with a smile. “You asked for some water?” I nodded my head in the affirmative and in walked a person I assumed was a nurse with a cup. “M
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We have a strict no return policy and Hastings is going/has gone down. @Wesley8890doesn't know the difference between a tomato and a potato.
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So all the above will be addressed next chapter. Some hints: Read the description of the story. Re-read the chapter.
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Make that Principal.... but yeah
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When we arrived dad had to fight through the reporters flanking the car trying to get our attention. “Oh look Principal Hastings is giving some kind of interview,” I said and slouched back further in my seat. “Trying to control the narrative, most likely,” Dad said rolling his window down. “Paul you won’t ticket me will you? Need to run Matt inside.” “I charge by the minute Nate,” Mr. Baker said with a laugh. I didn’t get the joke but both my parents joined in with laughter,
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Well who did she text and what did they see??? Inquiring minds want to know.
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That’s TJ company…..
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Sure did.... I think the other's didn't read my last stories
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Winner winner chicken dinner... you caught who Mom works for and is family run... makes you go hmmmm. Not sure on the hugs... when I am in bed sometimes I feel a cat near by kneading the bed and purring and then laying down. Funny thing is I don't have a cat. We had cats growing up so I feel like its one there to protect me. I can say Ron had a sister IRL, but this is a small little plot story that will make you feel good. It was all innocent stuff. When you are close to someone it can be hard to see them date and sometimes while you may like/love who they are dating you drive them away.
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Nope... I'm going to see if @weinerdogcaught it.
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Yeah the brother's have some issues but don't worry they will come around... at least I hope. Yes, Luke is a prick and will be replaced. I am surprised... both you and @Wesley8890 missed something in the last part of the chapter... I figured one of you would catch it.
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Yeah he won't be around much longer.
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The whole night was a blur with the media outside the house. The neighbors were calling left and right to complain. Dad called Mr. Baker and he was able to work with the local Bowie police force and his county officers to clear the area in front of the house. We weren’t on a main through fair but our small side street was packed. “We moved them down to the church,” Mr. Baker said after Mom let him in. “This is just one giant cluster” mom replied while vigorously texting. “My boss is
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Sorry to make you cry. If it's any help sometimes I do get sad when I write or read other stories knowing darn well it's fiction. To me it also means I am getting to my readers which is something I want to achieve. See my response to Dr Sawzall about the therapy....
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Thanks for the comment. Principal Asshat won't go down easy.... Matt is in therapy and it will be addressed but he was hospitalized for care for a bit. We just haven't seen him in that setting. As a person who lost a sister I know what it's like when your family doesn't go to therapy. I am drawing from my experience.... here I am 7 years later and I've been in 3 years and my parents haven't gone.
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Yes it would be them.... They need to go out with a bang don't they????
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Yes things are going to get very interesting. Making the news is part of what drives a few things. More about Noah will be forth coming.
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Something will happen before Principal Asshat leaves.
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“Hey buddy, any plans tonight,” Noah asked while fixing his hair. “Nope, just staying home tonight; Mark has a date,” I replied plopping down on his bed. “So where’s the big party at tonight?” “Alice’s parents are out of town and she’s throwing a ragger. It’s going to be epic.” “When will you be home?” “I’m going to be out late. Mom lifted my curfew,” he said and turned and smiled at me. “Lucky. It’s not like I have that many friends anyhow,” a tear escaped my eye.
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@chris191070 I need to amend this... they know each other but Mattie has no idea this person is head over heals for him.
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I am basing this off of where I used to live and sort of how things were then, which is very similar to now. A lot of staff stuck together and you could do no wrong. There was a teacher who got so tired of the administration turning a blind eye to things that she actually choked a student to the point he blacked out. She quit same day. After some shit hits the fan and Mattie and future man meet, things will get better and some people will be shown the door.
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I just mentioned in my response to Mikedup that is will get semi dark... but not too dark.
