AquariusGuy
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He's hidden it... someone else other that is not Hunter knows and holds the key to fix it.
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No Sir..... can't do that to Tristan.
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A little foreshadowing you may have missed: I spent the next couple of days with Xander, and he was the only one who knew I was still getting headaches. He told me to tell TJ and Jackson, but I refused as I didn't need their meddling.
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Tristan's POV Jackson was busily tending to TJ after he fainted and had applied a cold compress to his head. "Is he going to be alright?" Hunter questioned. "Yeah, he just fainted," I replied. "That name is a trigger for him. They had such a good relationship until she went back to using," Jackson growled. "She was not good for him, and I made sure she went away permanently," I said with disgust. Grandpa's Jack and Tony arrived with Mack in tow. "Sorry it took so lon
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he protects his family…just don’t mess with them
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Yes. She is dead but she plays a part
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It was Hunter asking…
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Yes everything becomes invisible. There will be some surprises
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Well it’s is isn’t?
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I said it would be diabolical 😈
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Hunter's POV I had been waiting for this opportunity to present itself, and I wasn't about to let it pass. I knew I needed to stop them before they succeeded and killed my brother or, worse, my family. Let me back up and tell you how I found our bombers. I started with Mrs. Morrison and hit pay dirt. She had been sending large amounts of money to an account registered to a Pyrotechnics business owned by Plebe Hoffman's brother. My surveillance of the place paid off faster than expecte
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I like to shake things up…. What can I say
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well I've been looking for an editor or someone to help and got no where....
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I've been using grammerly and it makes a lot of corrections and I've noticed sometimes they aren't correct.
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Bombers….. it’s plural.
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Yes I will write the doctor out As long as he stays away from Hunter in the next chapter he’ll be ok
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I actually almost didn't but I didn't want shock everyone.
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you must wait 7-10 business days.
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Tristan's POV I was in the hospital for several days, and Xander was with me every day. I was bothered by the fact that I don't remember what happened, and no one would tell me either, something about it being too traumatic. I can say that TJ has been walking on eggshells and be super friendly to me, and it's pretty scary. The Doctor said I suffered a severe concussion because I shouldn't be left alone for a while at home. That was the million-dollar hot topic; you see, we can't go h
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Hunter will not be diplomatic.
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How to answer without giving it away.... we know it won't be the Judge, his son and his friend Hoffman. One person sorta was introduced but the others were not. No comma's planned in the near future.
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I have a diabolical plan in mind
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He has his methods and he will destroy them before the police figure it out.
