AquariusGuy
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Tristan’s POV I watched my brother crumble to the floor and I grew angry “What did you do” I screamed at my dad who smirked “One down 7 to go” Dad said with an evil laugh “HOW DARE YOU!” TJ screamed “He’s just a boy” “A very dead boy” Dad said grinning “You are going to get it” Grandma CC said Hunter’s POV “So now what?” I asked looking around “Hunter we need you gain strength and fight” some man who looked a lot like my dad said “Dad?” I
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So things should normal out after the next chapter.... well by normal I mean...
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How’s tomorrow afternoon sound?
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I am writing the next chapter.... like I said Plot twist is coming
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So... it's a bit of a twist and I can't say without giving it away...
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Congrats on beating @Wesley8890 OBVIOUSLY he has a life unlike what he said on the last chapter.
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Hunter’s POV I watched from the corner as the man berated Grandma and the other lady. He was pacing and kept saying “Where the hell is Jeff”. I think Grandma noticed me and she briefly smiled. “I’ll be right back; don’t do anything stupid” the man said and vanished I jumped into action and untied Grandma. “Grandma I’m glad you’re ok” I said as I quickly undid the ropes and moved to the next lady “Hunter I am so glad to see you” Grandma replied helping me “This is Emma” s
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I blame my right arm... it ain't what it used to be. I am also becoming ambidextrous again... darn private school took that from me.
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You obviously have life if you didn't you'd be dead or a politician....
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In the last chapter I revealed that the twins were impersonated. I sometimes shoot @Wesley8890. I mean I send him a heads up but this time I didn't. I'm just over here stirring my pot.
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TJ’s point of “Kevin what are you doing?” I asked while Tristan seemed shocked to see his father alive “Taking away everything he loves” Kevin replied pointing at Tristan When I figured out who was behind everything I can’t really say I was surprised as everything started to add up. “Kevin can we work something out?” I asked trying to make things easier “Not until Tristan pays for everything” Kevin said and then vanished “Darn I thought I could hold him longe
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Another favorite
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My favorite comment 🥰😘😍
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You just have to assume its me but you know what they say... makes an ass out of U and Me. Yeah been a bit inspired not sure how it will go.
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sadly it didn't happen he was the first....
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Nope... just plain old me. A person with the crazy mind. I did say a huge twist was coming and thing's weren't what they seemed Now who did Hunter kill? Was it Emma or someone else? Who pushed Tristan? Inquiring minds want to know
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TJ’s POV I vanished from Tristan’s room over to Jackson’s and was just outside and could see the doctor’s working on him “He was stable what happened” I heard a doctor ask “Everything seems fine, we need to check” the doctor was cut off by a nurse “His stats are coming back” a nurse replied “We need to figure out what happened” the doctor said coming out of the room “Is he ok?” I asked shakily “He’s not out of the woods yet” he replied walking away “Hey ba
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be prepared to beat @Wesley8890 for first read and comment.
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Well I am just about at a nice cliff so keep them eyes peeled
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Just wait for the twist coming... I am writing the new chapter which I may or may not post it tonight
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TJ’s been through hell now it’s Jackson’s turn. Things will be turned further on their head soon. You can count on that 😂
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Well I haven’t killed anyone off yet that you all love… so don’t poke the bear 😂 No flashback maybe a flash from a hot doctor? A flash mob? A camera flash? A flash bang?
