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  1. AquariusGuy

    Chapter 10

    While Mark stood in the doorway I had a whole bunch of emotions run through me with the main one being anger. “What are you doing here Mark?” I said acidly. “um, I came to apologize.” “Really? You sure you aren’t looking for your next video?” “Hear him out,” Mr. Baker said pushing Mark into the room. “I’m here to make sure things remain civil between you.” “I’m not sure that is possible,” I said as Liz walked in. Mr. Baker made introductions and Liz watched my expre
  2. AquariusGuy

    Chapter 9

    Don't forget he had a concussion. He will be dealing with some lingering effects and may have had some issues from his suicide attempt.
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    Chapter 9

    Notice 2 couples HINT HINT I'm a blank slate
  4. AquariusGuy

    Chapter 9

    Nathan will… Yes, Brody is in love with Matt. As for what’s in-store for Nathan and his love life
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    Chapter 9

    Why is that? I can tell you.... Also Blank and Blank become a couple So do Blank and Blank Maybe the brothers could That's a whole lot of nothing
  6. AquariusGuy

    Chapter 9

    “What the fuck is your problem Nathan,” I was fuming. “Boy’s what is going on,” Dad said as he entered the room. “Your mother is down the hall consoling Brody.” “He and Nathan got into it and Brody slugged him,” I said while glaring at my brother, who was going to have quite the bruise. “Nathan, care to explain yourself,” Mom said coming into the room. “No,” Nathan replied barely above a whisper. “You’ve been friends with Brody for years, your uncle is gay, I just don’t
  7. AquariusGuy

    Chapter 8

    I do understand what you are saying. Just remember that Brody is a teenager and sometimes they don't think before they act. There is a reason for Nathan's hostility towards Brody and Mattie and we are going to dive into it. The dysfunction comes as not all families are perfect (speaking from my own point of view). It also adds to the story as it keeps it interesting and makes you realize that sometimes there are crazier people than you out there. I ask that you continue to give the story a chance and remember this: Brody hasn't come out to Nathan and Nathan knows that Brody is in love with his brother. Is there jealousy or maybe something else entirely. Honestly, I am teetering on why Nathan's hostile and I know I need to make it worthy of why he's being obnoxious.
  8. AquariusGuy

    Chapter 8

    Nathan is going to come around... I am just trying to sort a few things out on how. Hastings is going to be in jail for a very long time. He's already got a life sentence for attacking Mattie. Noah Jr was a bit of a surprise for me. I wanted to come up with something that will help get Mattie over a hump in his depression.
  9. AquariusGuy

    Chapter 8

    @Wesley8890is mad at Nathan and his asshattery behavior. Brody and Matt were getting somewhere before the cock blocker came in. Matt goes home soon and let's just say they will connect and I mean Matt and Brody. Brody's fist might connect with Nathan a few more times. No one is coming back... I toyed with a bit of a cross of TJ/Tristan but chose not to. I've made some connections to them but will leave it at that. Noah Jr. is going to help Mattie with some of his depression as Noah will have some of Noah's genetic habits. He could have Asher beat his ass but I got a plan that I was going to start on but ended this chapter with some violence.
  10. AquariusGuy

    Chapter 8

    Its Brudder and don't you forget that.
  11. AquariusGuy

    Chapter 8

    it's his brother... so yeah off the list. Nathan's a bit full of himself.
  12. AquariusGuy

    Chapter 8

    I couldn’t work up the nerve to tell Brody that I like him too and he stayed silent on it too. Mom and dad told me that Hastings was appealing his sentence on the grounds of new evidence and that evidence actually was going to get him locked up even longer. It turns out that he had installed cameras in the boy’s bathrooms to “protect the students”. The State’s Attorney pointed out that they were just in the boys bathrooms and if it was meant to “protect the students” that should be in both
  13. AquariusGuy

    Chapter 7

    You just gave me an idea for Hastings appeal case....
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    Chapter 7

    He may pop up again Me in a few days...
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    Chapter 7

    This could be future or past but as far as I know there has been no Asher as a child. Not sure if the nerd in you picked this up.... Asher, Brody and Chase (ABC). The you have Nathaniel and Megan Jacobs with Noah, Nathan, Mattie and Nick. He's out of his coma and medicine in my world works miracles. That's actually what I was going for with the boot to the crotch. Side note: I grew up in Bowie which is why I talk about it so easy and yes the Fairwood Turf Farm was real. The sold grass and by grass I mean turf. It was sold and they put mansion on there and a lot of them went into foreclosure during the housing crisis/bubble in the early 2000's. My sister(s) spent time at Children's National and one was in the pysch ward. I grew up a Redskin's fan not so hip on the Commanders. There were some better name choices.
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    Chapter 7

    Mr. Jacobs was wearing steel toe boots. He's and architect and contractor so a kick to the nads wouldn't be ideal. Not that it ever is. Two nervous boys... Also begs the question do Nick and Nathan know?
  17. AquariusGuy

    Chapter 7

    What happens when two nervous people meet? More nervousness. Matt is doing better and will be discharged. Jonah will face something for his actions relatively soon.
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    Chapter 7

    Yeah I had to google it as I wanted to use a different term. Happy Birthday to you.
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    Chapter 7

    Why is Jonah here? My head started to hurt and I remembered the night Noah died. Jonah and Noah left the party at Alice’s house on the old Fairwood Turf Farm. Jonah had a few too many drinks that night and since it was dark he was confused and turned right coming on to Church Rd instead of going left. He made it down past Tall Oaks Vocational School into the curvy section of the road. They were traveling at a high rate of speed and Jonah missed a curve and the car went up part of the hill,
  20. AquariusGuy

    Chapter 6

    So I typoed and it is Jonah next to him. Noah is not the surprise. It is someone we haven't met yet. I was thinking of the dad from Not quite human on Disney Jonas Carson played by Alan Thick.
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    Chapter 6

    Yes we will learn who was banging on the door. I will give this spoiler he had hand surgery. Jonah is going to get a surprise… it won’t be Brody though. Someone else shows up.
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    Chapter 6

    Jonas was mentioned in a previous chapter as the person responsible for killing Noah. He was in rehab and we will flush out how Noah died. Mattie is a little in the dark and doesn’t seem to realize Brody loves him. He will see that very soon and maybe a surprise or two how. We know he has scars on his hands and Hastings got a beating. Makes you wonder. yeah I wanted to do something different from my last few stories. I was inspired by a friend whose also a writer and may have borrowed his viral video idea.
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    Chapter 6

    all will be revealed.
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    Chapter 6

    “Brody?” I croaked. I really needed to figured out why my brothers best friend was here and why did it look like he’d been crying. “Mattie?” he seemed a bit shocked. “I thought you were sleeping.” “Water.” My throat was dryer than the Sahara. Brody jumped up, ran out and brought someone back with him. “Sleeping Beauty,” the Doctor said with a smile. “You asked for some water?” I nodded my head in the affirmative and in walked a person I assumed was a nurse with a cup. “M
  25. AquariusGuy

    Chapter 5

    We have a strict no return policy and Hastings is going/has gone down. @Wesley8890doesn't know the difference between a tomato and a potato.
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