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  1. AquariusGuy

    Chapter 13

    So he doesn't pass go and collect $200? He definitely doesn't have a get out of jail free card. Nathan did treat Mattie horrible and he really had no idea what was going on. It's going to effect everyone.
  2. AquariusGuy

    Chapter 13

    It's the beginning of a healing for Nathan. His concussion he suffered caused some issues that are going to affect him more than they normally would. Matt and Brody are going to have a bit of fun.... Uncle Ted is an instigator.
  3. AquariusGuy

    Chapter 13

    Whatever do you mean not in a normal business. Sure sounds normal to me... his dad is an architect and has a construction company and his mom runs a security business. The reference may or may not be covered in a future chapter.
  4. AquariusGuy

    Chapter 13

    ok... I'll give you a pass then.
  5. AquariusGuy

    Chapter 13

    Is that really all you have to say? Come on @Wesley8890. You hate Nate...
  6. AquariusGuy

    Chapter 13

    I awoke to find a strong pair of arms wrapped around me. Where was I? I struggled to turn my body as these arms were wrapped tight around me. I got my head turned enough to discover they were Brody’s arms. I look around for clues as to where I was and could hear the sound of my parents favorite late night show host and knew instantly I must be in one of the upstairs rooms. I finally broke free from Brody grasp and crept down the stairs to find my parents both asleep in front of the TV. “Mom
  7. AquariusGuy

    Chapter 12

    I see what you are saying and I think to give everyone a better understanding of Nathan he should have either be part of a chapter as narrator or a full chapter. We will find out more about him but he won’t do anything more drastic than he’s done. I may and try to find sometime to write tonight or it won’t be till Friday. thank you for you comment. Keeps me on my toes with plot holes or perceived asshats
  8. AquariusGuy

    Chapter 12

    Oh next two days are out…. I have to go on base.
  9. AquariusGuy

    Chapter 12

    He gives me work to do and I usually don’t write during work.
  10. AquariusGuy

    Chapter 12

    I've got it partially written... My boss is out this week and I've got nothing but time on my hands.
  11. AquariusGuy

    Chapter 12

    He's my psycho. I shared some of these chapters with a friend and he told me I am mental. I guess I achieved what I wanted for Nathan. He will come back changed but there is no amount of groveling he can do to fix what he's destroyed. I toyed with bringing some of the family in to help but I chose not to. So I can say there is no hospital... or explosion. There is however
  12. AquariusGuy

    Chapter 12

    Nathan is going to see Emerson and a bit surprised that my regular's didn't even bat an eye at that name. He is going to get help but we won't see that unless I decide to do an off shoot about Nathan and his time at the farm. His temper is out of control and he will be whisked away... and I mean in a plane not with a whisk.
  13. AquariusGuy

    Chapter 12

    Very true as the relationship is changed forever. We won't see what happens where Nathan has gone but he will come back changed.
  14. AquariusGuy

    Chapter 12

    Right now he's just a The brothers will have made amends by the end of the story but it will never be perfect and never was. Crumpling to the floor you ask? The cause? Hm.... you know me could be any reason. An explosion? A mental breakdown? a bat to the head? Something else in it's entirety? Hm... haven't decided yet.
  15. AquariusGuy

    Chapter 12

    Guess you were right... or is @weinerdog and this brain tumor.
  16. AquariusGuy

    Chapter 12

    I guess you could say Nathan and I talked, it was more so him talking and me listening. He was struggling with being bisexual and of course Brody was his obvious choice to experiment with. I sat there arms crossed the whole time and glared at him. “I am jealous of your relationship with Noah.” I scoffed, “Funny way to show it. You’ve always treated me like trash even before I came out. Never once did you show an interest in me.” “That’s what brother’s do, especially older brother
  17. AquariusGuy

    Chapter 11

    you'll just have to wait and see what happens
  18. AquariusGuy

    Chapter 11

    I am glad you are enjoying the story. I am trying to keep things interesting and not so cookie cutter. My stories are usually anything but that. Watch out for my cliff's though... there can be some real doozies.
  19. AquariusGuy

    Chapter 11

    You should try it... if it has been slow cooking for 24 hours.... The next chapter is going to be very interesting and may include someone getting a black eye.
  20. AquariusGuy

    Chapter 11

    Things are going to look up after the brothers have a talk. Asher realized before anyone else what was going on but Ron also hinted at the struggle. Nathan was not as close to Noah or any of his brothers so there maybe a tinge of jealousy there. Glad to find another cabbage lover.
  21. AquariusGuy

    Chapter 11

    I think you mean Matt and Brody but there is an apology coming. It is going to be a bit before all is kosher between the brothers. Noah Jr. is defiantly good for Matt. Stuffed cabbage is wonderful, it's just the smell of boiled cabbage that is the stinker. You have to boil the cabbage to peel the leaves to make the rolls. It really is delcious.
  22. AquariusGuy

    Chapter 11

    Boiled cabbage stinks... I make this when I have a lot of time on my hands. It's one of my favorite dishes. Noah Jr is an interesting character. Not sure where he's going yet. hmmm... checks notes
  23. AquariusGuy

    Chapter 11

    I hinted at the issue. The brothers will start to heal soon and I mean like next chapter soon.
  24. AquariusGuy

    Chapter 11

    I was in the hospital for two more days. Liz was very worried about my anger towards Mark and wanted to make sure I wasn’t going to do anything stupid. The nice thing was Brody was there every day after his classes. He made sure to do whatever course work and talk with me while he visits. I found out later that Nathan had come to talk with me but when he saw Brody in there he left. The drive home from the hospital was pretty boring. Route 50 leaving D.C. isn’t a scenic route and we took it
  25. AquariusGuy

    Chapter 10

    Matt and Brody do have some good times ahead. As for the bet, they needed to pull something off (ummm not that). The Jacobs are very understanding parents and we will see a little more shenanigans from them.
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